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【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【从】【幼】【儿】【园】【开】【始】【,】【手】【工】【制】【作】【课】【就】【是】【滋】【生】【我】【自】【卑】【的】【土】【壤】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【进】【入】【中】【学】【后】【,】【体】【育】【课】【又】【成】【了】【我】【自】【卑】【的】【催】【化】【剂】【,】【因】【为】【每】【次】【我】【都】【无】【法】【完】【成】【那】【些】【很】【简】【单】【的】【动】【作】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【天】【垫】【上】【课】【,】【那】【个】【黑】【脸】【的】【马】【老】【师】【终】【于】【发】【怒】【了】【,】【他】【生】【气】【地】【喝】【道】【:】【“】【站】【一】【边】【去】【,】【看】【别】【人】【怎】【么】【做】【!】【”】【我】【站】【到】【一】【边】【,】【看】【着】【同】【学】【们】【一】【个】【接】【一】【个】【地】【轻】【松】【翻】【滚】【,】【像】【一】【只】【只】【快】【乐】【的】【小】【皮】【球】【,】【而】【我】【…】【…】【我】【的】【脸】【羞】【愧】【得】【能】【冒】【出】【火】【来】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【回】【到】【家】【,】【一】【见】【到】【爸】【爸】【,】【我】【立】【即】【扑】【进】【他】【的】【怀】【里】【,】【委】【屈】【地】【哭】【了】【。】【“】【都】【是】【爸】【爸】【不】【好】【,】【把】【这】【个】【缺】【点】【传】【给】【了】【你】【。】【”】【说】【着】【,】【爸】【爸】【就】【做】【了】【一】【个】【后】【滚】【翻】【的】【动】【作】【,】【却】【怎】【么】【也】【翻】【不】【过】【去】【。】【看】【到】【爸】【爸】【滑】【稽】【的】【样】【子】【我】【“】【扑】【哧】【”】【一】【声】【笑】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【第】【二】【天】【妈】【妈】【陪】【我】【去】【学】【校】【,】【她】【说】【要】【找】【马】【老】【师】【聊】【聊】【。】【我】【赶】【紧】【制】【止】【妈】【妈】【,】【怕】【妈】【妈】【惹】【出】【麻】【烦】【。】【妈】【妈】【笑】【了】【:】【“】【我】【不】【是】【去】【责】【怪】【老】【师】【,】【只】【是】【想】【告】【诉】【他】【,】【你】【会】【慢】【慢】【赶】【上】【去】【的】【,】【让】【他】【别】【太】【着】【急】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【从】【那】【以】【后】【,】【体】【育】【课】【碰】【到】【我】【做】【不】【好】【的】【动】【作】【,】【马】【老】【师】【也】【不】【再】【强】【求】【我】【了】【,】【这】【让】【我】【暗】【自】【高】【兴】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【果】【不】【是】【我】【那】【次】【无】【意】【在】【办】【公】【室】【门】【口】【听】【到】【老】【师】【的】【对】【话】【,】【也】【许】【我】【的】【生】【活】【会】【一】【直】【平】【静】【如】【水】【。】【那】【天】【,】【我】【到】【老】【师】【办】【公】【室】【交】【作】【业】【,】【走】【到】【门】【口】【,】【听】【见】【马】【老】【师】【提】【到】【我】【的】【名】【字】【:】【“】【那】【个】【李】【旖】【旎】【啊】【,】【你】【不】【知】【道】【吗】【?】【她】【被】【诊】【断】【为】【‘】【脑】【瘫】【’】【。】【”】【“】【‘】【脑】【瘫】【’】【不】【是】【一】【种】【很】【严】【重】【的】【智】【力】【疾】【病】【吗】【?】【我】【看】【她】【智】【力】【还】【可】【以】【。】【”】【这】【是】【语】【文】【老】【师】【的】【声】【音】【。】【“】【她】【是】【轻】【微】【的】【,】【主】【要】【表】【现】【为】【动】【作】【方】【面】【的】【缺】【陷】【,】【这】【是】【听】【她】【妈】【妈】【说】【的】【…】【…】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【下】【子】【,】【我】【眼】【前】【模】【糊】【了】【,】【难】【怪】【家】【里】【有】【那】【么】【多】【关】【于】【脑】【瘫】【的】【书】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【股】【莫】【名】【的】【力】【量】【促】【使】【我】【狂】【奔】【起】【来】【,】【我】【要】【远】【离】【学】【校】【,】【远】【离】【人】【群】【,】【远】【离】【这】【个】【嘲】【弄】【我】【的】【世】【界】【。】【我】【狂】【奔】【回】【家】【,】【把】【自】【己】【关】【进】【房】【间】【里】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【最】【后】【,】【爸】【爸】【撞】【开】【了】【房】【门】【,】【从】【床】【上】【拉】【起】【了】【我】【说】【:】【“】【听】【着】【,】【李】【旖】【旎】【,】【无】【论】【发】【生】【什】【么】【事】【,】【你】【都】【不】【能】【把】【爱】【你】【的】【父】【母】【拒】【之】【门】【外】【!】【”】【“】【我】【是】【个】【脑】【瘫】【患】【者】【,】【为】【什】【么】【你】【们】【不】【告】【诉】【我】【,】【你】【们】【已】【经】【骗】【了】【我】【1】【5】【年】【,】【还】【想】【再】【骗】【我】【到】【什】【么】【时】【候】【?】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【爸】【爸】【沉】【默】【了】【一】【会】【儿】【,】【然】【后】【握】【住】【我】【的】【手】【说】【:】【“】【你】【长】【大】【了】【,】【许】【多】【事】【情】【是】【应】【该】【告】【诉】【你】【了】【。】【你】【确】【实】【是】【患】【有】【轻】【度】【脑】【瘫】【,】【我】【们】【不】【告】【诉】【你】【,】【是】【不】【想】【让】【病】【魔】【在】【你】【心】【中】【留】【下】【阴】【影】【,】【我】【们】【只】【希】【望】【你】【能】【快】【乐】【…】【…】【还】【有】【,】【爸】【爸】【再】【告】【诉】【你】【一】【个】【秘】【密】【,】【其】【实】【爸】【爸】【也】【患】【有】【轻】【度】【脑】【瘫】【。】【也】【许】【你】【不】【相】【信】【,】【但】【这】【是】【事】【实】【,】【爸】【爸】【之】【所】【以】【现】【在】【才】【告】【诉】【你】【这】【个】【秘】【密】【,】【是】【因】【为】【爸】【爸】【想】【让】【你】【知】【道】【,】【脑】【瘫】【患】【者】【也】【能】【活】【得】【精】【彩】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【是】【的】【,】【爸】【爸】【活】【得】【很】【精】【彩】【,】【在】【商】【场】【上】【叱】【咤】【风】【云】【,】【对】【一】【千】【多】【名】【员】【工】【指】【挥】【若】【定】【。】【可】【我】【对】【他】【的】【说】【法】【很】【怀】【疑】【,】【也】【许】【这】【只】【不】【过】【是】【美】【丽】【的】【谎】【言】【,】【只】【是】【为】【了】【找】【回】【我】【的】【自】【信】【。】【妈】【妈】【看】【到】【了】【我】【眼】【里】【的】【疑】【惑】【:】【“】【细】【细】【看】【,】【你】【就】【会】【发】【现】【,】【爸】【爸】【走】【路】【脚】【是】【踮】【着】【的】【,】【为】【此】【他】【曾】【经】【很】【苦】【恼】【。】【”】【“】【是】【的】【,】【我】【曾】【经】【很】【绝】【望】【,】【像】【你】【现】【在】【一】【样】【。】【后】【来】【我】【发】【现】【,】【当】【我】【忽】【略】【了】【自】【己】【的】【缺】【点】【,】【别】【人】【也】【就】【不】【会】【注】【意】【了】【!】【”】【细】【看】【下】【来】【,】【爸】【爸】【确】【实】【踮】【着】【脚】【走】【路】【。】【为】【了】【此】【事】【,】【乡】【下】【的】【奶】【奶】【也】【打】【电】【话】【,】【说】【爸】【爸】【那】【时】【的】【症】【状】【比】【我】【严】【重】【得】【多】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【真】【像】【小】【说】【里】【的】【故】【事】【,】【一】【切】【都】【是】【那】【么】【曲】【折】【离】【奇】【,】【我】【不】【得】【不】【静】【下】【心】【来】【整】【理】【自】【己】【纷】【乱】【的】【思】【绪】【。】【那】【天】【我】【得】【出】【了】【这】【样】【的】【结】【论】【:】【扬】【长】【避】【短】【,】【我】【也】【会】【像】【爸】【爸】【那】【样】【成】【功】【;】【在】【奋】【斗】【面】【前】【,】【脑】【瘫】【也】【不】【过】【是】【只】【纸】【老】【虎】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【经】【过】【这】【场】【风】【波】【的】【洗】【礼】【,】【我】【一】【下】【子】【成】【熟】【了】【许】【多】【,】【在】【生】【活】【的】【道】【路】【上】【,】【我】【重】【拾】【起】【自】【信】【,】【艰】【难】【前】【行】【,】【然】【后】【摘】【取】【了】【一】【串】【串】【硕】【果】【:】【考】【上】【了】【重】【点】【中】【学】【,】【拿】【到】【了】【不】【少】【竞】【赛】【获】【奖】【证】【书】【…】【…】【在】【父】【母】【的】【呵】【护】【与】【支】【持】【下】【,】【我】【的】【人】【生】【不】【很】【顺】【利】【却】【很】【精】【彩】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【去】【年】【暑】【假】【,】【我】【去】【了】【姑】【妈】【家】【。】【无】【事】【和】【姑】【妈】【闲】【聊】【,】【我】【谈】【到】【爸】【爸】【的】【脑】【瘫】【,】【她】【笑】【了】【起】【来】【:】【“】【你】【爸】【?】【他】【什】【么】【病】【也】【没】【有】【,】【小】【时】【候】【可】【顽】【皮】【了】【!】【”】【“】【那】【为】【什】【么】【爸】【爸】【走】【路】【总】【有】【点】【踮】【脚】【,】【那】【可】【是】【脑】【瘫】【的】【症】【状】【。】【”】【“】【他】【踮】【脚】【吗】【?】【不】【可】【能】【!】【不】【过】【他】【学】【踮】【脚】【尖】【走】【路】【倒】【学】【得】【蛮】【像】【的】【,】【他】【那】【个】【模】【样】【最】【笑】【人】【了】【!】【”】【姑】【妈】【沉】【浸】【在】【对】【往】【事】【的】【回】【忆】【里】【,】【而】【我】【却】【怔】【在】【姑】【妈】【的】【笑】【容】【中】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【时】【我】【才】【体】【会】【到】【父】【母】【的】【良】【苦】【用】【心】【,】【他】【们】【用】【谎】【言】【的】【剪】【刀】【一】【次】【次】【地】【修】【剪】【掉】【我】【生】【命】【树】【上】【自】【卑】【的】【枝】【条】【,】【所】【以】【我】【的】【自】【信】【才】【得】【以】【在】【阳】【光】【下】【恣】【意】【伸】【展】【。】【我】【要】【立】【刻】【打】【电】【话】【给】【爸】【爸】【,】【告】【诉】【他】【,】【下】【次】【见】【到】【我】【的】【时】【候】【不】【必】【再】【踮】【着】【脚】【走】【路】【了】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【生】【活】【在】【父】【亲】【的】【谎】【言】【里】【的】【作】【者】【,】【丝】【毫】【没】【有】【被】【蒙】【蔽】【和】【愚】【弄】【的】【感】【觉】【,】【因】【为】【那】【是】【父】【亲】【用】【善】【意】【和】【关】【爱】【织】【成】【的】【一】【张】【网】【,】【一】【张】【具】【有】【弹】【跳】【功】【能】【的】【网】【,】【借】【网】【之】【力】【,】【作】【者】【对】【生】【活】【有】【了】【百】【折】【不】【挠】【的】【坚】【韧】【和】【游】【刃】【有】【余】【的】【跨】【越】【。】【以】【时】【间】【为】【经】【,】【以】【其】【自】【身】【的】【经】【历】【和】【相】【伴】【而】【来】【的】【思】【绪】【、】【心】【情】【为】【纬】【,】【作】【者】【将】【这】【一】【段】【“】【曲】【折】【离】【奇】【”】【的】【生】【活】【写】【得】【鲜】【活】【饱】【满】【。】【文】【中】【时】【常】【跳】【跃】【出】【耐】【人】【寻】【味】【的】【哲】【理】【性】【文】【字】【,】【而】【渗】【透】【于】【文】【字】【之】【中】【的】【浓】【郁】【的】【父】【爱】【便】【跃】【然】【纸】【上】【。】【细】【节】【描】【写】【为】【文】【章】【助】【力】【不】【少】【,】【那】【一】【次】【次】【事】【件】【,】【一】【幕】【幕】【场】【景】【,】【一】【句】【句】【对】【话】【,】【俨】【然】【让】【我】【们】【置】【身】【其】【中】【,】【也】【让】【因】【爱】【而】【起】【的】【谎】【言】【变】【得】【出】【乎】【意】【料】【又】【在】【情】【理】【之】【中】【。】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【杨】【春】【芬】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【考】【试】【前】【的】【一】【个】【夜】【晚】【,】【月】【朗】【星】【稀】【,】【万】【籁】【俱】【寂】【。】【此】【刻】【还】【在】【埋】【头】【苦】【读】【的】【我】【,】【揉】【了】【揉】【疲】【倦】【的】【双】【眼】【,】【抬】【头】【看】【着】【窗】【外】【。】【如】【水】【的】【月】【光】【透】【过】【窗】【户】【,】【倾】【泻】【在】【我】【的】【身】【上】【,】【像】【一】【双】【慈】【爱】【的】【手】【轻】【柔】【地】【抚】【摸】【着】【我】【。】【是】【啊】【,】【春】【去】【秋】【来】【,】【月】【缺】【月】【圆】【,】【时】【光】【在】【流】【逝】【。】【自】【然】【万】【物】【,】【滋】【生】【衍】【变】【;】【人】【世】【沧】【桑】【,】【起】【伏】【跌】【宕】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【要】【睡】【觉】【了】【,】【我】【朝】【床】【上】【望】【去】【,】【一】【眼】【瞥】【见】【那】【只】【绣】【花】【的】【荞】【麦】【枕】【头】【,】【心】【中】【荡】【起】【了】【阵】【阵】【涟】【漪】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【是】【在】【我】【刚】【记】【事】【的】【时】【候】【奶】【奶】【给】【我】【做】【的】【。】【当】【时】【,】【我】【看】【到】【奶】【奶】【戴】【着】【老】【花】【镜】【,】【用】【那】【因】【劳】【累】【过】【度】【而】【变】【形】【的】【手】【指】【,】【一】【针】【一】【线】【细】【细】【地】【缝】【着】【。】【我】【问】【:】【“】【奶】【奶】【,】【你】【做】【什】【么】【呀】【?】【”】【奶】【奶】【神】【秘】【地】【说】【:】【“】【做】【好】【你】【就】【知】【道】【了】【。】【”】【由】【于】【我】【打】【岔】【,】【奶】【奶】【一】【不】【小】【心】【,】【针】【尖】【扎】【破】【了】【她】【的】【手】【指】【,】【但】【她】【毫】【不】【在】【意】【,】【只】【是】【把】【手】【指】【放】【在】【嘴】【里】【吮】【吸】【了】【一】【下】【,】【又】【接】【着】【做】【了】【起】【来】【。】【做】【好】【后】【,】【我】【才】【知】【道】【,】【那】【是】【一】【个】【枕】【头】【。】【奶】【奶】【让】【我】【试】【一】【试】【,】【并】【说】【,】【这】【是】【她】【费】【了】【很】【大】【工】【夫】【找】【来】【的】【荞】【麦】【皮】【做】【的】【。】【当】【天】【晚】【上】【,】【我】【枕】【着】【这】【绣】【花】【枕】【头】【,】【像】【是】【夜】【晚】【躺】【在】【柔】【软】【的】【沙】【滩】【上】【数】【着】【天】【上】【的】【星】【星】【,】【惬】【意】【极】【了】【。】【那】【种】【恬】【静】【和】【温】【柔】【,】【让】【我】【念】【念】【不】【忘】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【然】【而】【,】【我】【枕】【了】【没】【多】【久】【,】【在】【枕】【头】【的】【开】【缝】【处】【撒】【出】【了】【一】【些】【荞】【麦】【皮】【,】【弄】【得】【我】【脖】【子】【痒】【痒】【的】【,】【难】【受】【极】【了】【。】【我】【一】【气】【之】【下】【,】【把】【它】【扔】【在】【了】【一】【边】【,】【再】【也】【不】【用】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【时】【光】【飞】【逝】【,】【我】【一】【天】【天】【长】【大】【,】【奶】【奶】【却】【一】【天】【天】【变】【老】【了】【。】【去】【年】【夏】【天】【,】【她】【不】【幸】【身】【染】【重】【病】【,】【我】【和】【妈】【妈】【到】【医】【院】【看】【望】【她】【。】【走】【进】【病】【房】【,】【听】【到】【我】【的】【声】【音】【,】【她】【睁】【开】【眼】【,】【拉】【着】【我】【的】【手】【说】【:】【“】【孩】【子】【,】【要】【好】【好】【学】【习】【,】【听】【爸】【爸】【妈】【妈】【的】【话】【。】【我】【给】【你】【做】【的】【那】【个】【枕】【头】【枕】【着】【还】【舒】【服】【吗】【?】【”】【我】【无】【语】【,】【任】【由】【泪】【水】【哗】【哗】【流】【淌】【…】【…】【奶】【奶】【,】【对】【不】【起】【,】【我】【不】【该】【把】【您】【给】【我】【做】【的】【枕】【头】【扔】【到】【一】【边】【。】【此】【时】【此】【刻】【,】【我】【这】【才】【真】【正】【感】【受】【到】【,】【那】【枕】【头】【上】【密】【密】【麻】【麻】【的】【一】【针】【一】【线】【,】【都】【流】【淌】【着】【浓】【浓】【的】【至】【爱】【亲】【情】【啊】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【回】【到】【家】【里】【,】【我】【重】【新】【找】【出】【那】【个】【枕】【头】【,】【轻】【轻】【拂】【去】【上】【面】【的】【灰】【尘】【,】【再】【次】【放】【到】【我】【的】【床】【头】【。】【枕】【在】【上】【面】【,】【一】【股】【股】【沁】【人】【心】【脾】【的】【清】【香】【令】【我】【陶】【醉】【,】【并】【且】【只】【要】【我】【微】【微】【一】【动】【,】【就】【会】【“】【沙】【沙】【”】【作】【响】【,】【像】【奶】【奶】【唱】【着】【催】【眠】【曲】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【月】【光】【依】【旧】【那】【么】【清】【亮】【透】【明】【,】【如】【水】【一】【般】【。】【仰】【望】【夜】【空】【,】【我】【不】【禁】【心】【生】【感】【慨】【,】【纵】【然】【时】【光】【飞】【逝】【,】【但】【夜】【空】【里】【这】【如】【水】【的】【月】【光】【不】【会】【变】【,】【正】【如】【妈】【妈】【伟】【大】【而】【温】【柔】【的】【至】【爱】【亲】【情】【一】【般】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【时】【光】【飞】【逝】【,】【亲】【情】【永】【驻】【。】【让】【我】【们】【接】【过】【爱】【的】【接】【力】【棒】【,】【用】【自】【己】【的】【一】【片】【真】【情】【去】【传】【递】【这】【种】【永】【恒】【吧】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【章】【最】【大】【的】【亮】【点】【就】【是】【正】【面】【描】【写】【与】【侧】【面】【描】【写】【相】【结】【合】【。】【作】【者】【以】【“】【海】【边】【星】【光】【图】【”】【和】【“】【奶】【奶】【催】【眠】【图】【”】【这】【两】【幅】【画】【面】【,】【渲】【染】【感】【人】【的】【氛】【围】【,】【烘】【托】【出】【了】【亲】【情】【的】【伟】【大】【和】【无】【私】【,】【彰】【显】【了】【“】【时】【间】【飞】【快】【”】【的】【主】【题】【。】【其】【次】【,】【语】【言】【优】【美】【流】【畅】【,】【情】【真】【意】【切】【。】洋务运动图片【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【天】【空】【带】【给】【我】【的】【幸】【福】【,】【是】【那】【广】【阔】【的】【蔚】【蓝】【;】【鲜】【花】【带】【给】【我】【的】【幸】【福】【,】【是】【那】【沁】【人】【的】【芳】【香】【;】【春】【风】【带】【给】【我】【的】【幸】【福】【,】【是】【那】【温】【柔】【的】【轻】【抚】【;】【妈】【妈】【带】【给】【我】【的】【幸】【福】【,】【是】【那】【轻】【轻】【的】【、】【甜】【甜】【的】【吻】【。】【这】【吻】【比】【蓝】【天】【更】【广】【阔】【、】【比】【鲜】【花】【更】【芳】【香】【、】【比】【春】【风】【更】【温】【柔】【,】【这】【吻】【里】【充】【满】【着】【妈】【妈】【对】【我】【的】【爱】【与】【希】【望】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【小】【时】【候】【,】【妈】【妈】【的】【吻】【是】【温】【暖】【的】【太】【阳】【。】【记】【得】【那】【是】【一】【个】【雨】【天】【,】【雷】【声】【阵】【阵】【,】【大】【雨】【瓢】【泼】【。】【我】【背】【着】【书】【包】【,】【焦】【急】【地】【在】【校】【门】【口】【向】【外】【张】【望】【。】【雨】【幕】【中】【,】【妈】【妈】【的】【身】【影】【出】【现】【了】【,】【只】【见】【她】【拿】【着】【我】【的】【小】【花】【伞】【,】【边】【走】【边】【找】【寻】【,】【当】【她】【发】【现】【我】【后】【,】【快】【步】【小】【跑】【到】【我】【的】【身】【旁】【,】【赶】【忙】【脱】【下】【外】【套】【披】【在】【我】【身】【上】【,】【然】【后】【拉】【着】【我】【的】【手】【走】【进】【雨】【中】【。】【她】【为】【了】【不】【让】【我】【淋】【湿】【,】【把】【大】【半】【的】【伞】【都】【斜】【向】【我】【这】【边】【。】【到】【了】【家】【,】【乌】【云】【散】【去】【,】【雨】【也】【停】【了】【,】【七】【色】【的】【彩】【虹】【出】【现】【在】【天】【边】【,】【可】【妈】【妈】【的】【大】【半】【个】【身】【体】【却】【被】【雨】【淋】【透】【了】【。】【我】【心】【疼】【地】【替】【妈】【妈】【往】【下】【扒】【衣】【服】【,】【一】【个】【劲】【地】【说】【对】【不】【起】【,】【可】【妈】【妈】【却】【笑】【了】【,】【还】【在】【我】【的】【脸】【颊】【上】【轻】【轻】【地】【留】【下】【了】【一】【个】【吻】【。】【妈】【妈】【的】【吻】【啊】【是】【那】【么】【的】【暖】【,】【像】【温】【暖】【的】【太】【阳】【,】【温】【暖】【了】【我】【的】【全】【身】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【长】【大】【后】【,】【妈】【妈】【的】【吻】【是】【温】【柔】【的】【月】【亮】【。】【记】【得】【那】【是】【一】【个】【深】【夜】【,】【我】【为】【解】【一】【道】【难】【题】【焦】【躁】【不】【安】【,】【头】【昏】【脑】【胀】【,】【而】【此】【刻】【,】【时】【钟】【却】【不】【合】【时】【宜】【地】【“】【当】【当】【”】【敲】【响】【了】【几】【下】【,】【我】【气】【急】【败】【坏】【地】【扔】【下】【笔】【,】【趴】【在】【桌】【子】【上】【,】【这】【时】【,】【妈】【妈】【来】【到】【我】【的】【身】【旁】【,】【为】【我】【递】【上】【一】【杯】【热】【奶】【,】【拍】【了】【拍】【我】【的】【肩】【膀】【,】【然】【后】【在】【我】【身】【边】【默】【默】【地】【坐】【下】【。】【喝】【了】【妈】【妈】【的】【这】【杯】【热】【奶】【,】【我】【的】【脑】【细】【胞】【又】【重】【新】【活】【跃】【了】【,】【没】【过】【多】【长】【时】【间】【,】【我】【就】【得】【出】【了】【答】【案】【。】【看】【到】【我】【终】【于】【又】【战】【胜】【了】【一】【道】【难】【题】【,】【妈】【妈】【也】【替】【我】【高】【兴】【,】【她】【二】【话】【没】【说】【,】【在】【我】【的】【脸】【上】【深】【深】【地】【印】【上】【了】【一】【吻】【,】【这】【吻】【是】【那】【么】【的】【柔】【软】【,】【像】【温】【柔】【的】【月】【亮】【,】【使】【我】【浑】【身】【的】【疲】【倦】【一】【扫】【而】【光】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【妈】【妈】【的】【吻】【,】【比】【蜜】【还】【要】【甜】【,】【比】【花】【还】【要】【香】【,】【是】【妈】【妈】【送】【我】【的】【最】【好】【礼】【物】【。】【可】【女】【儿】【现】【在】【没】【有】【什】【么】【送】【给】【您】【,】【只】【能】【还】【您】【一】【个】【纯】【洁】【的】【吻】【,】【让】【您】【感】【受】【到】【女】【儿】【对】【您】【的】【爱】【,】【希】【望】【您】【永】【远】【平】【安】【、】【健】【康】【、】【长】【寿】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【陈】【稳】【生】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【人】【不】【可】【貌】【相】【,】【海】【水】【不】【可】【斗】【量】【”】【是】【中】【国】【人】【挂】【在】【嘴】【边】【的】【一】【句】【古】【语】【,】【那】【么】【,】【这】【句】【话】【里】【“】【不】【可】【貌】【相】【”】【的】【人】【是】【谁】【呢】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【个】【人】【复】【姓】【澹】【台】【,】【名】【灭】【明】【,】【是】【春】【秋】【末】【期】【的】【鲁】【国】【武】【城】【(】【今】【山】【东】【费】【县】【,】【一】【说】【在】【今】【山】【东】【武】【城】【)】【人】【。】【他】【天】【生】【异】【相】【,】【面】【貌】【丑】【陋】【,】【所】【以】【,】【当】【他】【去】【拜】【孔】【子】【为】【师】【时】【,】【孔】【子】【虽】【然】【为】【了】【信】【守】【自】【己】【“】【有】【教】【无】【类】【”】【的】【理】【念】【没】【有】【拒】【绝】【他】【,】【却】【总】【对】【他】【爱】【答】【不】【理】【。】【澹】【台】【灭】【明】【对】【孔】【夫】【子】【以】【貌】【取】【人】【的】【态】【度】【颇】【为】【失】【望】【,】【毅】【然】【决】【然】【离】【开】【孔】【子】【,】【开】【始】【了】【漫】【长】【刻】【苦】【的】【自】【学】【历】【程】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【孔】【子】【非】【常】【喜】【爱】【的】【弟】【子】【子】【游】【(】【即】【言】【偃】【)】【却】【对】【澹】【台】【灭】【明】【颇】【为】【欣】【赏】【。】【子】【游】【从】【武】【城】【宰】【任】【上】【回】【到】【曲】【阜】【看】【望】【孔】【子】【时】【,】【孔】【子】【问】【他】【:】【“】【你】【在】【那】【里】【得】【到】【什】【么】【人】【才】【了】【吗】【?】【”】【子】【游】【借】【机】【赞】【美】【了】【澹】【台】【灭】【明】【的】【高】【尚】【品】【格】【:】【“】【有】【澹】【台】【灭】【明】【者】【,】【行】【不】【由】【径】【,】【非】【公】【事】【,】【未】【尝】【至】【于】【偃】【之】【室】【也】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【澹】【台】【灭】【明】【自】【学】【成】【才】【后】【,】【独】【辟】【蹊】【径】【,】【南】【下】【吴】【楚】【游】【历】【讲】【学】【。】【澹】【台】【灭】【明】【虽】【相】【貌】【丑】【陋】【,】【却】【胸】【怀】【宽】【广】【,】【他】【并】【没】【有】【因】【为】【在】【孔】【门】【受】【到】【冷】【遇】【而】【对】【孔】【子】【怀】【恨】【在】【心】【,】【而】【是】【仍】【以】【孔】【子】【为】【师】【,】【积】【极】【传】【播】【儒】【家】【学】【说】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【知】【识】【渊】【博】【、】【道】【德】【高】【尚】【的】【澹】【台】【灭】【明】【在】【江】【南】【地】【区】【受】【到】【了】【人】【们】【的】【爱】【戴】【,】【当】【地】【跟】【从】【他】【学】【习】【的】【有】【三】【百】【多】【人】【。】【他】【的】【名】【气】【也】【传】【遍】【了】【当】【时】【的】【各】【个】【诸】【侯】【国】【。】【孔】【子】【听】【到】【这】【些】【消】【息】【,】【幡】【然】【悔】【悟】【,】【不】【胜】【感】【慨】【:】【以】【容】【取】【人】【乎】【,】【失】【之】【子】【羽】【(】【澹】【台】【灭】【明】【字】【子】【羽】【)】【;】【以】【言】【取】【人】【乎】【,】【失】【之】【宰】【予】【(】【任】【长】【相】【判】【断】【人】【,】【看】【错】【了】【子】【羽】【;】【凭】【语】【言】【判】【断】【人】【,】【看】【错】【了】【宰】【予】【)】【。】洋务运动图片【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【当】【清】【晨】【拉】【开】【窗】【帘】【,】【房】【间】【立】【时】【被】【阳】【光】【照】【亮】【。】【窗】【前】【正】【怒】【放】【的】【玫】【瑰】【,】【散】【发】【出】【淡】【淡】【的】【芳】【香】【,】【夜】【里】【,】【它】【花】【瓣】【闭】【拢】【;】【清】【晨】【它】【就】【再】【度】【开】【放】【,】【它】【的】【生】【命】【好】【顽】【强】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【情】【景】【令】【我】【十】【分】【感】【动】【。】【其】【实】【还】【有】【比】【这】【更】【令】【人】【感】【动】【的】【呢】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【不】【知】【你】【是】【否】【听】【过】【这】【样】【一】【个】【凄】【美】【的】【故】【事】【:】【日】【本】【某】【户】【人】【家】【装】【修】【,】【拆】【木】【板】【墙】【时】【,】【发】【现】【一】【只】【壁】【虎】【被】【一】【根】【从】【外】【面】【钉】【进】【来】【的】【钉】【子】【钉】【住】【了】【尾】【巴】【。】【这】【居】【然】【是】【主】【人】【很】【长】【时】【间】【以】【前】【盖】【房】【子】【时】【钉】【上】【去】【的】【。】【见】【此】【状】【,】【主】【人】【暂】【时】【停】【止】【了】【装】【修】【,】【他】【要】【一】【探】【究】【竟】【。】【没】【多】【久】【,】【钻】【过】【来】【另】【一】【只】【壁】【虎】【,】【嘴】【里】【含】【着】【食】【物】【过】【来】【喂】【它】【…】【…】【主】【人】【一】【时】【愣】【住】【了】【,】【这】【是】【怎】【样】【的】【生】【命】【,】【怎】【样】【的】【爱】【呀】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【0】【0】【8】【年】【5】【月】【1】【5】【日】【,】【在】【汶】【川】【灾】【区】【垮】【塌】【的】【房】【子】【下】【,】【一】【位】【死】【去】【的】【母】【亲】【双】【膝】【跪】【地】【,】【支】【撑】【身】【体】【护】【住】【了】【三】【个】【月】【大】【的】【婴】【儿】【,】【而】【她】【的】【孩】【子】【却】【毫】【发】【未】【损】【。】【救】【援】【者】【在】【孩】【子】【的】【被】【子】【里】【,】【发】【现】【了】【一】【部】【手】【机】【,】【只】【见】【屏】【幕】【短】【信】【上】【显】【示】【着】【1】【8】【个】【字】【:】【“】【亲】【爱】【的】【宝】【贝】【,】【如】【果】【你】【还】【活】【着】【,】【一】【定】【记】【住】【,】【我】【爱】【你】【。】【”】【“】【我】【爱】【你】【”】【,】【多】【么】【美】【丽】【的】【语】【言】【,】【面】【对】【着】【这】【无】【私】【的】【爱】【,】【我】【们】【怎】【能】【不】【奉】【献】【出】【自】【己】【的】【一】【切】【,】【甚】【至】【是】【生】【命】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【世】【界】【上】【有】【一】【种】【死】【,】【永】【远】【也】【不】【代】【表】【毁】【灭】【,】【那】【就】【是】【自】【落】【的】【花】【,】【归】【根】【的】【叶】【。】【生】【命】【虽】【然】【消】【逝】【了】【,】【但】【留】【给】【人】【间】【的】【一】【种】【精】【神】【,】【一】【种】【气】【质】【,】【一】【种】【洒】【脱】【却】【是】【永】【恒】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【世】【间】【万】【物】【唯】【有】【生】【命】【最】【为】【珍】【贵】【,】【但】【又】【是】【转】【瞬】【即】【逝】【的】【,】【它】【短】【暂】【得】【如】【同】【天】【穹】【中】【一】【颗】【稍】【纵】【即】【逝】【的】【流】【星】【,】【那】【么】【我】【们】【不】【是】【应】【该】【让】【生】【命】【绽】【放】【更】【多】【的】【光】【彩】【吗】【?】【陆】【放】【翁】【的】【“】【零】【落】【成】【泥】【碾】【作】【尘】【,】【只】【有】【香】【如】【故】【”】【,】【文】【天】【祥】【的】【“】【人】【生】【自】【古】【谁】【无】【死】【,】【留】【取】【丹】【心】【照】【汗】【青】【”】【,】【岳】【飞】【的】【“】【怒】【发】【冲】【冠】【”】【,】【司】【马】【迁】【的】【忍】【辱】【负】【重】【著】【史】【记】【…】【…】【都】【在】【向】【我】【们】【诉】【说】【着】【生】【命】【的】【真】【谛】【。】【那】【么】【,】【是】【什】【么】【力】【量】【让】【他】【们】【变】【得】【不】【平】【凡】【呢】【?】【是】【活】【着】【的】【信】【念】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【果】【你】【不】【能】【做】【一】【棵】【大】【树】【,】【那】【么】【就】【做】【一】【棵】【小】【草】【,】【铺】【就】【路】【边】【的】【林】【荫】【;】【如】【果】【你】【不】【能】【做】【一】【条】【小】【河】【,】【那】【么】【就】【做】【一】【滴】【水】【,】【去】【滋】【润】【一】【寸】【土】【地】【;】【如】【果】【你】【不】【能】【做】【无】【垠】【的】【大】【海】【,】【那】【么】【就】【做】【一】【朵】【浪】【花】【,】【点】【缀】【大】【海】【的】【波】【澜】【。】【我】【们】【的】【生】【命】【虽】【平】【凡】【,】【但】【要】【让】【它】【活】【得】【有】【意】【义】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【是】【一】【篇】【以】【“】【信】【念】【、】【生】【命】【”】【为】【话】【题】【的】【习】【作】【,】【小】【作】【者】【诠】【释】【自】【己】【对】【生】【命】【的】【理】【解】【,】【感】【悟】【深】【刻】【、】【独】【到】【,】【蕴】【涵】【哲】【理】【。】【在】【结】【构】【上】【,】【作】【者】【先】【写】【植】【物】【、】【动】【物】【,】【而】【后】【再】【写】【对】【”】【人】【”】【生】【命】【的】【层】【层】【深】【入】【的】【理】【性】【认】【识】【。】【文】【中】【选】【取】【事】【件】【真】【实】【、】【典】【型】【、】【有】【说】【服】【力】【,】【震】【撼】【人】【心】【,】【引】【发】【读】【者】【去】【思】【考】【。】【比】【喻】【、】【排】【比】【、】【引】【用】【等】【修】【辞】【手】【法】【运】【用】【较】【成】【功】【,】【为】【文】【章】【增】【添】【文】【采】【。】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【李】【秀】【琴】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】

洋务运动图片:欧盟接管综述:不到来影响游玩业的四个立功德情

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【门】【是】【一】【个】【空】【间】【与】【另】【一】【个】【空】【间】【的】【连】【接】【口】【。】【站】【在】【门】【前】【,】【总】【是】【有】【探】【索】【门】【内】【一】【切】【的】【欲】【望】【,】【或】【是】【巧】【夺】【天】【工】【的】【绮】【丽】【风】【光】【,】【凄】【凉】【长】【鸣】【的】【幽】【幽】【溪】【涧】【;】【或】【是】【源】【远】【流】【长】【的】【文】【化】【领】【域】【,】【高】【深】【莫】【测】【的】【思】【想】【境】【界】【;】【抑】【或】【是】【感】【情】【的】【碰】【撞】【,】【因】【此】【停】【歇】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【站】【在】【四】【季】【的】【门】【前】【,】【春】【风】【打】【开】【了】【四】【季】【多】【彩】【的】【门】【,】【我】【们】【赏】【到】【的】【是】【洁】【白】【无】【瑕】【的】【风】【中】【柳】【絮】【,】【百】【花】【绽】【放】【的】【绚】【烂】【;】【聆】【听】【的】【是】【静】【夜】【里】【嘹】【亮】【的】【蝉】【鸣】【,】【在】【这】【个】【满】【布】【千】【山】【万】【壑】【、】【冰】【川】【河】【流】【的】【世】【界】【里】【,】【鸟】【语】【花】【香】【成】【了】【必】【然】【的】【陪】【衬】【,】【流】【连】【于】【碧】【水】【清】【潭】【,】【行】【走】【于】【幽】【暗】【古】【林】【中】【,】【这】【里】【透】【露】【着】【自】【然】【的】【气】【息】【。】【踏】【进】【四】【季】【的】【门】【里】【,】【呼】【吸】【着】【春】【天】【的】【朝】【气】【,】【感】【受】【夏】【天】【的】【热】【烈】【,】【目】【睹】【秋】【天】【的】【萧】【瑟】【,】【欣】【赏】【冬】【天】【的】【空】【灵】【,】【这】【里】【成】【为】【肉】【体】【的】【栖】【息】【地】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【站】【在】【人】【生】【的】【门】【前】【,】【我】【们】【有】【些】【彷】【徨】【。】【人】【生】【像】【雾】【、】【像】【雨】【、】【又】【像】【风】【,】【让】【你】【捉】【摸】【不】【定】【,】【猜】【测】【不】【透】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【时】【像】【飘】【摇】【不】【定】【的】【小】【船】【,】【不】【知】【该】【在】【哪】【里】【停】【泊】【,】【但】【众】【多】【或】【伟】【大】【或】【平】【凡】【的】【人】【用】【奥】【妙】【精】【深】【的】【思】【想】【或】【行】【动】【描】【述】【了】【一】【个】【个】【惊】【心】【动】【魄】【的】【故】【事】【,】【谱】【写】【着】【壮】【丽】【的】【人】【生】【,】【他】【们】【的】【历】【程】【,】【他】【们】【的】【人】【生】【为】【我】【们】【拓】【开】【了】【光】【明】【的】【路】【。】【走】【在】【人】【生】【的】【路】【上】【,】【一】【定】【会】【烙】【下】【我】【们】【的】【脚】【印】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【许】【多】【的】【时】【候】【,】【我】【们】【也】【会】【离】【开】【气】【象】【万】【千】【、】【光】【怪】【陆】【离】【的】【人】【生】【之】【门】【,】【站】【在】【“】【寂】【静】【”】【的】【门】【前】【,】【让】【一】【切】【静】【止】【不】【动】【,】【停】【滞】【不】【前】【,】【从】【凝】【固】【的】【空】【气】【中】【倾】【听】【血】【液】【的】【流】【淌】【声】【和】【心】【脏】【规】【律】【的】【跳】【动】【。】【在】【静】【谧】【的】【之】【夜】【,】【走】【在】【凄】【冷】【的】【月】【光】【下】【,】【宁】【静】【的】【小】【路】【上】【,】【任】【孤】【独】【与】【寂】【寞】【蔓】【延】【。】【面】【对】【眼】【前】【这】【低】【沉】【而】【寂】【静】【的】【夜】【,】【心】【中】【的】【感】【情】【之】【海】【却】【汹】【涌】【翻】【腾】【起】【来】【了】【。】【在】【这】【个】【寂】【静】【的】【空】【间】【里】【,】【所】【有】【情】【感】【相】【互】【抵】【触】【、】【缠】【绕】【,】【最】【后】【融】【合】【在】【一】【起】【,】【化】【为】【心】【底】【一】【声】【声】【的】【轻】【声】【感】【悟】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【打】【开】【你】【眼】【睛】【的】【窗】【户】【、】【思】【想】【的】【大】【门】【,】【走】【进】【心】【灵】【的】【深】【处】【,】【你】【看】【到】【的】【又】【会】【是】【什】【么】【?】【花】【飞】【花】【谢】【,】【云】【卷】【云】【舒】【,】【你】【会】【为】【谁】【而】【停】【留】【?】【打】【开】【门】【看】【看】【吧】【,】【你】【会】【发】【现】【,】【其】【实】【门】【里】【门】【外】【的】【世】【界】【真】【的】【很】【不】【一】【样】【,】【何】【不】【让】【自】【己】【活】【得】【洒】【脱】【充】【实】【些】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【方】【楚】【仁】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】洋务运动图片【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【从】【我】【懂】【事】【起】【,】【我】【就】【记】【得】【每】【次】【都】【是】【父】【母】【陪】【伴】【我】【走】【那】【一】【段】【一】【段】【路】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【上】【幼】【儿】【园】【的】【那】【天】【,】【是】【一】【个】【大】【雨】【天】【,】【父】【亲】【骑】【着】【摩】【托】【,】【载】【着】【我】【和】【母】【亲】【,】【母】【亲】【一】【手】【抱】【着】【我】【,】【一】【手】【打】【着】【雨】【伞】【,】【父】【母】【全】【身】【湿】【透】【,】【而】【我】【却】【滴】【雨】【未】【淋】【,】【是】【父】【母】【的】【双】【翼】【庇】【护】【着】【我】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【上】【小】【学】【的】【那】【天】【,】【是】【个】【艳】【阳】【高】【照】【的】【日】【子】【,】【九】【月】【的】【热】【浪】【未】【去】【,】【父】【亲】【外】【出】【了】【,】【母】【亲】【打】【着】【一】【把】【大】【伞】【送】【我】【上】【学】【。】【校】【园】【里】【,】【母】【亲】【跑】【来】【跑】【去】【地】【办】【理】【各】【种】【入】【学】【手】【续】【,】【而】【我】【则】【坐】【在】【大】【树】【底】【下】【,】【喝】【着】【母】【亲】【买】【的】【冷】【饮】【,】【看】【着】【来】【来】【往】【往】【的】【人】【群】【,】【还】【不】【时】【地】【埋】【怨】【母】【亲】【太】【慢】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【天】【有】【不】【测】【风】【云】【,】【家】【庭】【的】【变】【故】【,】【突】【然】【一】【下】【把】【我】【抛】【进】【了】【深】【渊】【。】【离】【异】【后】【独】【撑】【家】【庭】【的】【母】【亲】【,】【突】【然】【又】【摔】【伤】【了】【脚】【,】【虽】【然】【父】【亲】【从】【他】【的】【新】【家】【里】【寄】【来】【了】【一】【点】【钱】【给】【母】【亲】【治】【脚】【,】【但】【毕】【竟】【是】【杯】【水】【车】【薪】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【母】【亲】【的】【坚】【持】【下】【,】【我】【没】【有】【辍】【学】【。】【为】【了】【母】【亲】【的】【心】【愿】【,】【我】【不】【能】【辍】【学】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【语】【文】【:】【5】【7】【分】【;】【数】【学】【:】【2】【3】【分】【…】【…】【”】【当】【班】【主】【任】【公】【布】【期】【中】【考】【试】【成】【绩】【时】【,】【用】【她】【那】【最】【严】【厉】【的】【眼】【神】【看】【着】【我】【时】【,】【我】【深】【深】【地】【把】【头】【低】【下】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【乌】【云】【布】【满】【天】【空】【,】【刹】【那】【间】【,】【电】【闪】【雷】【鸣】【,】【白】【天】【几】【乎】【变】【成】【了】【黑】【夜】【,】【大】【雨】【倾】【盆】【而】【下】【,】【铺】【天】【盖】【地】【,】【混】【沌】【世】【间】【…】【…】【就】【在】【我】【几】【近】【绝】【望】【的】【时】【刻】【,】【天】【空】【又】【突】【然】【放】【晴】【了】【。】【大】【雨】【过】【后】【,】【天】【高】【云】【淡】【,】【晴】【空】【万】【里】【,】【空】【气】【清】【新】【而】【诱】【人】【。】【我】【知】【道】【,】【我】【得】【一】【个】【人】【上】【路】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【把】【母】【亲】【的】【轮】【椅】【推】【出】【来】【,】【扶】【母】【亲】【坐】【上】【,】【安】【顿】【好】【一】【切】【之】【后】【,】【以】【最】【快】【的】【速】【度】【赶】【往】【学】【校】【。】【中】【午】【放】【学】【后】【,】【又】【以】【最】【快】【的】【速】【度】【赶】【回】【家】【为】【母】【亲】【做】【饭】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【班】【主】【任】【的】【眼】【神】【,】【早】【已】【没】【有】【了】【严】【厉】【,】【变】【得】【无】【比】【温】【柔】【了】【,】【当】【然】【,】【不】【只】【是】【因】【为】【我】【的】【语】【文】【成】【绩】【翻】【番】【,】【数】【学】【成】【绩】【加】【百】【。】【老】【师】【以】【知】【识】【与】【爱】【意】【的】【食】【粮】【相】【赠】【,】【帮】【助】【我】【走】【出】【人】【生】【风】【雨】【凄】【迷】【路】【,】【我】【不】【止】【一】【次】【地】【默】【念】【着】【老】【师】【的】【恩】【情】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【也】【许】【是】【天】【道】【酬】【勤】【,】【母】【亲】【可】【以】【脱】【离】【轮】【椅】【走】【路】【了】【,】【她】【的】【脚】【基】【本】【恢】【复】【了】【原】【样】【,】【我】【也】【以】【全】【校】【第】【一】【名】【的】【成】【绩】【考】【取】【了】【县】【里】【的】【重】【点】【中】【学】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【当】【然】【知】【道】【,】【不】【管】【小】【鸟】【曾】【经】【得】【到】【多】【少】【呵】【护】【,】【它】【最】【终】【是】【必】【须】【学】【会】【自】【己】【飞】【翔】【的】【。】【遭】【遇】【挫】【折】【并】【不】【意】【味】【是】【路】【的】【尽】【头】【,】【相】【反】【,】【这】【恰】【恰】【是】【一】【条】【路】【的】【开】【始】【。】【我】【坚】【信】【,】【即】【使】【一】【个】【人】【上】【路】【,】【我】【也】【会】【一】【直】【地】【走】【下】【去】【,】【不】【管】【今】【后】【遇】【到】【什】【么】【样】【的】【风】【雨】【,】【我】【都】【能】【挺】【过】【去】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【作】【文】【难】【写】【,】【可】【又】【好】【写】【。】【无】【生】【活】【无】【体】【验】【,】【一】【味】【去】【虚】【构】【、】【假】【想】【,】【那】【是】【十】【分】【难】【写】【的】【;】【而】【做】【生】【活】【的】【有】【心】【人】【,】【认】【真】【地】【体】【验】【生】【活】【、】【思】【考】【生】【活】【,】【作】【文】【又】【是】【非】【常】【好】【写】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【文】【小】【作】【者】【就】【懂】【得】【这】【个】【道】【理】【。】【她】【沉】【入】【生】【活】【,】【体】【验】【生】【活】【,】【然】【后】【再】【现】【生】【活】【,】【写】【来】【真】【挚】【、】【动】【人】【。】【当】【然】【,】【聪】【明】【的】【小】【作】【者】【并】【没】【有】【刻】【板】【地】【记】【录】【生】【活】【,】【而】【是】【切】【取】【一】【些】【典】【型】【的】【生】【活】【片】【段】【,】【用】【蒙】【太】【奇】【的】【手】【法】【组】【接】【成】【篇】【。】【文】【章】【非】【常】【扣】【题】【,】【并】【彰】【显】【出】【了】【奋】【斗】【、】【进】【取】【、】【不】【屈】【不】【挠】【的】【生】【命】【意】【义】【。】【感】【情】【真】【挚】【,】【主】【旨】【鲜】【明】【,】【文】【意】【流】【畅】【。】【特】【别】【是】【中】【间】【插】【入】【的】【那】【段】【景】【物】【描】【写】【,】【更】【是】【为】【表】【情】【达】【意】【增】【色】【不】【少】【;】【这】【段】【景】【物】【描】【写】【既】【含】【蓄】【蕴】【藉】【,】【而】【又】【生】【动】【优】【美】【,】【可】【谓】【深】【得】【景】【情】【相】【衬】【的】【个】【中】【奥】【妙】【。】【(】【点】【评】【老】【师】【:】【李】【弗】【不】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【介】【绍】【物】【品】【,】【大】【致】【可】【分】【两】【种】【情】【况】【:】【一】【是】【着】【重】【于】【应】【用】【;】【介】【绍】【时】【,】【文】【字】【要】【简】【明】【,】【如】【医】【药】【介】【绍】【、】【家】【电】【使】【用】【须】【知】【等】【。】【另】【一】【种】【则】【以】【介】【绍】【物】【品】【知】【识】【为】【主】【。】【为】【说】【明】【物】【品】【性】【质】【、】【功】【用】【和】【演】【变】【发】【展】【。】【吸】【引】【读】【者】【关】【注】【,】【则】【多】【用】【形】【象】【化】【的】【表】【现】【方】【法】【。】【《】【牙】【刷】【自】【述】【》】【即】【属】【于】【后】【者】【。】【“】【牙】【刷】【”】【本】【为】【普】【通】【生】【活】【用】【品】【,】【如】【果】【平】【直】【道】【来】【,】【纵】【然】【有】【新】【的】【知】【识】【内】【容】【,】【也】【容】【易】【被】【忽】【略】【,】【不】【能】【引】【起】【读】【者】【的】【阅】【读】【兴】【趣】【。】【所】【以】【,】【《】【牙】【刷】【自】【述】【》】【一】【改】【程】【式】【化】【的】【说】【明】【方】【法】【,】【而】【是】【运】【用】【拟】【人】【修】【辞】【手】【段】【,】【设】【计】【由】【“】【牙】【刷】【自】【述】【”】【,】【将】【需】【要】【说】【明】【的】【知】【识】【融】【汇】【在】【一】【篇】【娓】【娓】【动】【听】【的】【“】【演】【说】【辞】【”】【中】【,】【语】【言】【有】【声】【有】【色】【,】【感】【情】【有】【起】【有】【伏】【,】【“】【牙】【刷】【”】【的】【种】【类】【、】【功】【用】【、】【演】【变】【等】【知】【识】【就】【在】【读】【者】【的】【会】【心】【一】【笑】【中】【顺】【势】【托】【出】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【且】【读】【文】【章】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【牙】【刷】【自】【述】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【●】【上】【海】【师】【大】【附】【中】【刘】【孚】【瑛】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【姓】【名】【:】【牙】【刷】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【年】【龄】【:】【两】【个】【月】【零】【七】【天】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【民】【族】【:】【方】【头】【直】【柄】【族】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【职】【业】【:】【牙】【齿】【美】【容】【师】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【失】【业】【原】【因】【:】【刷】【毛】【弯】【曲】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【联】【系】【地】【址】【:】【床】【下】【杂】【物】【箱】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【大】【家】【好】【!】【我】【是】【牙】【刷】【。】【以】【上】【是】【我】【的】【简】【历】【,】【拜】【托】【大】【家】【替】【我】【找】【一】【份】【工】【作】【。】【或】【许】【有】【人】【会】【问】【:】【牙】【刷】【这】【一】【行】【干】【得】【不】【是】【挺】【好】【的】【,】【怎】【么】【会】【下】【岗】【?】【唉】【,】【一】【言】【难】【尽】【啊】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【想】【当】【初】【,】【刚】【得】【到】【那】【份】【工】【作】【时】【,】【是】【何】【等】【风】【光】【:】【家】【住】【干】【净】【宽】【敞】【的】【漱】【口】【杯】【,】【每】【天】【只】【需】【工】【作】【二】【三】【次】【,】【空】【闲】【时】【便】【和】【牙】【膏】【侃】【大】【山】【;】【如】【遇】【主】【人】【出】【差】【,】【虽】【说】【宾】【馆】【里】【有】【洗】【漱】【用】【具】【,】【但】【主】【人】【每】【次】【还】【是】【带】【我】【去】【,】【把】【牙】【膏】【独】【自】【留】【在】【家】【里】【。】【每】【次】【回】【来】【我】【都】【自】【豪】【地】【向】【牙】【膏】【讲】【述】【着】【外】【面】【的】【世】【界】【。】【就】【这】【样】【过】【了】【两】【个】【月】【,】【不】【幸】【降】【临】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【天】【,】【主】【人】【一】【到】【家】【就】【叫】【我】【出】【来】【,】【我】【以】【为】【要】【“】【加】【班】【”】【,】【于】【是】【我】【伸】【了】【个】【懒】【腰】【,】【无】【精】【打】【采】【地】【爬】【出】【了】【漱】【口】【杯】【。】【却】【不】【料】【主】【人】【从】【口】【袋】【里】【拿】【出】【了】【一】【把】【新】【的】【牙】【刷】【,】【说】【是】【让】【我】【跟】【他】【公】【平】【地】【竞】【争】【,】【由】【我】【先】【发】【言】【。】【当】【时】【,】【我】【吃】【惊】【得】【连】【弯】【曲】【的】【刷】【毛】【都】【一】【根】【根】【地】【竖】【了】【起】【来】【,】【偷】【偷】【地】【瞥】【了】【他】【一】【眼】【—】【—】【虽】【然】【花】【哨】【,】【但】【小】【小】【年】【纪】【就】【驼】【着】【背】【,】【小】【圆】【头】【上】【“】【头】【发】【”】【长】【得】【参】【差】【不】【齐】【,】【看】【上】【去】【就】【不】【正】【。】【于】【是】【我】【定】【了】【定】【神】【,】【挺】【直】【腰】【板】【,】【理】【直】【气】【壮】【地】【说】【:】【“】【干】【我】【们】【这】【一】【行】【有】【铁】【饭】【碗】【之】【称】【,】【每】【次】【接】【替】【工】【作】【总】【要】【等】【到】【前】【任】【寿】【终】【正】【寝】【—】【—】【刷】【毛】【脱】【落】【时】【才】【能】【接】【任】【,】【所】【以】【我】【认】【为】【他】【要】【接】【任】【还】【为】【时】【过】【早】【。】【”】【我】【信】【心】【十】【足】【地】【甩】【了】【甩】【头】【发】【,】【静】【等】【他】【的】【挑】【战】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【我】【可】【不】【是】【一】【般】【的】【牙】【刷】【:】【圆】【拱】【形】【刷】【头】【可】【探】【入】【难】【刷】【部】【位】【,】【刷】【毛】【呈】【波】【浪】【形】【,】【更】【紧】【贴】【牙】【齿】【,】【曲】【柄】【设】【计】【是】【根】【据】【…】【…】【”】【没】【想】【到】【他】【一】【开】【口】【就】【滔】【滔】【不】【绝】【,】【头】【头】【是】【道】【,】【别】【说】【是】【主】【人】【,】【就】【连】【我】【也】【被】【他】【的】【“】【广】【告】【词】【”】【所】【吸】【引】【。】【结】【果】【不】【言】【而】【喻】【—】【—】【我】【下】【岗】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【被】【迫】【迁】【入】【新】【居】【—】【—】【杂】【物】【箱】【。】【起】【先】【几】【天】【,】【不】【是】【睡】【觉】【,】【就】【是】【与】【老】【虎】【钳】【、】【螺】【丝】【帽】【闲】【聊】【,】【倒】【也】【悠】【闲】【自】【在】【。】【可】【这】【几】【天】【,】【整】【天】【坐】【立】【不】【安】【,】【总】【觉】【得】【缺】【些】【什】【么】【,】【浑】【身】【不】【自】【在】【。】【于】【是】【到】【处】【托】【朋】【友】【拉】【关】【系】【,】【试】【着】【找】【工】【作】【,】【争】【取】【有】【个】【好】【着】【落】【。】【这】【不】【,】【准】【备】【了】【一】【打】【简】【历】【,】【或】【许】【有】【用】【,】【但】【直】【到】【今】【天】【也】【没】【动】【静】【。】【嘘】【…】【…】【主】【人】【回】【来】【了】【,】【穿】【着】【一】【双】【沾】【满】【泥】【浆】【的】【鞋】【,】【好】【像】【冲】【不】【干】【净】【…】【…】【嘿】【!】【有】【了】【。】【大】【家】【稍】【等】【,】【或】【许】【我】【将】【有】【工】【作】【了】【,】【这】【次】【机】【会】【一】【定】【要】【抓】【住】【,】【我】【去】【去】【就】【来】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【使】【劲】【顶】【开】【箱】【盖】【,】【挤】【出】【箱】【子】【,】【看】【看】【主】【人】【似】【乎】【不】【耐】【烦】【了】【,】【便】【用】【尽】【全】【力】【地】【滚】【到】【主】【人】【脚】【边】【,】【晃】【晃】【摇】【摇】【地】【向】【主】【人】【示】【意】【。】【主】【人】【先】【还】【是】【摇】【了】【摇】【头】【,】【皱】【了】【皱】【眉】【。】【我】【不】【依】【不】【饶】【地】【挤】【蹭】【着】【主】【人】【的】【脚】【,】【主】【动】【地】【磕】【碰】【着】【他】【脚】【上】【的】【泥】【…】【…】【主】【人】【终】【于】【舒】【展】【了】【双】【眉】【,】【俯】【身】【拿】【起】【了】【我】【。】【我】【的】【身】【上】【重】【又】【感】【受】【到】【了】【熟】【悉】【的】【暖】【流】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【哎】【哟】【!】【终】【于】【刷】【完】【了】【,】【累】【得】【我】【好】【一】【阵】【腰】【酸】【背】【痛】【,】【还】【弄】【了】【一】【身】【的】【污】【泥】【。】【可】【话】【又】【说】【回】【来】【了】【,】【虽】【然】【累】【一】【些】【,】【脏】【一】【些】【,】【也】【总】【比】【下】【岗】【要】【好】【。】【我】【要】【为】【自】【己】【重】【新】【上】【岗】【好】【好】【庆】【祝】【一】【番】【。】【看】【来】【这】【些】【简】【历】【也】【可】【以】【扔】【了】【,】【“】【再】【就】【业】【工】【程】【”】【还】【得】【靠】【自】【己】【。】【大】【家】【说】【,】【对】【不】【对】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【文】【以】【拟】【人】【手】【法】【写】【物】【。】【所】【谓】【拟】【人】【就】【是】【把】【物】【当】【做】【“】【人】【”】【来】【写】【,】【赋】【予】【物】【以】【“】【人】【”】【的】【思】【想】【感】【情】【和】【言】【行】【举】【止】【,】【目】【的】【是】【生】【动】【、】【形】【象】【地】【展】【现】【物】【的】【种】【种】【固】【有】【特】【征】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【既】【为】【拟】【人】【,】【那】【就】【得】【写】【物】【像】【“】【人】【”】【。】【所】【以】【,】【在】【《】【牙】【刷】【自】【述】【》】【中】【,】【牙】【刷】【的】【名】【称】【就】【成】【为】【“】【姓】【名】【”】【,】【使】【用】【期】【就】【成】【为】【“】【年】【龄】【”】【,】【种】【类】【就】【成】【了】【“】【民】【族】【”】【,】【功】【用】【就】【成】【了】【“】【职】【业】【”】【。】【不】【仅】【如】【此】【,】【牙】【刷】【还】【如】【“】【人】【”】【一】【样】【,】【既】【能】【说】【会】【道】【,】【又】【有】【情】【感】【起】【伏】【。】【文】【章】【写】【牙】【刷】【为】【“】【下】【岗】【”】【而】【忧】【虑】【,】【为】【“】【出】【差】【”】【而】【“】【自】【豪】【”】【,】【为】【“】【迁】【居】【”】【而】【“】【不】【安】【”】【,】【为】【“】【再】【就】【业】【”】【而】【“】【庆】【祝】【”】【,】【真】【是】【一】【波】【三】【折】【,】【费】【尽】【心】【机】【,】【人】【情】【世】【态】【,】【跃】【然】【纸】【上】【。】【也】【就】【在】【牙】【刷】【这】【一】【颦】【一】【笑】【之】【中】【,】【有】【关】【牙】【刷】【的】【方】【方】【面】【面】【的】【知】【识】【深】【深】【印】【在】【读】【者】【心】【中】【。】【这】【就】【是】【拟】【人】【写】【物】【带】【来】【的】【风】【趣】【的】【表】【达】【效】【果】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【但】【是】【,】【拟】【人】【毕】【竟】【只】【是】【表】【现】【手】【段】【,】【而】【写】【物】【才】【是】【写】【作】【目】【的】【。】【所】【以】【,】【拟】【的】【是】【“】【人】【”】【,】【写】【的】【却】【是】【物】【,】【拟】【人】【写】【物】【,】【关】【键】【在】【于】【找】【准】【“】【人】【”】【和】【“】【物】【”】【的】【对】【应】【点】【。】【也】【就】【是】【说】【,】【拟】【人】【时】【要】【处】【处】【紧】【扣】【物】【的】【特】【点】【。】【比】【如】【,】【物】【是】【有】【使】【用】【期】【的】【,】【比】【之】【以】【人】【的】【“】【年】【龄】【”】【;】【使】【用】【期】【一】【过】【,】【比】【之】【以】【“】【下】【岗】【”】【。】【又】【如】【,】【物】【是】【有】【置】【放】【处】【的】【,】【比】【之】【以】【“】【家】【”】【;】【物】【与】【物】【有】【配】【合】【使】【用】【的】【,】【于】【是】【有】【牙】【刷】【和】【牙】【膏】【的】【“】【侃】【大】【山】【”】【;】【牙】【刷】【毛】【弯】【曲】【了】【可】【以】【“】【刷】【鞋】【”】【,】【这】【才】【有】【“】【再】【就】【业】【”】【之】【说】【。】【拟】【人】【写】【物】【,】【正】【是】【找】【准】【了】【这】【些】【对】【应】【点】【,】【读】【者】【才】【会】【看】【到】【“】【牙】【刷】【”】【的】【种】【种】【“】【人】【”】【的】【表】【现】【,】【原】【来】【都】【是】【物】【的】【特】【征】【的】【展】【示】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【对】【应】【点】【的】【照】【应】【下】【,】【作】【者】【尽】【可】【以】【发】【挥】【拟】【人】【化】【的】【表】【现】【功】【能】【。】【在】【《】【牙】【刷】【自】【述】【》】【中】【,】【有】【两】【处】【描】【写】【夺】【人】【眼】【球】【。】【一】【处】【是】【牙】【刷】【“】【竞】【争】【”】【。】【旧】【牙】【刷】【面】【对】【新】【牙】【刷】【“】【吃】【惊】【得】【连】【弯】【曲】【的】【刷】【毛】【都】【一】【根】【根】【地】【竖】【了】【起】【来】【”】【,】【还】【“】【偷】【偷】【地】【瞥】【了】【他】【一】【眼】【”】【,】【同】【时】【“】【信】【心】【十】【足】【地】【甩】【了】【甩】【头】【发】【”】【,】【虚】【怯】【中】【而】【又】【不】【少】【自】【负】【的】【心】【态】【毕】【现】【,】【真】【是】【到】【了】【惟】【妙】【惟】【肖】【、】【纤】【细】【如】【发】【的】【地】【步】【。】【另】【一】【处】【是】【旧】【牙】【刷】【“】【再】【就】【业】【”】【。】【由】【“】【悠】【闲】【”】【而】【“】【不】【安】【”】【,】【再】【到】【“】【抓】【住】【机】【会】【”】【,】【“】【不】【依】【不】【饶】【地】【挤】【蹭】【着】【主】【人】【的】【脚】【,】【主】【动】【地】【磕】【碰】【着】【他】【脚】【上】【的】【泥】【…】【…】【”】【曲】【尽】【妙】【笔】【,】【声】【情】【并】【茂】【,】【拟】【人】【写】【物】【也】【算】【写】【到】【了】【极】【致】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【还】【有】【一】【点】【值】【得】【一】【说】【。】【说】【明】【文】【也】【有】【立】【意】【的】【要】【求】【。】【说】【明】【物】【品】【,】【自】【然】【要】【把】【物】【品】【说】【明】【清】【楚】【,】【但】【是】【,】【物】【品】【是】【为】【人】【所】【用】【的】【,】【写】【物】【就】【不】【能】【不】【融】【入】【人】【的】【思】【想】【感】【情】【和】【价】【值】【取】【向】【。】【比】【如】【,】【《】【牙】【刷】【自】【述】【》】【在】【说】【明】【牙】【刷】【的】【相】【关】【内】【容】【中】【,】【就】【自】【然】【渗】【透】【作】【者】【的】【主】【观】【意】【识】【。】【在】【事】【物】【发】【展】【进】【程】【中】【,】【新】【陈】【代】【谢】【是】【必】【然】【的】【,】【变】【废】【为】【宝】【也】【是】【可】【能】【的】【,】【自】【强】【不】【息】【是】【永】【远】【需】【要】【的】【。】【《】【牙】【刷】【自】【述】【》】【通】【过】【现】【身】【说】【法】【,】【介】【绍】【了】【物】【品】【,】【也】【颂】【扬】【了】【精】【神】【,】【使】【读】【者】【既】【获】【得】【了】【美】【的】【感】【受】【,】【也】【获】【得】【了】【思】【想】【的】【启】【迪】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【拟】【人】【写】【物】【是】【青】【少】【年】【喜】【闻】【乐】【见】【的】【表】【现】【方】【法】【。】【曾】【见】【有】【《】【书】【包】【里】【的】【争】【论】【》】【《】【苍】【蝇】【受】【审】【记】【》】【《】【从】【橡】【皮】【到】【修】【正】【液】【》】【等】【等】【,】【一】【篇】【篇】【生】【动】【活】【泼】【的】【作】【文】【,】【对】【于】【中】【学】【生】【准】【确】【地】【捕】【捉】【事】【物】【的】【特】【征】【、】【丰】【富】【想】【象】【力】【、】【增】【加】【写】【作】【兴】【趣】【都】【大】【有】【裨】【益】【。】【拟】【人】【写】【物】【,】【不】【妨】【一】【试】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】洋务运动图片【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【杏】【林】【、】【杏】【坛】【一】【字】【之】【差】【,】【但】【其】【意】【思】【却】【差】【别】【很】【大】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【杏】【林】【”】【是】【中】【医】【界】【常】【用】【的】【一】【个】【词】【汇】【,】【该】【词】【产】【生】【于】【汉】【末】【,】【和】【该】【词】【直】【接】【有】【关】【的】【主】【人】【公】【是】【三】【国】【吴】【建】【籍】【医】【生】【董】【奉】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【医】【术】【高】【明】【的】【董】【奉】【视】【钱】【财】【如】【粪】【土】【,】【为】【人】【治】【病】【,】【从】【不】【取】【人】【钱】【物】【,】【他】【唯】【一】【的】【要】【求】【就】【是】【,】【在】【被】【治】【愈】【之】【后】【,】【如】【果】【愿】【意】【,】【重】【症】【患】【者】【在】【董】【奉】【的】【诊】【所】【附】【近】【栽】【种】【五】【棵】【杏】【树】【,】【轻】【者】【就】【栽】【种】【一】【棵】【杏】【树】【。】【十】【年】【过】【去】【之】【后】【,】【董】【奉】【的】【诊】【所】【附】【近】【就】【有】【了】【十】【万】【余】【株】【杏】【树】【,】【郁】【郁】【葱】【葱】【,】【蔚】【然】【成】【林】【,】【成】【为】【当】【地】【一】【景】【。】【杏】【果】【成】【熟】【后】【,】【董】【奉】【又】【将】【杏】【果】【卖】【出】【,】【换】【来】【粮】【食】【周】【济】【庐】【山】【附】【近】【贫】【苦】【百】【姓】【和】【南】【来】【北】【往】【的】【饥】【民】【。】【在】【董】【奉】【去】【世】【后】【,】【庐】【山】【一】【带】【的】【百】【姓】【便】【在】【杏】【林】【中】【设】【坛】【祭】【祀】【董】【奉】【。】【后】【来】【,】【“】【杏】【林】【”】【一】【词】【便】【渐】【渐】【成】【为】【医】【家】【的】【专】【用】【名】【词】【,】【人】【们】【往】【往】【喜】【欢】【用】【“】【杏】【林】【春】【满】【”】【“】【誉】【满】【杏】【林】【”】【一】【类】【的】【话】【语】【来】【赞】【美】【医】【术】【高】【超】【、】【医】【德】【高】【尚】【的】【大】【夫】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【杏】【坛】【”】【之】【典】【故】【最】【早】【出】【自】【于】【庄】【子】【的】【一】【则】【寓】【言】【。】【庄】【子】【在】【那】【则】【寓】【言】【里】【,】【说】【孔】【子】【到】【处】【聚】【徒】【授】【业】【,】【每】【到】【一】【处】【就】【在】【杏】【林】【里】【讲】【学】【。】【休】【息】【的】【时】【候】【,】【就】【坐】【在】【杏】【坛】【之】【上】【。】【后】【来】【人】【们】【就】【根】【据】【庄】【子】【的】【这】【则】【寓】【言】【,】【把】【“】【杏】【坛】【”】【称】【作】【孔】【子】【讲】【学】【的】【地】【方】【,】【也】【泛】【指】【聚】【众】【讲】【学】【的】【场】【所】【。】

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【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【模】【拟】【文】【题】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【请】【以】【“】【_】【_】【_】【_】【自】【己】【”】【为】【题】【写】【一】【篇】【6】【0】【0】【字】【以】【上】【的】【记】【叙】【文】【。】【要】【求】【先】【在】【横】【线】【上】【填】【上】【恰】【当】【的】【词】【语】【,】【将】【题】【目】【补】【充】【完】【整】【,】【然】【后】【写】【作】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【写】【作】【指】【导】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【是】【一】【道】【半】【命】【题】【作】【文】【,】【题】【目】【只】【给】【出】【了】【一】【个】【词】【“】【自】【己】【”】【,】【很】【显】【然】【,】【本】【文】【的】【写】【作】【,】【必】【须】【要】【围】【绕】【“】【自】【己】【”】【进】【行】【,】【也】【就】【是】【说】【,】【所】【写】【的】【事】【要】【与】【“】【自】【己】【”】【有】【关】【。】【当】【然】【,】【这】【个】【“】【自】【己】【”】【并】【非】【就】【一】【定】【是】【“】【我】【”】【,】【特】【殊】【情】【况】【下】【也】【可】【以】【是】【他】【人】【,】【只】【要】【能】【自】【圆】【其】【说】【就】【行】【。】【不】【过】【,】【根】【据】【“】【_】【_】【_】【_】【自】【己】【”】【这】【一】【题】【目】【的】【特】【性】【来】【看】【,】【“】【自】【己】【”】【虽】【然】【必】【不】【可】【少】【,】【但】【补】【写】【的】【内】【容】【才】【是】【文】【题】【的】【核】【心】【所】【在】【,】【体】【现】【着】【文】【章】【的】【立】【意】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【半】【命】【题】【作】【文】【的】【写】【作】【,】【关】【键】【在】【于】【补】【题】【,】【补】【好】【了】【题】【目】【,】【就】【跟】【全】【命】【题】【作】【文】【差】【不】【多】【了】【。】【那】【这】【道】【文】【题】【如】【何】【补】【写】【呢】【?】【可】【与】【立】【意】【相】【结】【合】【,】【从】【以】【下】【几】【个】【角】【度】【进】【行】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【、】【着】【眼】【于】【自】【我】【成】【长】【立】【意】【补】【题】【。】【成】【长】【路】【上】【,】【每】【个】【同】【学】【都】【会】【遇】【到】【许】【多】【与】【自】【身】【有】【关】【的】【事】【情】【。】【比】【如】【心】【生】【自】【卑】【、】【忌】【妒】【,】【需】【要】【战】【胜】【自】【己】【;】【遇】【到】【困】【难】【、】【挫】【折】【,】【需】【要】【鼓】【励】【自】【己】【;】【自】【己】【做】【了】【一】【件】【非】【常】【了】【不】【起】【的】【事】【,】【传】【递】【了】【“】【正】【能】【量】【”】【,】【表】【扬】【一】【下】【自】【己】【;】【与】【家】【长】【、】【同】【学】【相】【处】【,】【总】【是】【无】【意】【中】【伤】【害】【他】【们】【,】【于】【是】【“】【解】【剖】【”】【一】【下】【自】【己】【;】【发】【现】【自】【己】【身】【上】【存】【在】【许】【多】【坏】【毛】【病】【,】【决】【定】【改】【变】【自】【己】【;】【制】【定】【了】【一】【个】【全】【新】【的】【奋】【斗】【目】【标】【,】【憋】【着】【一】【股】【劲】【儿】【挑】【战】【一】【下】【自】【己】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【二】【、】【着】【眼】【于】【社】【会】【生】【活】【立】【意】【补】【题】【。】【这】【时】【候】【题】【目】【中】【的】【“】【自】【己】【”】【就】【可】【以】【是】【他】【人】【了】【。】【譬】【如】【针】【对】【一】【些】【科】【研】【人】【员】【玩】【命】【的】【工】【作】【,】【导】【致】【英】【年】【早】【逝】【,】【你】【想】【写】【一】【篇】【文】【章】【提】【醒】【人】【们】【要】【劳】【逸】【结】【合】【,】【珍】【惜】【自】【己】【的】【身】【体】【,】【就】【可】【把】【题】【目】【补】【为】【“】【珍】【爱】【自】【己】【”】【。】【针】【对】【许】【多】【官】【员】【贪】【污】【腐】【败】【、】【纷】【纷】【落】【马】【这】【一】【现】【象】【,】【你】【想】【提】【醒】【同】【样】【在】【政】【府】【部】【门】【工】【作】【的】【爸】【爸】【要】【洁】【身】【自】【好】【,】【管】【住】【自】【己】【,】【就】【可】【把】【题】【目】【补】【为】【“】【管】【好】【自】【己】【”】【。】【针】【对】【不】【时】【上】【演】【的】【“】【老】【年】【人】【跌】【倒】【无】【人】【扶】【”】【现】【象】【,】【你】【想】【大】【声】【疾】【呼】【,】【希】【望】【每】【个】【人】【都】【能】【换】【位】【思】【考】【,】【勇】【敢】【地】【伸】【出】【援】【助】【之】【手】【,】【你】【就】【可】【把】【题】【目】【补】【为】【“】【假】【如】【那】【是】【你】【自】【己】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【三】【、】【跳】【出】【普】【通】【的】【“】【自】【我】【”】【,】【着】【眼】【自】【然】【、】【环】【保】【等】【方】【面】【进】【行】【立】【意】【补】【题】【。】【比】【如】【现】【在】【雾】【霾】【天】【气】【的】【发】【生】【频】【率】【越】【来】【越】【高】【,】【公】【众】【怨】【声】【载】【道】【,】【你】【就】【可】【以】【雾】【霾】【的】【口】【气】【写】【一】【篇】【文】【章】【:】【“】【我】【恨】【我】【自】【己】【”】【,】【痛】【陈】【自】【己】【的】【罪】【过】【,】【向】【人】【类】【负】【荆】【请】【罪】【,】【从】【而】【巧】【妙】【的】【提】【示】【各】【种】【环】【保】【问】【题】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【以】【上】【三】【种】【立】【意】【角】【度】【,】【第】【一】【种】【是】【最】【基】【本】【的】【,】【第】【二】【种】【稍】【有】【提】【升】【,】【第】【三】【种】【别】【具】【一】【格】【。】【同】【学】【们】【可】【根】【据】【自】【己】【的】【素】【材】【积】【累】【和】【写】【作】【水】【平】【,】【选】【择】【最】【适】【合】【自】【己】【的】【一】【个】【角】【度】【进】【行】【立】【意】【、】【补】【题】【、】【写】【作】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【高】【分】【范】【文】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【恨】【我】【自】【己】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【李】【腊】【梅】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【恨】【我】【自】【己】【,】【为】【什】【么】【要】【公】【然】【撒】【谎】【,】【袒】【护】【表】【弟】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【是】【一】【个】【周】【末】【,】【表】【弟】【跟】【着】【姨】【妈】【来】【我】【家】【玩】【。】【妈】【妈】【让】【我】【领】【着】【表】【弟】【去】【小】【区】【对】【面】【的】【美】【食】【城】【吃】【烧】【烤】【。】【表】【弟】【一】【听】【,】【一】【蹦】【三】【尺】【高】【,】【口】【水】【恨】【不】【得】【马】【上】【就】【要】【流】【下】【来】【,】【拉】【着】【我】【的】【手】【直】【奔】【楼】【下】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【进】【了】【美】【食】【城】【,】【我】【径】【直】【来】【到】【“】【麻】【麻】【香】【烧】【烤】【店】【”】【,】【这】【家】【的】【羊】【肉】【串】【肉】【质】【鲜】【,】【分】【量】【足】【,】【口】【味】【好】【,】【我】【吃】【过】【多】【次】【,】【印】【象】【特】【别】【深】【刻】【。】【我】【们】【要】【了】【四】【串】【羊】【肉】【串】【,】【外】【加】【两】【根】【烤】【素】【肠】【。】【表】【弟】【迫】【不】【及】【待】【地】【拿】【起】【一】【根】【羊】【肉】【串】【,】【大】【口】【吃】【起】【来】【,】【那】【样】【子】【可】【爱】【极】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【边】【吃】【边】【往】【家】【中】【走】【去】【,】【人】【行】【道】【旁】【的】【临】【时】【停】【车】【位】【上】【,】【一】【溜】【儿】【停】【着】【许】【多】【私】【家】【车】【。】【表】【弟】【边】【吃】【边】【用】【穿】【羊】【肉】【串】【儿】【的】【竹】【签】【对】【着】【路】【边】【汽】【车】【指】【指】【点】【点】【,】【特】【别】【兴】【奋】【。】【突】【然】【,】【表】【弟】【手】【中】【挥】【舞】【的】【竹】【签】【划】【到】【了】【一】【辆】【崭】【新】【的】【商】【务】【车】【车】【身】【上】【,】【一】【条】【1】【0】【厘】【米】【左】【右】【的】【划】【痕】【清】【晰】【可】【见】【。】【表】【弟】【并】【没】【有】【意】【识】【到】【问】【题】【的】【严】【重】【性】【,】【甚】【至】【还】【不】【知】【道】【自】【己】【已】【经】【闯】【了】【祸】【。】【可】【我】【知】【道】【,】【这】【道】【划】【痕】【处】【理】【一】【下】【,】【至】【少】【也】【要】【好】【几】【百】【元】【。】【我】【一】【把】【握】【住】【表】【弟】【的】【手】【,】【低】【声】【命】【令】【他】【立】【即】【扔】【掉】【手】【中】【的】【竹】【签】【,】【赶】【快】【离】【开】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【可】【令】【人】【沮】【丧】【的】【是】【,】【那】【车】【上】【居】【然】【有】【人】【,】【是】【一】【个】【4】【0】【多】【岁】【的】【男】【子】【,】【而】【且】【他】【似】【乎】【意】【识】【到】【了】【什】【么】【,】【打】【开】【了】【车】【门】【出】【来】【察】【看】【。】【完】【了】【,】【完】【了】【,】【我】【的】【鼻】【尖】【直】【冒】【汗】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【果】【然】【,】【那】【男】【子】【追】【了】【上】【来】【,】【拦】【在】【我】【们】【前】【面】【,】【说】【刚】【才】【好】【像】【看】【到】【了】【表】【弟】【用】【竹】【签】【在】【他】【的】【车】【身】【上】【划】【了】【一】【下】【,】【让】【我】【们】【赔】【5】【0】【0】【元】【钱】【。】【看】【到】【这】【人】【的】【架】【势】【,】【表】【弟】【一】【下】【吓】【哭】【了】【,】【连】【说】【没】【有】【划】【他】【的】【车】【。】【可】【那】【人】【说】【什】【么】【也】【不】【相】【信】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【时】【,】【我】【努】【力】【镇】【静】【下】【来】【,】【让】【那】【人】【拿】【出】【证】【据】【来】【,】【如】【果】【没】【有】【真】【凭】【实】【据】【,】【凭】【什】【么】【说】【是】【我】【们】【划】【的】【。】【那】【名】【男】【子】【还】【真】【被】【我】【镇】【住】【了】【,】【不】【过】【,】【他】【并】【没】【有】【放】【弃】【,】【而】【是】【指】【着】【我】【说】【:】【“】【你】【就】【是】【证】【据】【,】【你】【肯】【定】【亲】【眼】【看】【到】【了】【。】【你】【可】【是】【一】【名】【中】【学】【生】【,】【中】【学】【生】【可】【不】【能】【撒】【谎】【,】【你】【摸】【摸】【自】【己】【的】【良】【心】【,】【你】【说】【实】【话】【。】【”】【面】【对】【着】【那】【么】【多】【围】【观】【的】【人】【群】【,】【我】【觉】【得】【自】【己】【的】【脸】【很】【烫】【。】【但】【我】【已】【没】【有】【退】【路】【了】【,】【我】【抹】【起】【了】【眼】【泪】【,】【说】【自】【己】【根】【本】【就】【没】【有】【看】【到】【,】【是】【那】【名】【男】【子】【以】【大】【欺】【小】【,】【吓】【唬】【我】【们】【。】【我】【甚】【至】【还】【让】【那】【人】【报】【警】【。】【不】【少】【围】【观】【的】【人】【也】【劝】【起】【了】【那】【名】【男】【子】【。】【男】【子】【无】【可】【奈】【何】【,】【只】【得】【放】【我】【们】【走】【了】【。】【终】【于】【逃】【过】【了】【一】【劫】【,】【回】【到】【家】【中】【,】【我】【们】【也】【没】【敢】【把】【这】【事】【对】【父】【母】【讲】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【可】【是】【每】【每】【想】【起】【这】【件】【事】【,】【我】【就】【觉】【得】【非】【常】【内】【疚】【,】【为】【自】【己】【的】【不】【诚】【实】【而】【白】【责】【。】【我】【恨】【自】【己】【,】【为】【什】【么】【当】【时】【就】【不】【敢】【勇】【于】【承】【认】【错】【误】【?】【现】【在】【可】【好】【,】【整】【天】【难】【以】【心】【安】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【不】【知】【那】【名】【男】【子】【现】【在】【在】【哪】【?】【如】【果】【能】【找】【到】【他】【,】【我】【一】【定】【承】【担】【错】【误】【,】【请】【求】【他】【的】【原】【谅】【,】【并】【且】【用】【自】【己】【的】【压】【岁】【钱】【对】【他】【进】【行】【赔】【偿】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【想】【今】【后】【,】【我】【绝】【不】【会】【再】【犯】【这】【样】【的】【错】【误】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【品】【读】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【篇】【作】【文】【补】【题】【令】【人】【耳】【目】【一】【新】【,】【立】【意】【不】【俗】【,】【表】【达】【生】【动】【,】【引】【人】【入】【胜】【。】【文】【章】【先】【用】【“】【我】【恨】【我】【自】【己】【,】【为】【什】【么】【要】【公】【然】【撒】【谎】【,】【袒】【护】【表】【弟】【”】【来】【设】【疑】【激】【趣】【,】【引】【发】【下】【文】【;】【然】【后】【记】【叙】【表】【弟】【用】【竹】【签】【划】【坏】【路】【边】【汽】【车】【,】【“】【我】【”】【帮】【他】【圆】【谎】【的】【经】【过】【,】【交】【代】【了】【“】【我】【”】【恨】【自】【己】【的】【缘】【由】【;】【最】【后】【点】【题】【,】【表】【达】【自】【己】【的】【忏】【悔】【,】【给】【人】【以】【深】【刻】【的】【启】【示】【。】【文】【中】【情】【节】【富】【于】【变】【化】【,】【能】【运】【用】【多】【种】【方】【法】【写】【人】【,】【有】【些】【细】【节】【描】【写】【非】【常】【传】【神】【,】【人】【物】【非】【常】【鲜】【活】【,】【令】【人】【印】【象】【深】【刻】【。】洋务运动图片【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【模】【拟】【文】【题】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【请】【以】【“】【_】【_】【_】【_】【自】【己】【”】【为】【题】【写】【一】【篇】【6】【0】【0】【字】【以】【上】【的】【记】【叙】【文】【。】【要】【求】【先】【在】【横】【线】【上】【填】【上】【恰】【当】【的】【词】【语】【,】【将】【题】【目】【补】【充】【完】【整】【,】【然】【后】【写】【作】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【写】【作】【指】【导】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【是】【一】【道】【半】【命】【题】【作】【文】【,】【题】【目】【只】【给】【出】【了】【一】【个】【词】【“】【自】【己】【”】【,】【很】【显】【然】【,】【本】【文】【的】【写】【作】【,】【必】【须】【要】【围】【绕】【“】【自】【己】【”】【进】【行】【,】【也】【就】【是】【说】【,】【所】【写】【的】【事】【要】【与】【“】【自】【己】【”】【有】【关】【。】【当】【然】【,】【这】【个】【“】【自】【己】【”】【并】【非】【就】【一】【定】【是】【“】【我】【”】【,】【特】【殊】【情】【况】【下】【也】【可】【以】【是】【他】【人】【,】【只】【要】【能】【自】【圆】【其】【说】【就】【行】【。】【不】【过】【,】【根】【据】【“】【_】【_】【_】【_】【自】【己】【”】【这】【一】【题】【目】【的】【特】【性】【来】【看】【,】【“】【自】【己】【”】【虽】【然】【必】【不】【可】【少】【,】【但】【补】【写】【的】【内】【容】【才】【是】【文】【题】【的】【核】【心】【所】【在】【,】【体】【现】【着】【文】【章】【的】【立】【意】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【半】【命】【题】【作】【文】【的】【写】【作】【,】【关】【键】【在】【于】【补】【题】【,】【补】【好】【了】【题】【目】【,】【就】【跟】【全】【命】【题】【作】【文】【差】【不】【多】【了】【。】【那】【这】【道】【文】【题】【如】【何】【补】【写】【呢】【?】【可】【与】【立】【意】【相】【结】【合】【,】【从】【以】【下】【几】【个】【角】【度】【进】【行】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【、】【着】【眼】【于】【自】【我】【成】【长】【立】【意】【补】【题】【。】【成】【长】【路】【上】【,】【每】【个】【同】【学】【都】【会】【遇】【到】【许】【多】【与】【自】【身】【有】【关】【的】【事】【情】【。】【比】【如】【心】【生】【自】【卑】【、】【忌】【妒】【,】【需】【要】【战】【胜】【自】【己】【;】【遇】【到】【困】【难】【、】【挫】【折】【,】【需】【要】【鼓】【励】【自】【己】【;】【自】【己】【做】【了】【一】【件】【非】【常】【了】【不】【起】【的】【事】【,】【传】【递】【了】【“】【正】【能】【量】【”】【,】【表】【扬】【一】【下】【自】【己】【;】【与】【家】【长】【、】【同】【学】【相】【处】【,】【总】【是】【无】【意】【中】【伤】【害】【他】【们】【,】【于】【是】【“】【解】【剖】【”】【一】【下】【自】【己】【;】【发】【现】【自】【己】【身】【上】【存】【在】【许】【多】【坏】【毛】【病】【,】【决】【定】【改】【变】【自】【己】【;】【制】【定】【了】【一】【个】【全】【新】【的】【奋】【斗】【目】【标】【,】【憋】【着】【一】【股】【劲】【儿】【挑】【战】【一】【下】【自】【己】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【二】【、】【着】【眼】【于】【社】【会】【生】【活】【立】【意】【补】【题】【。】【这】【时】【候】【题】【目】【中】【的】【“】【自】【己】【”】【就】【可】【以】【是】【他】【人】【了】【。】【譬】【如】【针】【对】【一】【些】【科】【研】【人】【员】【玩】【命】【的】【工】【作】【,】【导】【致】【英】【年】【早】【逝】【,】【你】【想】【写】【一】【篇】【文】【章】【提】【醒】【人】【们】【要】【劳】【逸】【结】【合】【,】【珍】【惜】【自】【己】【的】【身】【体】【,】【就】【可】【把】【题】【目】【补】【为】【“】【珍】【爱】【自】【己】【”】【。】【针】【对】【许】【多】【官】【员】【贪】【污】【腐】【败】【、】【纷】【纷】【落】【马】【这】【一】【现】【象】【,】【你】【想】【提】【醒】【同】【样】【在】【政】【府】【部】【门】【工】【作】【的】【爸】【爸】【要】【洁】【身】【自】【好】【,】【管】【住】【自】【己】【,】【就】【可】【把】【题】【目】【补】【为】【“】【管】【好】【自】【己】【”】【。】【针】【对】【不】【时】【上】【演】【的】【“】【老】【年】【人】【跌】【倒】【无】【人】【扶】【”】【现】【象】【,】【你】【想】【大】【声】【疾】【呼】【,】【希】【望】【每】【个】【人】【都】【能】【换】【位】【思】【考】【,】【勇】【敢】【地】【伸】【出】【援】【助】【之】【手】【,】【你】【就】【可】【把】【题】【目】【补】【为】【“】【假】【如】【那】【是】【你】【自】【己】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【三】【、】【跳】【出】【普】【通】【的】【“】【自】【我】【”】【,】【着】【眼】【自】【然】【、】【环】【保】【等】【方】【面】【进】【行】【立】【意】【补】【题】【。】【比】【如】【现】【在】【雾】【霾】【天】【气】【的】【发】【生】【频】【率】【越】【来】【越】【高】【,】【公】【众】【怨】【声】【载】【道】【,】【你】【就】【可】【以】【雾】【霾】【的】【口】【气】【写】【一】【篇】【文】【章】【:】【“】【我】【恨】【我】【自】【己】【”】【,】【痛】【陈】【自】【己】【的】【罪】【过】【,】【向】【人】【类】【负】【荆】【请】【罪】【,】【从】【而】【巧】【妙】【的】【提】【示】【各】【种】【环】【保】【问】【题】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【以】【上】【三】【种】【立】【意】【角】【度】【,】【第】【一】【种】【是】【最】【基】【本】【的】【,】【第】【二】【种】【稍】【有】【提】【升】【,】【第】【三】【种】【别】【具】【一】【格】【。】【同】【学】【们】【可】【根】【据】【自】【己】【的】【素】【材】【积】【累】【和】【写】【作】【水】【平】【,】【选】【择】【最】【适】【合】【自】【己】【的】【一】【个】【角】【度】【进】【行】【立】【意】【、】【补】【题】【、】【写】【作】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【高】【分】【范】【文】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【恨】【我】【自】【己】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【李】【腊】【梅】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【恨】【我】【自】【己】【,】【为】【什】【么】【要】【公】【然】【撒】【谎】【,】【袒】【护】【表】【弟】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【是】【一】【个】【周】【末】【,】【表】【弟】【跟】【着】【姨】【妈】【来】【我】【家】【玩】【。】【妈】【妈】【让】【我】【领】【着】【表】【弟】【去】【小】【区】【对】【面】【的】【美】【食】【城】【吃】【烧】【烤】【。】【表】【弟】【一】【听】【,】【一】【蹦】【三】【尺】【高】【,】【口】【水】【恨】【不】【得】【马】【上】【就】【要】【流】【下】【来】【,】【拉】【着】【我】【的】【手】【直】【奔】【楼】【下】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【进】【了】【美】【食】【城】【,】【我】【径】【直】【来】【到】【“】【麻】【麻】【香】【烧】【烤】【店】【”】【,】【这】【家】【的】【羊】【肉】【串】【肉】【质】【鲜】【,】【分】【量】【足】【,】【口】【味】【好】【,】【我】【吃】【过】【多】【次】【,】【印】【象】【特】【别】【深】【刻】【。】【我】【们】【要】【了】【四】【串】【羊】【肉】【串】【,】【外】【加】【两】【根】【烤】【素】【肠】【。】【表】【弟】【迫】【不】【及】【待】【地】【拿】【起】【一】【根】【羊】【肉】【串】【,】【大】【口】【吃】【起】【来】【,】【那】【样】【子】【可】【爱】【极】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【边】【吃】【边】【往】【家】【中】【走】【去】【,】【人】【行】【道】【旁】【的】【临】【时】【停】【车】【位】【上】【,】【一】【溜】【儿】【停】【着】【许】【多】【私】【家】【车】【。】【表】【弟】【边】【吃】【边】【用】【穿】【羊】【肉】【串】【儿】【的】【竹】【签】【对】【着】【路】【边】【汽】【车】【指】【指】【点】【点】【,】【特】【别】【兴】【奋】【。】【突】【然】【,】【表】【弟】【手】【中】【挥】【舞】【的】【竹】【签】【划】【到】【了】【一】【辆】【崭】【新】【的】【商】【务】【车】【车】【身】【上】【,】【一】【条】【1】【0】【厘】【米】【左】【右】【的】【划】【痕】【清】【晰】【可】【见】【。】【表】【弟】【并】【没】【有】【意】【识】【到】【问】【题】【的】【严】【重】【性】【,】【甚】【至】【还】【不】【知】【道】【自】【己】【已】【经】【闯】【了】【祸】【。】【可】【我】【知】【道】【,】【这】【道】【划】【痕】【处】【理】【一】【下】【,】【至】【少】【也】【要】【好】【几】【百】【元】【。】【我】【一】【把】【握】【住】【表】【弟】【的】【手】【,】【低】【声】【命】【令】【他】【立】【即】【扔】【掉】【手】【中】【的】【竹】【签】【,】【赶】【快】【离】【开】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【可】【令】【人】【沮】【丧】【的】【是】【,】【那】【车】【上】【居】【然】【有】【人】【,】【是】【一】【个】【4】【0】【多】【岁】【的】【男】【子】【,】【而】【且】【他】【似】【乎】【意】【识】【到】【了】【什】【么】【,】【打】【开】【了】【车】【门】【出】【来】【察】【看】【。】【完】【了】【,】【完】【了】【,】【我】【的】【鼻】【尖】【直】【冒】【汗】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【果】【然】【,】【那】【男】【子】【追】【了】【上】【来】【,】【拦】【在】【我】【们】【前】【面】【,】【说】【刚】【才】【好】【像】【看】【到】【了】【表】【弟】【用】【竹】【签】【在】【他】【的】【车】【身】【上】【划】【了】【一】【下】【,】【让】【我】【们】【赔】【5】【0】【0】【元】【钱】【。】【看】【到】【这】【人】【的】【架】【势】【,】【表】【弟】【一】【下】【吓】【哭】【了】【,】【连】【说】【没】【有】【划】【他】【的】【车】【。】【可】【那】【人】【说】【什】【么】【也】【不】【相】【信】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【时】【,】【我】【努】【力】【镇】【静】【下】【来】【,】【让】【那】【人】【拿】【出】【证】【据】【来】【,】【如】【果】【没】【有】【真】【凭】【实】【据】【,】【凭】【什】【么】【说】【是】【我】【们】【划】【的】【。】【那】【名】【男】【子】【还】【真】【被】【我】【镇】【住】【了】【,】【不】【过】【,】【他】【并】【没】【有】【放】【弃】【,】【而】【是】【指】【着】【我】【说】【:】【“】【你】【就】【是】【证】【据】【,】【你】【肯】【定】【亲】【眼】【看】【到】【了】【。】【你】【可】【是】【一】【名】【中】【学】【生】【,】【中】【学】【生】【可】【不】【能】【撒】【谎】【,】【你】【摸】【摸】【自】【己】【的】【良】【心】【,】【你】【说】【实】【话】【。】【”】【面】【对】【着】【那】【么】【多】【围】【观】【的】【人】【群】【,】【我】【觉】【得】【自】【己】【的】【脸】【很】【烫】【。】【但】【我】【已】【没】【有】【退】【路】【了】【,】【我】【抹】【起】【了】【眼】【泪】【,】【说】【自】【己】【根】【本】【就】【没】【有】【看】【到】【,】【是】【那】【名】【男】【子】【以】【大】【欺】【小】【,】【吓】【唬】【我】【们】【。】【我】【甚】【至】【还】【让】【那】【人】【报】【警】【。】【不】【少】【围】【观】【的】【人】【也】【劝】【起】【了】【那】【名】【男】【子】【。】【男】【子】【无】【可】【奈】【何】【,】【只】【得】【放】【我】【们】【走】【了】【。】【终】【于】【逃】【过】【了】【一】【劫】【,】【回】【到】【家】【中】【,】【我】【们】【也】【没】【敢】【把】【这】【事】【对】【父】【母】【讲】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【可】【是】【每】【每】【想】【起】【这】【件】【事】【,】【我】【就】【觉】【得】【非】【常】【内】【疚】【,】【为】【自】【己】【的】【不】【诚】【实】【而】【白】【责】【。】【我】【恨】【自】【己】【,】【为】【什】【么】【当】【时】【就】【不】【敢】【勇】【于】【承】【认】【错】【误】【?】【现】【在】【可】【好】【,】【整】【天】【难】【以】【心】【安】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【不】【知】【那】【名】【男】【子】【现】【在】【在】【哪】【?】【如】【果】【能】【找】【到】【他】【,】【我】【一】【定】【承】【担】【错】【误】【,】【请】【求】【他】【的】【原】【谅】【,】【并】【且】【用】【自】【己】【的】【压】【岁】【钱】【对】【他】【进】【行】【赔】【偿】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【想】【今】【后】【,】【我】【绝】【不】【会】【再】【犯】【这】【样】【的】【错】【误】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【品】【读】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【篇】【作】【文】【补】【题】【令】【人】【耳】【目】【一】【新】【,】【立】【意】【不】【俗】【,】【表】【达】【生】【动】【,】【引】【人】【入】【胜】【。】【文】【章】【先】【用】【“】【我】【恨】【我】【自】【己】【,】【为】【什】【么】【要】【公】【然】【撒】【谎】【,】【袒】【护】【表】【弟】【”】【来】【设】【疑】【激】【趣】【,】【引】【发】【下】【文】【;】【然】【后】【记】【叙】【表】【弟】【用】【竹】【签】【划】【坏】【路】【边】【汽】【车】【,】【“】【我】【”】【帮】【他】【圆】【谎】【的】【经】【过】【,】【交】【代】【了】【“】【我】【”】【恨】【自】【己】【的】【缘】【由】【;】【最】【后】【点】【题】【,】【表】【达】【自】【己】【的】【忏】【悔】【,】【给】【人】【以】【深】【刻】【的】【启】【示】【。】【文】【中】【情】【节】【富】【于】【变】【化】【,】【能】【运】【用】【多】【种】【方】【法】【写】【人】【,】【有】【些】【细】【节】【描】【写】【非】【常】【传】【神】【,】【人】【物】【非】【常】【鲜】【活】【,】【令】【人】【印】【象】【深】【刻】【。】

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【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【不】【少】【中】【学】【生】【在】【作】【文】【课】【上】【常】【常】【感】【到】【“】【没】【什】【么】【可】【写】【”】【,】【或】【抱】【着】【“】【抓】【到】【一】【个】【算】【一】【个】【”】【,】【“】【拾】【到】【篮】【里】【就】【是】【菜】【”】【的】【态】【度】【,】【这】【是】【不】【可】【取】【的】【。】【没】【有】【米】【,】【当】【然】【无】【以】【成】【粥】【;】【有】【了】【米】【呢】【,】【关】【键】【还】【要】【注】【意】【舂】【洗】【,】【去】【除】【杂】【质】【,】【这】【样】【烧】【成】【的】【粥】【才】【香】【甜】【可】【口】【。】【怎】【样】【把】【自】【己】【所】【汲】【取】【的】【材】【料】【用】【在】【作】【文】【里】【呢】【?】【这】【涉】【及】【文】【章】【的】【选】【材】【问】【题】【。】【选】【材】【就】【是】【细】【筛】【精】【选】【材】【料】【,】【即】【在】【确】【立】【文】【章】【主】【旨】【的】【基】【础】【上】【对】【占】【有】【的】【材】【料】【进】【行】【取】【舍】【的】【构】【思】【过】【程】【。】【如】【果】【选】【材】【得】【当】【,】【可】【以】【增】【强】【文】【章】【的】【表】【现】【力】【,】【让】【同】【学】【和】【老】【师】【刮】【目】【相】【看】【。】【如】【果】【选】【材】【不】【当】【,】【就】【会】【干】【扰】【、】【冲】【淡】【文】【章】【的】【主】【题】【,】【影】【响】【、】【削】【弱】【文】【章】【的】【说】【服】【力】【、】【感】【染】【力】【。】【从】【这】【个】【意】【义】【上】【说】【,】【选】【材】【的】【确】【是】【一】【门】【高】【超】【的】【写】【作】【艺】【术】【。】【那】【么】【,】【如】【何】【艺】【术】【地】【构】【建】【作】【文】【的】【选】【材】【策】【略】【呢】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【、】【切】【题】【性】【策】【略】【:】【体】【现】【选】【材】【的】【“】【准】【确】【”】【度】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【切】【题】【,】【指】【文】【章】【中】【所】【选】【用】【的】【材】【料】【要】【符】【合】【中】【心】【的】【需】【要】【,】【使】【材】【料】【的】【含】【义】【与】【主】【题】【完】【全】【一】【致】【。】【因】【为】【文】【章】【的】【中】【心】【是】【蕴】【涵】【渗】【透】【在】【材】【料】【之】【中】【的】【,】【特】【定】【的】【材】【料】【只】【能】【表】【现】【一】【个】【特】【定】【的】【中】【心】【,】【所】【以】【选】【材】【必】【须】【切】【题】【。】【要】【力】【求】【选】【取】【最】【能】【表】【现】【中】【心】【的】【材】【料】【,】【果】【断】【舍】【弃】【与】【中】【心】【无】【关】【的】【材】【料】【。】【万】【不】【可】【把】【跟】【中】【心】【毫】【无】【关】【系】【的】【材】【料】【堆】【砌】【起】【来】【硬】【凑】【成】【一】【篇】【文】【章】【。】【这】【好】【比】【“】【煮】【鸡】【不】【煺】【毛】【”】【,】【鸡】【肉】【本】【是】【珍】【馐】【佳】【肴】【,】【若】【连】【毛】【一】【起】【煮】【,】【谁】【还】【愿】【吃】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【熟】【知】【的】【鲁】【迅】【先】【生】【的】【小】【说】【《】【孔】【乙】【己】【》】【,】【它】【之】【所】【以】【脍】【炙】【人】【口】【,】【恐】【怕】【跟】【作】【者】【精】【心】【的】【选】【材】【不】【无】【关】【系】【。】【文】【章】【浓】【墨】【重】【彩】【地】【详】【写】【孔】【乙】【己】【那】【又】【脏】【又】【破】【的】【长】【衫】【、】【为】【掩】【饰】【偷】【书】【的】【辩】【白】【、】【之】【乎】【者】【也】【的】【谈】【吐】【以】【及】【教】【认】【“】【茴】【”】【字】【的】【四】【种】【写】【法】【。】【这】【些】【题】【材】【表】【现】【了】【孔】【乙】【己】【的】【迂】【腐】【、】【麻】【木】【,】【充】【分】【说】【明】【他】【受】【封】【建】【教】【育】【思】【想】【毒】【害】【之】【深】【,】【说】【明】【科】【举】【制】【度】【不】【是】【把】【人】【培】【养】【成】【丁】【举】【人】【那】【样】【的】【损】【人】【者】【,】【就】【是】【把】【人】【糟】【蹋】【成】【孔】【乙】【己】【这】【样】【的】【被】【损】【害】【者】【。】【而】【对】【孔】【乙】【己】【如】【何】【偷】【书】【、】【如】【何】【挨】【打】【的】【过】【程】【,】【虽】【从】【侧】【面】【略】【写】【,】【但】【这】【些】【材】【料】【也】【与】【表】【达】【中】【心】【有】【关】【系】【,】【只】【不】【过】【作】【者】【采】【用】【这】【种】【有】【正】【有】【侧】【,】【有】【详】【有】【略】【的】【描】【写】【,】【使】【故】【事】【情】【节】【有】【起】【有】【伏】【,】【一】【味】【详】【或】【一】【味】【略】【都】【会】【使】【读】【者】【感】【到】【厌】【倦】【。】【总】【之】【,】【材】【料】【要】【服】【从】【“】【意】【”】【的】【安】【排】【,】【要】【以】【“】【意】【”】【统】【材】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【切】【题】【的】【问】【题】【如】【此】【重】【要】【,】【而】【中】【学】【生】【作】【文】【中】【的】【选】【材】【毛】【病】【却】【又】【常】【常】【出】【在】【这】【里】【。】【究】【其】【原】【因】【有】【二】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【.】【 】【不】【勤】【于】【排】【列】【筛】【选】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【些】【学】【生】【写】【作】【文】【喜】【欢】【速】【成】【,】【提】【笔】【便】【写】【,】【写】【完】【后】【忽】【然】【感】【到】【还】【有】【更】【切】【题】【的】【材】【料】【。】【怎】【么】【办】【?】【删】【去】【重】【写】【。】【倘】【在】【平】【时】【,】【倒】【也】【罢】【了】【;】【若】【是】【限】【时】【作】【文】【,】【删】【吧】【不】【允】【许】【,】【不】【删】【吧】【却】【不】【甘】【心】【。】【这】【样】【岂】【不】【搞】【得】【很】【尴】【尬】【?】【如】【果】【在】【动】【笔】【前】【给】【自】【己】【留】【点】【时】【间】【,】【将】【所】【有】【能】【够】【想】【到】【的】【材】【料】【都】【集】【中】【起】【来】【,】【给】【它】【们】【排】【排】【队】【,】【从】【中】【确】【定】【哪】【些】【材】【料】【该】【用】【,】【哪】【些】【材】【料】【不】【该】【用】【,】【哪】【些】【材】【料】【先】【用】【,】【哪】【些】【材】【料】【后】【用】【,】【经】【过】【一】【番】【排】【列】【筛】【选】【,】【就】【不】【会】【手】【忙】【脚】【乱】【、】【顾】【此】【失】【彼】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【.】【 】【不】【善】【于】【选】【用】【辅】【助】【材】【料】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【的】【学】【生】【时】【常】【感】【叹】【,】【同】【一】【件】【事】【、】【同】【一】【个】【人】【,】【别】【人】【写】【出】【来】【就】【格】【外】【细】【致】【、】【生】【动】【,】【而】【一】【到】【自】【己】【手】【里】【就】【干】【瘪】【得】【很】【。】【原】【因】【在】【于】【选】【材】【时】【只】【限】【于】【一】【些】【直】【接】【的】【、】【正】【面】【的】【表】【现】【主】【题】【的】【材】【料】【,】【而】【对】【那】【些】【间】【接】【的】【、】【侧】【面】【的】【材】【料】【则】【熟】【视】【无】【睹】【,】【冷】【落】【不】【用】【。】【这】【些】【辅】【助】【材】【料】【表】【面】【看】【上】【去】【似】【与】【写】【作】【意】【图】【没】【有】【多】【大】【关】【系】【,】【可】【是】【经】【过】【作】【者】【精】【巧】【的】【剪】【裁】【加】【工】【,】【却】【可】【以】【出】【人】【意】【料】【地】【对】【主】【题】【起】【到】【烘】【托】【、】【反】【衬】【、】【强】【化】【的】【作】【用】【,】【使】【文】【章】【血】【肉】【丰】【满】【,】【细】【腻】【感】【人】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【二】【、】【真】【实】【性】【策】【略】【:】【体】【现】【选】【材】【的】【“】【可】【信】【”】【度】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【清】【代】【学】【者】【钱】【谦】【益】【说】【:】【“】【真】【则】【精】【金】【美】【玉】【,】【伪】【则】【瓦】【砾】【粪】【土】【也】【。】【”】【这】【句】【话】【告】【诉】【我】【们】【在】【作】【文】【选】【材】【时】【,】【不】【只】【要】【看】【材】【料】【是】【否】【切】【题】【,】【还】【要】【看】【它】【是】【否】【真】【实】【,】【是】【否】【具】【有】【“】【可】【信】【”】【度】【。】【只】【有】【真】【实】【,】【只】【有】【信】【实】【,】【文】【章】【才】【有】【生】【命】【力】【,】【才】【能】【感】【动】【人】【、】【打】【动】【人】【。】【选】【材】【真】【实】【包】【含】【两】【方】【面】【内】【容】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【?】【郾】【 】【生】【活】【真】【实】【:】【选】【取】【熟】【悉】【的】【材】【料】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【真】【实】【的】【材】【料】【,】【必】【然】【是】【为】【同】【学】【们】【所】【熟】【知】【的】【材】【料】【。】【法】【国】【艺】【术】【大】【师】【罗】【丹】【说】【过】【:】【“】【最】【美】【的】【题】【材】【摆】【在】【你】【们】【面】【前】【,】【那】【就】【是】【你】【们】【最】【熟】【悉】【的】【人】【物】【。】【”】【熟】【悉】【的】【材】【料】【,】【写】【起】【来】【才】【能】【得】【心】【应】【手】【。】【假】【如】【没】【有】【登】【过】【东】【岳】【,】【决】【不】【会】【有】【“】【一】【览】【众】【山】【小】【”】【的】【感】【受】【;】【如】【果】【没】【有】【见】【过】【庐】【山】【,】【一】【定】【不】【会】【产】【生】【“】【飞】【流】【直】【下】【三】【千】【尺】【”】【的】【共】【鸣】【。】【不】【置】【身】【于】【枫】【林】【晚】【景】【,】【哪】【有】【“】【霜】【叶】【红】【于】【二】【月】【花】【”】【之】【赞】【叹】【;】【不】【亲】【历】【水】【乡】【春】【天】【,】【怎】【会】【直】【抒】【“】【能】【不】【忆】【江】【南】【”】【之】【胸】【臆】【。】【中】【学】【生】【们】【初】【学】【写】【作】【,】【应】【该】【选】【取】【自】【己】【最】【为】【熟】【悉】【的】【人】【或】【事】【来】【写】【。】【在】【童】【年】【的】【漫】【长】【记】【忆】【中】【,】【一】【定】【有】【我】【们】【终】【生】【难】【忘】【的】【趣】【事】【;】【在】【朝】【夕】【相】【处】【的】【伙】【伴】【中】【,】【一】【定】【有】【我】【们】【情】【投】【意】【合】【的】【挚】【友】【;】【在】【成】【长】【的】【日】【历】【里】【,】【一】【定】【记】【载】【着】【我】【们】【的】【成】【功】【与】【失】【败】【。】【何】【不】【把】【它】【们】【拿】【来】【,】【使】【之】【成】【为】【同】【学】【们】【作】【文】【的】【最】【佳】【题】【材】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【朱】【自】【清】【的】【《】【背】【影】【》】【,】【一】【直】【是】【初】【中】【课】【本】【的】【保】【留】【篇】【目】【,】【感】【动】【过】【一】【代】【又】【一】【代】【读】【者】【,】【教】【育】【了】【一】【代】【又】【一】【代】【学】【子】【。】【然】【而】【,】【这】【篇】【文】【章】【的】【语】【言】【极】【其】【质】【朴】【无】【华】【,】【何】【以】【这】【般】【感】【人】【至】【深】【?】【一】【个】【重】【要】【原】【因】【就】【是】【作】【者】【写】【的】【是】【自】【己】【的】【亲】【身】【经】【历】【、】【亲】【身】【感】【受】【,】【人】【真】【事】【真】【,】【情】【真】【意】【真】【。】【每】【个】【人】【都】【有】【自】【己】【的】【家】【庭】【,】【家】【庭】【是】【同】【学】【们】【生】【活】【的】【摇】【篮】【。】【家】【庭】【里】【有】【我】【们】【最】【熟】【悉】【的】【人】【和】【事】【,】【有】【我】【们】【最】【受】【感】【动】【的】【材】【料】【。】【这】【儿】【有】【温】【馨】【,】【有】【和】【谐】【,】【有】【天】【下】【最】【博】【大】【深】【沉】【、】【最】【细】【腻】【真】【挚】【的】【亲】【情】【,】【父】【母】【之】【恩】【、】【祖】【孙】【之】【爱】【、】【手】【足】【之】【情】【…】【…】【但】【这】【里】【也】【不】【常】【是】【宁】【静】【的】【港】【湾】【,】【有】【时】【也】【会】【风】【波】【骤】【起】【,】【让】【人】【好】【生】【烦】【恼】【。】【其】【实】【,】【亲】【昵】【也】【罢】【,】【唠】【叨】【也】【罢】【,】【攀】【谈】【也】【罢】【,】【争】【执】【也】【罢】【,】【此】【间】【蕴】【涵】【的】【永】【远】【是】【人】【类】【最】【圣】【洁】【的】【情】【愫】【。】【还】【记】【否】【?】【那】【委】【屈】【后】【的】【一】【句】【慰】【藉】【,】【那】【挫】【折】【后】【的】【一】【次】【抚】【摸】【,】【不】【似】【那】【春】【风】【细】【雨】【滋】【润】【心】【头】【?】【无】【须】【惊】【讶】【,】【家】【庭】【生】【活】【可】【能】【是】【平】【凡】【的】【甚】【至】【是】【平】【淡】【的】【,】【家】【庭】【故】【事】【可】【能】【是】【单】【纯】【的】【甚】【至】【是】【单】【调】【的】【,】【但】【只】【要】【用】【心】【体】【会】【,】【努】【力】【挖】【掘】【出】【心】【灵】【深】【处】【某】【段】【不】【寻】【常】【的】【历】【程】【,】【或】【许】【记】【下】【亲】【人】【间】【的】【一】【个】【细】【小】【动】【作】【、】【一】【个】【细】【微】【情】【节】【、】【一】【个】【眼】【神】【、】【一】【种】【姿】【势】【,】【以】【此】【传】【达】【自】【己】【真】【真】【切】【切】【的】【亲】【情】【感】【受】【和】【对】【家】【庭】【生】【活】【的】【深】【刻】【理】【解】【,】【就】【会】【写】【出】【一】【个】【动】【人】【的】【家】【,】【让】【人】【震】【颤】【,】【让】【人】【共】【鸣】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【选】【材】【真】【实】【是】【文】【章】【的】【生】【命】【保】【证】【。】【那】【些】【胡】【编】【乱】【造】【的】【所】【谓】【“】【感】【人】【”】【故】【事】【,】【只】【会】【让】【读】【者】【反】【感】【。】【有】【一】【些】【学】【生】【为】【了】【表】【明】【自】【己】【的】【“】【崇】【高】【”】【,】【文】【章】【始】【终】【不】【离】【“】【车】【上】【让】【座】【”】【、】【“】【捐】【钱】【救】【灾】【”】【“】【入】【水】【救】【人】【”】【等】【。】【我】【们】【希】【望】【社】【会】【充】【满】【关】【怀】【,】【充】【满】【和】【谐】【,】【可】【是】【我】【们】【不】【希】【望】【学】【生】【的】【文】【章】【里】【始】【终】【充】【满】【假】【话】【、】【充】【满】【谎】【言】【。】【俗】【话】【说】【:】【不】【真】【读】【者】【无】【。】【选】【择】【熟】【悉】【的】【材】【料】【,】【固】【然】【要】【抛】【弃】【那】【些】【胡】【乱】【地】【编】【造】【故】【事】【、】【想】【当】【然】【地】【塑】【造】【人】【物】【以】【及】【无】【中】【生】【有】【地】【捏】【造】【感】【情】【的】【做】【法】【。】【然】【而】【,】【如】【果】【一】【味】【地】【直】【录】【生】【活】【,】【不】【作】【任】【何】【剪】【接】【加】【工】【,】【甚】【至】【把】【那】【些】【不】【成】【熟】【的】【感】【受】【、】【不】【健】【康】【的】【情】【调】【也】【带】【进】【文】【章】【中】【来】【,】【这】【样】【的】【文】【章】【只】【会】【黯】【然】【失】【色】【,】【何】【谈】【动】【人】【?】【这】【也】【正】【是】【下】【文】【要】【谈】【到】【的】【选】【材】【真】【实】【的】【又】【一】【方】【面】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【.】【 】【艺】【术】【真】【实】【:】【提】【炼】【典】【型】【材】【料】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【没】【有】【真】【实】【生】【活】【,】【就】【没】【有】【文】【章】【的】【源】【泉】【。】【没】【有】【艺】【术】【真】【实】【,】【文】【章】【就】【失】【去】【了】【感】【人】【的】【魅】【力】【,】【是】【谓】【“】【无】【假】【文】【章】【少】【”】【。】【“】【假】【”】【,】【不】【是】【选】【材】【上】【的】【“】【虚】【假】【”】【,】【而】【是】【艺】【术】【上】【的】【“】【虚】【构】【”】【,】【即】【在】【真】【实】【生】【活】【的】【基】【础】【上】【进】【行】【技】【巧】【性】【的】【加】【工】【,】【如】【设】【置】【悬】【念】【、】【修】【饰】【语】【言】【等】【。】【它】【摒】【弃】【作】【文】【中】【对】【生】【活】【原】【封】【不】【动】【的】【反】【映】【,】【力】【求】【化】【实】【为】【虚】【、】【由】【虚】【而】【实】【、】【虚】【实】【相】【生】【。】【一】【堆】【乱】【石】【荒】【草】【,】【本】【无】【多】【少】【美】【感】【,】【很】【有】【可】【能】【成】【为】【扫】【除】【的】【对】【象】【,】【但】【在】【画】【家】【笔】【下】【,】【却】【是】【一】【幅】【绝】【美】【的】【天】【然】【图】【画】【。】【这】【“】【图】【画】【”】【,】【是】【画】【家】【心】【之】【感】【悟】【,】【是】【一】【种】【艺】【术】【的】【真】【实】【。】【由】【“】【乱】【石】【荒】【草】【”】【到】【“】【图】【画】【”】【,】【有】【一】【个】【提】【炼】【加】【工】【的】【过】【程】【,】【这】【个】【过】【程】【就】【是】【由】【“】【真】【”】【到】【“】【假】【”】【、】【由】【“】【生】【活】【真】【实】【”】【到】【“】【艺】【术】【真】【实】【”】【。】【同】【样】【,】【作】【家】【在】【选】【材】【中】【也】【常】【循】【此】【规】【律】【,】【小】【到】【一】【句】【话】【,】【大】【至】【一】【个】【人】【物】【,】【都】【要】【作】【艺】【术】【处】【理】【,】【进】【行】【必】【要】【的】【“】【包】【装】【”】【。】【鲁】【迅】【先】【生】【在】【《】【阿】【Q】【正】【传】【》】【中】【,】【把】【现】【实】【生】【活】【里】【许】【多】【人】【相】【类】【似】【的】【性】【格】【浓】【缩】【并】【加】【以】【夸】【张】【,】【集】【中】【于】【阿】【Q】【这】【个】【人】【物】【身】【上】【,】【尽】【管】【阿】【Q】【这】【个】【人】【物】【在】【现】【实】【生】【活】【中】【是】【没】【有】【的】【,】【但】【他】【的】【性】【格】【却】【能】【在】【许】【多】【人】【身】【上】【找】【出】【来】【。】【这】【个】【放】【大】【的】【、】【包】【装】【了】【的】【阿】【Q】【性】【格】【,】【更】【典】【型】【、】【更】【集】【中】【地】【反】【映】【了】【人】【物】【的】【本】【质】【特】【征】【,】【从】【而】【成】【为】【文】【学】【史】【上】【的】【不】【朽】【形】【象】【。】【这】【里】【要】【告】【诉】【同】【学】【们】【,】【在】【作】【文】【中】【,】【无】【论】【是】【写】【人】【、】【叙】【事】【,】【还】【是】【状】【物】【,】【很】【需】【要】【豁】【达】【一】【点】【、】【变】【通】【一】【点】【、】【灵】【巧】【一】【点】【,】【既】【尊】【重】【生】【活】【又】【不】【拘】【泥】【于】【生】【活】【原】【色】【,】【方】【能】【使】【文】【章】【达】【到】【反】【映】【生】【活】【、】【服】【务】【生】【活】【并】【高】【于】【生】【活】【的】【目】【的】【。】【这】【样】【的】【文】【章】【,】【才】【更】【富】【有】【积】【极】【感】【人】【的】【魅】【力】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【三】【、】【新】【颖】【性】【策】【略】【:】【体】【现】【选】【材】【的】【“】【效】【”】【度】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【新】【颖】【的】【材】【料】【,】【就】【是】【别】【人】【没】【有】【发】【现】【使】【用】【过】【的】【材】【料】【,】【抑】【或】【别】【人】【写】【过】【却】【还】【能】【从】【中】【写】【出】【新】【意】【的】【材】【料】【。】【材】【料】【新】【颖】【生】【动】【,】【写】【起】【来】【才】【能】【留】【有】【回】【味】【,】【读】【起】【来】【才】【能】【生】【动】【活】【泼】【。】【这】【样】【来】【选】【材】【,】【必】【能】【使】【作】【文】【产】【生】【令】【人】【耳】【目】【一】【新】【之】【效】【果】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【学】【生】【在】【选】【材】【过】【程】【中】【常】【有】【这】【样】【的】【困】【惑】【:】【自】【己】【与】【其】【他】【同】【学】【生】【活】【、】【处】【境】【没】【什】【么】【大】【差】【别】【,】【日】【子】【平】【淡】【得】【近】【乎】【于】【单】【调】【,】【能】【有】【什】【么】【新】【颖】【的】【素】【材】【呢】【?】【写】【同】【窗】【总】【难】【忘】【“】【半】【块】【橡】【皮】【”】【,】【写】【父】【母】【总】【牵】【扯】【到】【“】【一】【把】【雨】【伞】【”】【,】【写】【爱】【心】【总】【离】【不】【开】【“】【希】【望】【工】【程】【”】【。】【诸】【如】【此】【类】【,】【把】【生】【活】【生】【硬】【分】【割】【,】【使】【人】【读】【之】【生】【厌】【。】【特】【别】【是】【写】【老】【师】【,】【一】【些】【同】【学】【的】【习】【作】【在】【选】【材】【上】【常】【犯】【“】【公】【式】【化】【”】【的】【毛】【病】【,】【一】【般】【都】【写】【老】【师】【有】【一】【头】【被】【粉】【笔】【染】【白】【的】【头】【发】【,】【刻】【苦】【钻】【研】【的】【精】【神】【,】【辛】【勤】【备】【课】【、】【上】【课】【,】【认】【真】【批】【改】【作】【业】【,】【个】【别】【辅】【导】【,】【等】【等】【。】【不】【仅】【如】【此】【,】【许】【多】【学】【生】【的】【老】【师】【都】【有】【一】【个】【惊】【人】【的】【特】【点】【:】【爱】【生】【病】【。】【好】【像】【学】【生】【特】【别】【喜】【欢】【老】【师】【生】【病】【,】【如】【果】【老】【师】【不】【生】【病】【便】【没】【有】【题】【材】【可】【写】【了】【。】【这】【样】【写】【出】【来】【的】【老】【师】【千】【篇】【一】【律】【、】【千】【人】【一】【面】【,】【没】【有】【个】【性】【,】【使】【文】【章】【失】【去】【了】【生】【命】【力】【。】【出】【现】【这】【种】【情】【况】【的】【原】【因】【,】【在】【于】【同】【学】【们】【对】【老】【师】【缺】【乏】【深】【入】【细】【致】【的】【了】【解】【,】【缺】【少】【师】【生】【间】【的】【个】【性】【情】【缘】【,】【由】【于】【“】【眼】【中】【无】【师】【”】【和】【“】【胸】【中】【无】【师】【”】【,】【自】【然】【不】【会】【有】【“】【手】【中】【之】【师】【”】【,】【只】【好】【按】【头】【脑】【中】【固】【有】【的】【“】【老】【师】【模】【式】【”】【凭】【空】【编】【造】【故】【事】【。】【不】【错】【,】【老】【师】【有】【老】【师】【的】【共】【性】【,】【他】【们】【为】【人】【师】【表】【、】【呕】【心】【沥】【血】【、】【对】【学】【生】【关】【怀】【备】【至】【,】【但】【他】【们】【又】【有】【个】【性】【:】【有】【的】【老】【师】【温】【和】【,】【有】【的】【老】【师】【严】【谨】【;】【有】【的】【老】【师】【如】【朋】【友】【,】【有】【的】【老】【师】【是】【长】【者】【;】【有】【的】【老】【师】【似】【一】【缕】【春】【风】【,】【有】【的】【老】【师】【如】【一】【丝】【秋】【雨】【;】【有】【的】【老】【师】【像】【热】【情】【的】【路】【标】【,】【有】【的】【老】【师】【如】【冷】【峻】【的】【航】【灯】【…】【…】【凡】【此】【种】【种】【,】【都】【是】【写】【作】【的】【极】【好】【素】【材】【,】【很】【可】【惜】【,】【这】【些】【个】【性】【化】【的】【老】【师】【,】【我】【们】【很】【多】【同】【学】【却】【没】【能】【留】【心】【。】【怎】【样】【才】【能】【在】【作】【文】【中】【写】【出】【新】【意】【,】【别】【具】【一】【格】【呢】【?】【用】【自】【己】【的】【慧】【眼】【去】【发】【现】【吧】【。】【其】【实】【生】【活】【中】【的】【美】【是】【无】【处】【不】【在】【的】【。】【有】【位】【学】【生】【独】【辟】【蹊】【径】【,】【从】【喜】【、】【怒】【、】【哀】【、】【乐】【四】【方】【面】【选】【取】【了】【四】【件】【事】【,】【展】【示】【了】【一】【位】【老】【师】【献】【身】【教】【育】【事】【业】【的】【精】【神】【风】【貌】【。】【这】【位】【老】【师】【为】【学】【生】【的】【主】【动】【改】【错】【而】【高】【兴】【,】【为】【发】【现】【学】【生】【晨】【练】【掉】【队】【而】【生】【气】【,】【为】【自】【己】【未】【能】【为】【老】【父】【送】【终】【而】【伤】【怀】【,】【为】【参】【加】【学】【生】【的】【毕】【业】【典】【礼】【而】【快】【乐】【。】【独】【特】【新】【颖】【的】【四】【件】【事】【,】【生】【动】【地】【描】【绘】【出】【这】【位】【老】【师】【的】【形】【象】【,】【从】【而】【开】【辟】【了】【选】【材】【的】【新】【天】【地】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【新】【颖】【的】【材】【料】【并】【不】【仅】【指】【那】【些】【新】【奇】【、】【新】【潮】【的】【事】【。】【选】【材】【新】【颖】【,】【不】【是】【要】【学】【生】【脱】【离】【生】【活】【,】【恰】【恰】【是】【要】【他】【们】【对】【生】【活】【予】【以】【观】【照】【,】【用】【心】【体】【会】【生】【活】【。】【大】【凡】【从】【生】【活】【环】【境】【中】【选】【取】【的】【具】【有】【个】【性】【特】【点】【的】【材】【料】【都】【是】【新】【颖】【的】【,】【这】【些】【材】【料】【必】【须】【是】【从】【学】【生】【的】【心】【灵】【里】【歌】【唱】【出】【来】【的】【。】【我】【们】【的】【家】【庭】【生】【活】【、】【学】【校】【生】【活】【、】【社】【会】【生】【活】【是】【那】【么】【丰】【富】【多】【彩】【,】【只】【要】【学】【生】【能】【留】【心】【体】【验】【,】【笔】【触】【何】【愁】【不】【开】【阔】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【期】【待】【着】【中】【学】【生】【在】【作】【文】【中】【能】【自】【觉】【地】【遵】【循】【选】【材】【的】【可】【信】【度】【、】【准】【确】【度】【和】【有】【效】【度】【,】【能】【艺】【术】【地】【构】【建】【好】【自】【己】【的】【选】【材】【策】【略】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】

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