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2019年11月22日 18:37

【<】【p】【>】【年】【夜】【饭】【总】【是】【在】【饭】【吃】【到】【一】【半】【时】【,】【老】【姐】【回】【来】【了】【,】【胡】【乱】【扒】【几】【口】【饭】【,】【回】【到】【楼】【上】【。】【客】【厅】【里】【的】【电】【视】【机】【默】【默】【的】【独】【自】【对】【白】【。】【老】【爸】【,】【一】【壶】【洒】【一】【桌】【菜】【,】【偶】【尔】【眺】【望】【窗】【外】【的】【远】【方】【。】【如】【今】【过】【年】【,】【人】【的】【热】【情】【似】【乎】【冷】【却】【了】【。】【当】【忙】【碌】【被】【清】【闲】【代】【替】【,】【所】【剩】【的】【亦】【无】【非】【是】【孤】【独】【。】【纵】【然】【电】【视】【机】【音】【量】【再】【高】【,】【剧】【情】【再】【精】【彩】【,】【也】【无】【法】【掩】【饰】【内】【心】【的】【寂】【寞】【。】【不】【知】【是】【不】【是】【因】【为】【长】【大】【了】【,】【我】【的】【心】【对】【于】【热】【闹】【与】【温】【暖】【要】【求】【高】【了】【,】【还】【是】【长】【大】【了】【心】【灵】【变】【得】【迟】【钝】【了】【,】【还】【是】【其】【他】【的】【什】【么】【原】【因】【让】【现】【在】【的】【年】【不】【再】【有】【年】【的】【味】【道】【?】【<】【/】【p】【>】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【大】【家】【普】【遍】【认】【为】【衡】【量】【一】【篇】【文】【章】【价】【值】【的】【高】【低】【,】【一】【个】【重】【要】【的】【标】【准】【就】【是】【是】【否】【具】【备】【创】【造】【性】【,】【而】【个】【性】【恰】【恰】【就】【是】【创】【造】【性】【的】【一】【个】【极】【其】【重】【要】【的】【品】【质】【。】【近】【几】【年】【中】【考】【作】【文】【评】【判】【标】【准】【中】【设】【置】【发】【展】【等】【级】【分】【的】【目】【的】【,】【就】【是】【鼓】【励】【在】【写】【作】【的】【某】【些】【方】【面】【具】【有】【创】【造】【个】【性】【和】【发】【展】【潜】【质】【的】【考】【生】【。】【因】【而】【,】【如】【何】【坚】【持】【写】【作】【的】【个】【性】【,】【就】【成】【为】【获】【得】【较】【高】【发】【展】【等】【级】【分】【的】【一】【个】【不】【可】【忽】【略】【的】【难】【点】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【果】【具】【有】【明】【显】【个】【性】【特】【长】【的】【作】【文】【,】【这】【类】【作】【文】【也】【许】【在】【某】【些】【方】【面】【存】【在】【着】【这】【样】【那】【样】【的】【缺】【陷】【,】【但】【是】【单】【凭】【某】【一】【两】【项】【突】【出】【的】【具】【有】【个】【性】【化】【的】【创】【新】【,】【就】【足】【以】【获】【得】【较】【高】【的】【发】【展】【等】【级】【分】【,】【甚】【至】【满】【分】【。】【因】【此】【可】【以】【说】【,】【发】【展】【等】【级】【的】【高】【分】【都】【与】【作】【者】【的】【写】【作】【个】【性】【直】【接】【相】【关】【,】【无】【论】【是】【对】【生】【活】【的】【令】【人】【耳】【目】【一】【新】【的】【深】【刻】【思】【考】【,】【还】【是】【对】【语】【言】【的】【独】【特】【性】【的】【艺】【术】【感】【悟】【,】【都】【可】【以】【获】【得】【一】【个】【突】【出】【的】【发】【展】【等】【级】【分】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【写】【作】【个】【性】【的】【形】【成】【是】【作】【者】【的】【写】【作】【技】【巧】【和】【风】【格】【开】【始】【走】【向】【成】【熟】【的】【表】【现】【,】【需】【要】【考】【生】【日】【常】【的】【不】【懈】【追】【求】【和】【长】【期】【的】【实】【践】【,】【在】【坚】【忍】【不】【拔】【的】【目】【标】【追】【求】【和】【写】【作】【实】【践】【中】【感】【悟】【写】【作】【,】【最】【终】【才】【能】【形】【成】【独】【特】【而】【成】【熟】【的】【写】【作】【个】【性】【。】【突】【出】【个】【性】【,】【主】【要】【表】【现】【在】【创】【新】【上】【,】【我】【们】【要】【在】【平】【时】【习】【作】【中】【,】【注】【意】【通】【过】【模】【仿】【借】【鉴】【,】【并】【融】【入】【自】【己】【的】【思】【考】【,】【以】【形】【成】【个】【性】【化】【的】【表】【达】【风】【格】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【么】【,】【我】【们】【在】【平】【时】【的】【作】【文】【训】【练】【中】【,】【应】【注】【意】【从】【哪】【些】【方】【面】【来】【突】【出】【个】【性】【呢】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【、】【认】【识】【深】【刻】【、】【见】【解】【新】【颖】【,】【彰】【显】【深】【思】【个】【性】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【世】【界】【上】【形】【形】【色】【色】【的】【事】【物】【都】【有】【各】【自】【的】【外】【在】【表】【现】【和】【内】【在】【本】【质】【。】【要】【深】【入】【本】【质】【必】【须】【有】【一】【个】【概】【括】【的】【过】【程】【:】【即】【一】【个】【由】【此】【及】【彼】【、】【由】【表】【及】【里】【、】【去】【粗】【取】【精】【、】【去】【伪】【存】【真】【、】【由】【个】【别】【到】【一】【般】【的】【思】【维】【过】【程】【。】【有】【了】【这】【个】【过】【程】【,】【我】【们】【的】【认】【识】【才】【能】【产】【生】【飞】【跃】【。】【独】【到】【的】【见】【解】【来】【源】【于】【深】【入】【的】【思】【考】【。】【要】【想】【使】【文】【章】【深】【刻】【,】【首】【先】【要】【学】【会】【思】【考】【。】【所】【以】【我】【们】【在】【写】【作】【文】【时】【,】【要】【注】【意】【对】【一】【个】【话】【题】【、】【一】【个】【材】【料】【,】【多】【角】【度】【、】【多】【侧】【面】【地】【深】【入】【思】【考】【,】【见】【他】【人】【所】【未】【见】【,】【这】【样】【才】【能】【发】【现】【问】【题】【的】【关】【键】【本】【质】【,】【从】【而】【写】【出】【他】【人】【所】【未】【写】【的】【,】【深】【刻】【、】【新】【颖】【的】【作】【文】【,】【来】【彰】【显】【你】【与】【众】【不】【同】【的】【风】【格】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【□】【佳】【作】【示】【例】【一】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【珍】【惜】【你】【所】【拥】【有】【的】【家】【园】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【○】【 】【一】【考】【生】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【一】【个】【小】【山】【庄】【,】【那】【里】【绿】【水】【青】【山】【,】【鸟】【语】【花】【香】【,】【人】【们】【幸】【福】【地】【生】【活】【着】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【不】【知】【是】【哪】【一】【天】【,】【山】【外】【有】【一】【辆】【大】【卡】【车】【开】【进】【山】【里】【来】【了】【。】【一】【个】【穿】【西】【装】【的】【男】【青】【年】【从】【车】【上】【下】【来】【,】【亲】【切】【地】【向】【山】【庄】【的】【人】【们】【说】【:】【“】【你】【们】【这】【个】【地】【方】【可】【真】【是】【个】【宝】【地】【啊】【!】【看】【那】【粗】【大】【的】【树】【干】【,】【多】【美】【丽】【!】【把】【它】【们】【卖】【给】【我】【,】【我】【保】【证】【一】【棵】【给】【你】【们】【5】【0】【元】【。】【”】【山】【庄】【的】【人】【立】【刻】【沸】【腾】【了】【,】【他】【们】【没】【想】【到】【山】【庄】【里】【的】【树】【竟】【能】【卖】【这】【么】【多】【的】【钱】【。】【男】【青】【年】【看】【到】【这】【情】【景】【,】【高】【兴】【地】【说】【:】【“】【那】【么】【你】【们】【准】【备】【吧】【,】【明】【天】【我】【来】【提】【货】【,】【货】【到】【钱】【到】【!】【”】【这】【句】【话】【又】【像】【给】【大】【家】【注】【射】【了】【一】【针】【兴】【奋】【剂】【,】【山】【庄】【上】【下】【全】【热】【闹】【起】【来】【。】【一】【会】【儿】【,】【大】【卡】【车】【便】【开】【走】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【人】【们】【兴】【高】【采】【烈】【地】【拿】【着】【斧】【头】【上】【山】【了】【…】【…】【夕】【阳】【西】【下】【,】【人】【们】【满】【载】【而】【归】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【第】【二】【天】【,】【男】【青】【年】【准】【时】【带】【着】【大】【卡】【车】【来】【到】【山】【庄】【,】【货】【款】【两】【清】【后】【,】【又】【满】【意】【地】【摇】【晃】【着】【大】【肚】【子】【离】【去】【。】【山】【庄】【里】【的】【人】【呢】【,】【他】【们】【当】【然】【没】【有】【一】【个】【不】【满】【意】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【就】【这】【样】【,】【人】【们】【越】【来】【越】【尝】【到】【了】【伐】【树】【给】【他】【们】【带】【来】【的】【甜】【头】【,】【山】【庄】【里】【的】【斧】【头】【越】【来】【越】【多】【,】【越】【来】【越】【大】【,】【而】【山】【上】【的】【树】【木】【却】【越】【来】【越】【少】【,】【越】【来】【越】【小】【。】【两】【年】【后】【,】【山】【上】【基】【本】【上】【没】【有】【树】【木】【了】【,】【可】【山】【庄】【里】【的】【人】【疯】【了】【似】【的】【,】【仍】【旧】【扔】【不】【下】【他】【们】【的】【斧】【头】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【几】【年】【前】【山】【庄】【里】【唯】【一】【考】【出】【去】【的】【大】【学】【生】【回】【来】【了】【,】【看】【到】【山】【庄】【的】【变】【化】【,】【他】【惊】【讶】【得】【说】【不】【出】【话】【来】【。】【于】【是】【,】【他】【开】【始】【一】【家】【一】【户】【地】【宣】【传】【保】【林】【护】【树】【的】【好】【处】【:】【防】【风】【护】【沙】【,】【保】【持】【水】【土】【,】【净】【化】【空】【气】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【一】【次】【,】【人】【们】【又】【上】【山】【了】【,】【但】【这】【一】【次】【不】【是】【去】【砍】【伐】【树】【木】【,】【而】【是】【去】【栽】【种】【树】【木】【,】【他】【们】【终】【于】【懂】【得】【了】【珍】【惜】【现】【在】【拥】【有】【的】【一】【切】【,】【懂】【得】【了】【弥】【补】【曾】【经】【犯】【下】【的】【过】【错】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【但】【还】【是】【迟】【了】【。】【一】【天】【晚】【上】【,】【天】【降】【暴】【雨】【,】【整】【座】【大】【山】【变】【成】【数】【股】【汹】【涌】【的】【泥】【石】【流】【将】【山】【庄】【淹】【没】【、】【淹】【没】【,】【再】【淹】【没】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【 】【 】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【篇】【文】【章】【认】【识】【深】【刻】【、】【见】【解】【新】【颖】【。】【文】【章】【通】【过】【虚】【构】【的】【故】【事】【在】【切】【合】【题】【意】【的】【前】【提】【下】【进】【行】【了】【深】【刻】【的】【表】【情】【达】【意】【,】【这】【已】【经】【使】【本】【文】【在】【写】【法】【上】【“】【独】【占】【”】【了】【某】【种】【“】【先】【机】【”】【。】【而】【故】【事】【一】【波】【三】【折】【、】【发】【人】【深】【省】【的】【情】【节】【,】【不】【仅】【启】【示】【我】【们】【要】【“】【珍】【惜】【现】【在】【拥】【有】【的】【美】【好】【事】【物】【”】【,】【而】【且】【启】【示】【我】【们】【要】【进】【行】【“】【环】【保】【”】【,】【这】【就】【更】【使】【文】【章】【增】【添】【了】【一】【种】【艺】【术】【魅】【力】【。】【另】【处】【,】【本】【文】【还】【有】【剪】【裁】【得】【当】【、】【结】【构】【紧】【凑】【、】【语】【言】【流】【畅】【等】【优】【点】【。】【结】【尾】【含】【蓄】【、】【精】【练】【,】【耐】【人】【寻】【味】【,】【引】【人】【深】【思】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【二】【、】【语】【言】【诙】【谐】【、】【生】【动】【形】【象】【,】【彰】【显】【幽】【默】【个】【性】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【幽】【默】【诙】【谐】【是】【一】【种】【语】【言】【技】【巧】【。】【幽】【默】【诙】【谐】【的】【语】【言】【既】【有】【趣】【可】【笑】【,】【又】【意】【味】【深】【长】【。】【这】【种】【语】【言】【技】【巧】【,】【可】【谓】【是】【“】【笑】【”】【的】【语】【言】【艺】【术】【,】【但】【这】【种】【“】【笑】【”】【并】【非】【插】【科】【打】【诨】【,】【而】【是】【要】【借】【助】【于】【“】【笑】【”】【这】【种】【喜】【剧】【性】【的】【手】【段】【,】【寓】【庄】【于】【谐】【,】【暗】【示】【出】【某】【种】【思】【想】【,】【启】【发】【人】【们】【去】【思】【考】【,】【令】【人】【在】【轻】【松】【愉】【快】【的】【心】【情】【中】【,】【去】【领】【悟】【某】【种】【思】【想】【和】【内】【在】【的】【蕴】【涵】【,】【从】【而】【产】【生】【生】【动】【隽】【永】【、】【令】【人】【回】【味】【的】【艺】【术】【效】【果】【。】【我】【们】【作】【文】【中】【运】【用】【这】【种】【幽】【默】【诙】【谐】【、】【生】【动】【形】【象】【语】【言】【技】【巧】【,】【无】【疑】【可】【为】【文】【章】【增】【光】【添】【彩】【。】【它】【可】【让】【你】【的】【文】【章】【听】【来】【生】【动】【悦】【耳】【,】【读】【来】【朗】【朗】【上】【口】【,】【看】【来】【光】【彩】【照】【人】【,】【考】【来】【脱】【颖】【而】【出】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【□】【佳】【作】【示】【例】【二】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【是】【初】【升】【的】【太】【阳】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【○】【 】【一】【考】【生】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【十】【五】【岁】【,】【活】【力】【四】【射】【的】【年】【龄】【。】【“】【风】【华】【正】【茂】【”】【“】【生】【机】【勃】【勃】【”】【“】【热】【情】【奔】【放】【”】【这】【些】【词】【都】【一】【直】【被】【用】【来】【形】【容】【我】【们】【。】【我】【们】【就】【像】【那】【初】【升】【的】【太】【阳】【,】【永】【远】【闪】【耀】【着】【活】【力】【的】【光】【芒】【,】【散】【发】【着】【青】【春】【的】【气】【息】【,】【只】【要】【有】【我】【们】【在】【,】【就】【会】【有】【一】【片】【生】【机】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【初】【三】【了】【,】【毕】【业】【了】【,】【也】【同】【样】【意】【味】【着】【同】【窗】【三】【年】【的】【同】【学】【要】【分】【别】【了】【,】【大】【家】【都】【很】【舍】【不】【得】【,】【大】【家】【都】【想】【为】【初】【三】【留】【下】【点】【纪】【念】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【写】【同】【学】【录】【时】【,】【小】【K】【的】【“】【狗】【吠】【猫】【散】【图】【”】【以】【其】【搞】【笑】【的】【风】【格】【、】【简】【单】【明】【了】【的】【构】【图】【,】【传】【遍】【“】【大】【江】【南】【北】【”】【,】【好】【评】【不】【断】【。】【这】【就】【像】【我】【们】【的】【生】【活】【,】【多】【姿】【多】【彩】【,】【充】【满】【阳】【光】【。】【尽】【管】【写】【了】【同】【学】【录】【,】【但】【我】【们】【却】【觉】【得】【还】【少】【了】【些】【什】【么】【,】【大】【概】【是】【热】【血】【沸】【腾】【、】【活】【力】【四】【射】【的】【感】【觉】【吧】【。】【于】【是】【我】【们】【决】【定】【举】【行】【一】【场】【“】【S】【校】【初】【三】【友】【谊】【比】【赛】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【尽】【管】【美】【其】【名】【曰】【是】【友】【谊】【赛】【,】【但】【大】【家】【都】【虎】【视】【眈】【眈】【地】【把】【目】【标】【锁】【定】【为】【冠】【军】【奖】【杯】【。】【大】【家】【都】【想】【为】【初】【三】【再】【添】【一】【笔】【灿】【烂】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【比】【赛】【时】【,】【队】【员】【们】【抱】【着】【只】【要】【进】【球】【不】【要】【命】【的】【宗】【旨】【,】【拼】【了】【命】【地】【把】【足】【球】【往】【对】【方】【半】【场】【“】【踹】【”】【,】【年】【少】【轻】【狂】【,】【年】【轻】【气】【盛】【啊】【。】【在】【场】【边】【,】【大】【家】【也】【没】【有】【闲】【着】【,】【在】【那】【儿】【比】【试】【“】【吼】【功】【”】【。】【夫】【战】【,】【勇】【气】【也】【。】【我】【们】【女】【生】【扯】【着】【嗓】【子】【直】【喊】【“】【加】【油】【”】【,】【真】【希】【望】【自】【己】【练】【过】【“】【狮】【吼】【功】【”】【呀】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【热】【闹】【的】【还】【在】【后】【面】【呢】【。】【无】【论】【裁】【判】【有】【多】【公】【正】【,】【只】【要】【一】【做】【出】【对】【我】【们】【不】【利】【的】【判】【罚】【,】【无】【论】【裁】【判】【与】【我】【们】【交】【情】【有】【多】【深】【,】【我】【们】【立】【马】【翻】【脸】【不】【认】【人】【,】【一】【律】【开】【“】【骂】【”】【。】【你】【可】【以】【感】【觉】【到】【整】【个】【操】【场】【都】【弥】【漫】【着】【青】【春】【的】【味】【道】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【其】【实】【,】【青】【春】【就】【是】【该】【有】【这】【样】【的】【冲】【劲】【和】【冲】【动】【才】【名】【副】【其】【实】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【十】【五】【岁】【,】【活】【力】【四】【射】【的】【年】【龄】【,】【可】【以】【轻】【狂】【的】【岁】【月】【。】【十】【五】【岁】【的】【我】【们】【闪】【烁】【着】【智】【慧】【的】【光】【芒】【,】【青】【春】【的】【光】【芒】【,】【活】【力】【的】【光】【芒】【。】【在】【我】【们】【的】【身】【上】【可】【以】【找】【到】【活】【力】【与】【热】【情】【,】【活】【泼】【与】【开】【朗】【,】【只】【要】【青】【春】【有】【的】【,】【我】【们】【都】【有】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【红】【日】【初】【升】【,】【其】【道】【大】【光】【,】【十】【五】【岁】【的】【我】【们】【就】【像】【初】【升】【的】【太】【阳】【,】【永】【远】【闪】【耀】【着】【活】【力】【的】【光】【芒】【,】【散】【发】【着】【青】【春】【的】【气】【息】【,】【前】【程】【一】【片】【光】【明】【,】【我】【们】【给】【世】【界】【带】【来】【了】【光】【明】【,】【带】【来】【了】【希】【望】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【是】【谁】【?】【我】【们】【是】【初】【升】【的】【太】【阳】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【 】【 】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【文】【语】【言】【幽】【默】【风】【趣】【,】【形】【象】【生】【动】【。】【文】【章】【主】【题】【部】【分】【“】【大】【江】【南】【北】【”】【的】【大】【词】【小】【用】【,】【“】【踹】【”】【“】【吼】【功】【”】【等】【词】【的】【巧】【妙】【移】【用】【,】【充】【满】【着】【时】【代】【气】【息】【,】【让】【人】【看】【了】【忍】【俊】【不】【禁】【。】【另】【外】【,】【考】【生】【用】【诗】【化】【的】【语】【言】【,】【写】【出】【了】【中】【学】【生】【的】【虎】【虎】【生】【气】【。】【字】【里】【行】【间】【洋】【溢】【着】【青】【春】【的】【激】【情】【,】【散】【发】【着】【青】【春】【的】【气】【息】【,】【仿】【佛】【青】【春】【的】【宣】【言】【,】【令】【正】【处】【于】【青】【春】【期】【的】【学】【子】【充】【满】【向】【往】【,】【也】【是】【这】【篇】【作】【文】【的】【一】【大】【优】【点】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【三】【、】【文】【体】【新】【颖】【、】【别】【开】【生】【面】【,】【彰】【显】【创】【新】【个】【性】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【纵】【观】【近】【几】【年】【的】【中】【考】【作】【文】【,】【打】【破】【了】【记】【叙】【文】【一】【统】【天】【下】【的】【局】【面】【,】【每】【年】【都】【有】【一】【些】【新】【颖】【活】【泼】【的】【文】【体】【进】【入】【我】【们】【的】【视】【野】【,】【令】【我】【们】【的】【眼】【前】【为】【之】【一】【亮】【。】【如】【童】【话】【、】【寓】【言】【、】【诗】【歌】【、】【书】【信】【、】【日】【记】【、】【杂】【文】【、】【小】【说】【、】【戏】【剧】【等】【各】【种】【新】【颖】【的】【文】【体】【,】【给】【传】【统】【的】【作】【文】【形】【式】【注】【入】【了】【一】【针】【兴】【奋】【剂】【,】【使】【更】【多】【的】【考】【生】【有】【了】【展】【示】【自】【己】【个】【性】【的】【机】【会】【。】【你】【若】【擅】【长】【形】【象】【思】【维】【,】【会】【编】【故】【事】【,】【你】【可】【以】【“】【编】【”】【一】【个】【美】【丽】【的】【故】【事】【,】【写】【成】【一】【篇】【感】【人】【的】【记】【叙】【文】【 】【;】【你】【若】【属】【于】【多】【愁】【善】【感】【之】【辈】【,】【可】【以】【让】【情】【感】【的】【溪】【流】【汩】【汩】【地】【流】【淌】【到】【一】【个】【个】【方】【格】【内】【,】【以】【一】【篇】【动】【人】【心】【弦】【的】【散】【文】【去】【打】【动】【阅】【卷】【老】【师】【的】【心】【;】【你】【若】【长】【于】【想】【象】【,】【则】【可】【天】【马】【行】【空】【,】【创】【作】【一】【篇】【引】【人】【入】【胜】【的】【幻】【想】【小】【说】【或】【想】【象】【作】【文】【;】【你】【若】【以】【说】【理】【见】【长】【,】【就】【选】【择】【议】【论】【文】【或】【杂】【文】【。】【你】【也】【可】【以】【按】【照】【现】【实】【生】【活】【中】【的】【应】【用】【文】【,】【来】【创】【作】【出】【新】【的】【文】【体】【,】【如】【就】【诊】【报】【告】【体】【、】【故】【事】【新】【编】【体】【、】【广】【告】【体】【、】【网】【络】【跟】【帖】【体】【等】【等】【。】【总】【之】【一】【句】【话】【,】【你】【完】【全】【可】【以】【发】【挥】【自】【己】【的】【优】【势】【,】【扬】【长】【避】【短】【,】【选】【择】【最】【佳】【形】【式】【,】【给】【情】【感】【之】【流】【开】【辟】【一】【条】【最】【佳】【通】【道】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【但】【需】【要】【强】【调】【的】【是】【,】【使】【用】【文】【体】【创】【新】【的】【方】【法】【写】【作】【,】【必】【须】【在】【平】【时】【将】【常】【规】【文】【体】【(】【如】【:】【记】【叙】【文】【、】【议】【论】【文】【、】【说】【明】【文】【、】【散】【文】【、】【寓】【言】【、】【小】【说】【、】【诗】【歌】【、】【戏】【剧】【等】【)】【和】【非】【常】【规】【文】【体】【(】【如】【:】【日】【记】【、】【书】【信】【、】【启】【事】【、】【倡】【议】【书】【、】【合】【同】【书】【、】【病】【历】【、】【诊】【断】【书】【、】【实】【验】【报】【告】【、】【现】【场】【采】【访】【等】【)】【的】【特】【征】【弄】【清】【楚】【,】【做】【到】【形】【式】【贴】【切】【,】【内】【容】【适】【宜】【,】【同】【时】【又】【闪】【现】【智】【慧】【的】【光】【芒】【。】【在】【写】【作】【时】【,】【最】【好】【使】【用】【自】【己】【最】【擅】【长】【的】【结】【构】【形】【式】【、】【语】【言】【方】【式】【,】【不】【然】【,】【弄】【出】【非】【驴】【非】【马】【的】【“】【四】【不】【像】【”】【来】【,】【反】【倒】【弄】【巧】【成】【拙】【了】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【□】【佳】【作】【示】【例】【三】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【关】【于】【交】【往】【条】【件】【的】【实】【验】【报】【告】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【○】【 】【一】【考】【生】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【实】【验】【名】【称】【:】【“】【交】【往】【”】【的】【必】【要】【条】【件】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【实】【验】【目】【的】【:】【2】【1】【世】【纪】【是】【一】【个】【多】【元】【化】【的】【世】【纪】【,】【一】【个】【信】【息】【化】【的】【时】【代】【,】【生】【存】【和】【发】【展】【都】【需】【要】【交】【往】【。】【本】【实】【验】【将】【特】【别】【测】【定】【交】【往】【的】【条】【件】【,】【以】【便】【所】【有】【人】【都】【能】【从】【交】【往】【中】【取】【得】【进】【步】【,】【得】【到】【快】【乐】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【实】【验】【用】【品】【:】【大】【试】【管】【三】【支】【,】【“】【真】【心】【”】【溶】【液】【、】【“】【虚】【伪】【”】【溶】【液】【、】【“】【钱】【和】【权】【”】【溶】【液】【各】【一】【瓶】【,】【“】【交】【往】【”】【颗】【粒】【若】【干】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【实】【验】【步】【骤】【:】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【.】【取】【三】【支】【大】【试】【管】【,】【向】【里】【面】【加】【入】【等】【量】【的】【“】【交】【往】【”】【颗】【粒】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【.】【依】【次】【向】【三】【支】【大】【试】【管】【中】【滴】【加】【等】【量】【的】【三】【种】【溶】【液】【,】【观】【察】【并】【记】【录】【其】【变】【化】【情】【况】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【实】【验】【现】【象】【:】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【.】【加】【入】【“】【虚】【伪】【”】【溶】【液】【的】【试】【管】【中】【反】【应】【强】【烈】【,】【溶】【液】【由】【灰】【色】【迅】【速】【变】【成】【黑】【色】【,】【出】【现】【沉】【淀】【,】【并】【有】【令】【人】【流】【泪】【的】【刺】【激】【性】【气】【体】【生】【成】【,】【“】【交】【往】【”】【颗】【粒】【由】【饱】【满】【变】【得】【萎】【缩】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【.】【加】【入】【“】【钱】【和】【权】【”】【溶】【液】【的】【试】【管】【中】【反】【应】【适】【中】【,】【溶】【液】【由】【土】【黄】【色】【变】【成】【黑】【色】【,】【并】【散】【发】【出】【一】【种】【令】【人】【头】【晕】【脑】【涨】【的】【气】【体】【,】【“】【交】【往】【”】【颗】【粒】【渐】【渐】【稀】【释】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【3】【.】【加】【入】【“】【真】【心】【”】【溶】【液】【的】【试】【管】【中】【,】【反】【应】【极】【慢】【,】【溶】【液】【由】【白】【色】【变】【成】【无】【色】【,】【散】【发】【出】【一】【种】【令】【人】【愉】【快】【的】【气】【味】【,】【“】【交】【往】【”】【颗】【粒】【膨】【大】【,】【并】【生】【成】【一】【种】【叫】【“】【朋】【友】【”】【的】【固】【体】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【实】【验】【方】【程】【式】【:】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【交】【往】【+】【虚】【伪】【=】【痛】【苦】【+】【极】【有】【害】【物】【质】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【交】【往】【+】【钱】【与】【权】【=】【烦】【恼】【+】【有】【害】【物】【质】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【交】【往】【+】【真】【心】【=】【快】【乐】【+】【朋】【友】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【实】【验】【小】【结】【:】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【由】【此】【可】【见】【,】【交】【往】【的】【条】【件】【是】【真】【心】【,】【而】【真】【心】【却】【需】【要】【长】【时】【间】【才】【能】【体】【现】【出】【来】【,】【但】【是】【,】【真】【心】【交】【往】【的】【结】【果】【,】【就】【是】【你】【能】【拥】【有】【真】【正】【的】【朋】【友】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【实】【验】【时】【间】【:】【2】【0】【0】【7】【年】【6】【月】【1】【0】【日】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【注】【:】【与】【“】【虚】【伪】【”】【和】【“】【钱】【和】【权】【”】【溶】【液】【反】【应】【过】【的】【剩】【余】【物】【质】【必】【须】【慎】【重】【处】【理】【,】【否】【则】【危】【害】【极】【大】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【 】【 】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【文】【为】【满】【分】【作】【文】【,】【作】【者】【围】【绕】【“】【交】【往】【”】【这】【一】【话】【题】【,】【采】【用】【“】【实】【验】【报】【告】【”】【体】【的】【形】【式】【,】【生】【动】【、】【形】【象】【地】【阐】【明】【了】【一】【个】【道】【理】【:】【要】【想】【在】【交】【往】【中】【取】【得】【进】【步】【,】【得】【到】【快】【乐】【,】【其】【条】【件】【必】【须】【是】【真】【心】【,】【只】【有】【真】【心】【交】【往】【,】【才】【能】【拥】【有】【真】【正】【的】【朋】【友】【。】【构】【思】【新】【颖】【,】【立】【意】【积】【极】【、】【深】【刻】【,】【叫】【人】【不】【忍】【释】【卷】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】新加坡领事馆【<】【p】【>】【这】【个】【仅】【次】【于】【春】【节】【的】【第】【二】【大】【传】【统】【节】【日】【是】【完】【美】【的】【。】【在】【我】【心】【中】【,】【无】【论】【是】【嫦】【娥】【奔】【月】【的】【传】【说】【,】【还】【是】【吴】【刚】【折】【桂】【的】【故】【事】【,】【或】【者】【是】【朱】【元】【璋】【月】【饼】【起】【义】【的】【历】【史】【,】【这】【个】【在】【宋】【代】【就】【已】【盛】【行】【的】【中】【秋】【节】【就】【是】【最】【具】【有】【人】【情】【味】【的】【节】【日】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】

【<】【p】【>】【即】【使】【被】【现】【代】【社】【会】【遗】【弃】【,】【因】【乘】【载】【了】【太】【多】【的】【历】【史】【与】【现】【代】【社】【会】【的】【物】【欲】【流】【的】【冗】【杂】【,】【人】【们】【看】【你】【的】【眼】【神】【变】【得】【麻】【木】【而】【涣】【散】【,】【你】【却】【丝】【毫】【没】【有】【介】【意】【,】【依】【旧】【承】【担】【起】【监】【守】【精】【神】【家】【园】【和】【传】【统】【文】【化】【的】【双】【重】【革】【命】【任】【务】【,】【嘴】【角】【不】【带】【有】【一】【丝】【不】【愉】【悦】【的】【弧】【度】【。】【你】【坚】【忍】【地】【生】【存】【于】【物】【欲】【流】【充】【斥】【的】【世】【界】【中】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】新加坡领事馆【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【人】【的】【身】【体】【被】【绑】【架】【,】【就】【会】【失】【去】【自】【由】【;】【人】【的】【思】【想】【被】【“】【绑】【架】【”】【,】【便】【无】【法】【创】【新】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【生】【活】【中】【我】【们】【常】【常】【遭】【遇】【“】【绑】【架】【”】【:】【受】【传】【统】【的】【影】【响】【,】【思】【想】【上】【故】【步】【自】【封】【,】【不】【敢】【提】【出】【自】【己】【独】【到】【的】【见】【解】【;】【过】【重】【的】【课】【业】【负】【担】【,】【把】【我】【们】【束】【缚】【在】【书】【桌】【前】【,】【失】【去】【很】【多】【自】【由】【发】【展】【的】【空】【间】【…】【…】【诸】【如】【此】【类】【,】【使】【我】【们】【像】【笼】【中】【的】【鸟】【儿】【难】【以】【翱】【翔】【于】【蓝】【天】【,】【难】【以】【受】【到】【暴】【风】【雨】【的】【洗】【礼】【。】【因】【此】【,】【必】【须】【要】【“】【松】【绑】【”】【。】【唯】【有】【如】【此】【,】【才】【能】【使】【人】【的】【思】【想】【得】【到】【解】【脱】【,】【才】【能】【使】【人】【全】【面】【发】【展】【,】【培】【养】【出】【创】【新】【人】【才】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【给】【思】【想】【松】【绑】【,】【就】【得】【学】【会】【从】【不】【同】【的】【角】【度】【思】【考】【问】【题】【,】【走】【出】【传】【统】【思】【想】【的】【桎】【梏】【,】【为】【自】【己】【开】【辟】【一】【条】【新】【的】【思】【路】【,】【让】【自】【己】【的】【思】【想】【得】【到】【升】【华】【。】【我】【曾】【看】【到】【过】【这】【样】【一】【则】【故】【事】【:】【一】【个】【老】【师】【问】【孩】【子】【们】【:】【“】【冰】【雪】【融】【化】【后】【是】【什】【么】【?】【”】【有】【的】【孩】【子】【说】【:】【“】【是】【水】【!】【”】【有】【的】【孩】【子】【说】【:】【“】【是】【小】【河】【!】【”】【大】【家】【议】【论】【纷】【纷】【。】【这】【时】【,】【一】【个】【女】【孩】【站】【起】【来】【回】【答】【说】【:】【“】【是】【春】【天】【!】【”】【读】【到】【这】【里】【,】【我】【不】【禁】【被】【女】【孩】【的】【回】【答】【震】【撼】【了】【,】【如】【果】【让】【许】【多】【人】【来】【回】【答】【这】【个】【问】【题】【,】【估】【计】【大】【多】【数】【人】【都】【会】【不】【假】【思】【索】【地】【说】【:】【“】【冰】【雪】【融】【化】【之】【后】【当】【然】【是】【水】【喽】【!】【”】【但】【这】【个】【女】【孩】【的】【心】【灵】【是】【明】【亮】【的】【,】【灵】【魂】【是】【无】【瑕】【的】【,】【她】【不】【受】【传】【统】【思】【想】【的】【束】【缚】【,】【为】【自】【己】【的】【思】【想】【松】【绑】【。】【因】【此】【,】【她】【会】【有】【与】【众】【不】【同】【的】【见】【解】【,】【看】【到】【了】【冰】【雪】【融】【化】【之】【后】【的】【春】【天】【。】【大】【科】【学】【家】【牛】【顿】【懂】【得】【换】【一】【个】【角】【度】【思】【考】【问】【题】【,】【别】【人】【看】【见】【苹】【果】【从】【树】【上】【掉】【落】【到】【地】【上】【是】【理】【所】【当】【然】【的】【,】【他】【却】【想】【:】【苹】【果】【为】【什】【么】【只】【往】【地】【上】【掉】【,】【而】【不】【往】【两】【旁】【掉】【,】【也】【不】【往】【上】【掉】【呢】【?】【经】【过】【探】【索】【,】【他】【发】【现】【了】【万】【有】【引】【力】【。】【这】【便】【是】【给】【自】【己】【思】【想】【松】【绑】【的】【妙】【处】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【给】【思】【想】【松】【绑】【,】【要】【求】【为】【人】【师】【者】【允】【许】【学】【生】【有】【不】【同】【的】【观】【点】【与】【见】【解】【。】【在】【一】【次】【考】【试】【中】【,】【有】【一】【道】【题】【是】【把】【“】【小】【明】【、】【阳】【光】【下】【、】【在】【、】【对】【着】【、】【笑】【、】【荷】【花】【”】【连】【词】【成】【句】【。】【一】【个】【学】【生】【写】【的】【是】【:】【荷】【花】【在】【阳】【光】【下】【对】【着】【小】【明】【笑】【。】【可】【标】【准】【答】【案】【是】【:】【小】【明】【在】【阳】【光】【下】【对】【着】【荷】【花】【笑】【。】【这】【个】【学】【生】【的】【心】【是】【纯】【洁】【的】【,】【他】【用】【了】【一】【个】【完】【美】【的】【拟】【人】【句】【,】【把】【荷】【花】【看】【做】【一】【个】【人】【,】【对】【着】【小】【明】【笑】【。】【他】【的】【思】【想】【是】【开】【阔】【的】【,】【就】【像】【一】【匹】【马】【在】【辽】【阔】【的】【草】【原】【上】【驰】【骋】【,】【可】【那】【些】【刻】【板】【的】【老】【师】【们】【,】【为】【什】【么】【要】【封】【锁】【孩】【子】【那】【充】【满】【生】【机】【的】【心】【灵】【呢】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【给】【时】【间】【松】【绑】【,】【要】【求】【我】【们】【善】【于】【缓】【解】【学】【习】【压】【力】【,】【努】【力】【解】【放】【自】【己】【的】【双】【手】【和】【大】【脑】【。】【用】【自】【己】【可】【以】【支】【配】【的】【时】【间】【去】【做】【自】【己】【乐】【于】【做】【的】【有】【意】【义】【的】【事】【,】【在】【自】【由】【的】【时】【间】【里】【任】【由】【自】【己】【的】【思】【想】【驰】【骋】【于】【漫】【无】【边】【际】【的】【思】【维】【的】【星】【空】【,】【去】【追】【寻】【久】【远】【的】【苏】【格】【拉】【底】【,】【去】【探】【访】【不】【太】【遥】【远】【的】【黑】【格】【尔】【…】【…】【在】【自】【由】【的】【时】【间】【里】【,】【走】【进】【自】【己】【的】【空】【间】【,】【投】【进】【那】【久】【违】【了】【的】【大】【自】【然】【的】【怀】【抱】【,】【去】【品】【读】【大】【自】【然】【这】【本】【无】【字】【书】【,】【去】【感】【受】【大】【自】【然】【的】【神】【奇】【与】【美】【丽】【,】【陶】【冶】【我】【们】【的】【情】【操】【,】【让】【我】【们】【也】【具】【有】【像】【大】【地】【一】【样】【宽】【广】【的】【胸】【怀】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【思】【想】【一】【旦】【松】【绑】【,】【心】【灵】【便】【可】【以】【飞】【翔】【,】【我】【们】【会】【发】【现】【世】【界】【原】【来】【是】【多】【么】【大】【、】【多】【么】【美】【!】【我】【们】【的】【时】【间】【一】【旦】【松】【绑】【、】【被】【解】【放】【,】【我】【们】【会】【感】【觉】【生】【活】【原】【来】【是】【那】【么】【快】【乐】【、】【那】【么】【多】【彩】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【巧】【学】【小】【贴】【士】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【发】【表】【学】【习】【法】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【是】【指】【利】【用】【发】【表】【“】【作】【品】【”】【的】【方】【式】【来】【促】【进】【学】【习】【的】【方】【法】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【对】【于】【青】【少】【年】【学】【生】【来】【说】【,】【都】【有】【一】【种】【要】【表】【现】【自】【己】【的】【欲】【望】【,】【发】【表】【往】【往】【可】【以】【给】【人】【以】【成】【就】【感】【,】【这】【种】【成】【就】【感】【构】【成】【了】【激】【励】【青】【少】【年】【勤】【奋】【上】【进】【的】【强】【大】【动】【力】【。】【而】【“】【发】【表】【”】【的】【形】【式】【和】【途】【径】【又】【是】【多】【种】【多】【样】【的】【,】【比】【如】【,】【给】【报】【刊】【投】【稿】【,】【参】【加】【各】【种】【学】【习】【竞】【赛】【,】【作】【品】【展】【示】【以】【及】【在】【课】【堂】【上】【积】【极】【回】【答】【老】【师】【的】【问】【题】【,】【放】【学】【回】【家】【后】【向】【家】【长】【汇】【报】【学】【习】【体】【会】【,】【与】【人】【交】【流】【等】【,】【都】【可】【以】【看】【成】【“】【发】【表】【”】【的】【形】【式】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【运】【用】【发】【表】【学】【习】【法】【,】【需】【要】【注】【意】【以】【下】【三】【点】【:】【1】【.】【认】【真】【创】【作】【“】【作】【品】【”】【。】【2】【.】【正】【确】【对】【待】【别】【人】【的】【评】【价】【。】【3】【.】【要】【学】【会】【正】【确】【对】【待】【挫】【折】【和】【失】【败】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】

新加坡领事馆:MichaelKors以16亿美元收买进朴斋鞋匠JimmyChoo

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【原】【文】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【成】【长】【中】【的】【难】【忘】【故】【事】【 】【晓】【晴】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【题】【目】【是】【文】【章】【的】【眼】【睛】【,】【这】【个】【题】【目】【太】【宽】【泛】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【天】【是】【政】【治】【早】【读】【课】【,】【教】【室】【是】【嗡】【嗡】【的】【读】【书】【声】【。】【穆】【珠】【珠】【最】【讨】【厌】【政】【治】【早】【读】【了】【,】【这】【读】【书】【声】【像】【一】【首】【首】【催】【眠】【曲】【,】【他】【趴】【在】【桌】【上】【睡】【着】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【他】【的】【伙】【伴】【瘦】【猴】【搞】【了】【恶】【作】【剧】【,】【画】【了】【一】【头】【胖】【得】【有】【些】【夸】【张】【的】【肥】【猪】【,】【用】【透】【明】【胶】【粘】【在】【他】【的】【后】【背】【上】【。】【同】【学】【们】【哄】【地】【大】【笑】【起】【来】【,】【此】【时】【已】【见】【周】【公】【的】【他】【哪】【里】【知】【道】【?】【正】【在】【批】【改】【作】【业】【的】【政】【治】【老】【师】【“】【眼】【镜】【蛇】【”】【很】【快】【走】【过】【来】【,】【扯】【下】【那】【张】【糟】【糕】【的】【猪】【画】【与】【同】【学】【们】【一】【起】【笑】【起】【来】【。】【她】【要】【拉】【他】【罚】【站】【,】【大】【家】【笑】【得】【喘】【不】【过】【气】【来】【。】【待】【他】【明】【白】【他】【与】【那】【个】【肥】【猪】【的】【联】【系】【时】【,】【他】【扒】【拉】【掉】【了】【她】【的】【大】【眼】【镜】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【自】【然】【,】【班】【主】【任】【那】【国】【字】【脸】【气】【得】【变】【了】【形】【:】【“】【你】【小】【子】【好】【大】【胆】【子】【,】【睡】【觉】【不】【说】【还】【弄】【掉】【政】【治】【老】【师】【的】【眼】【镜】【!】【”】【穆】【珠】【珠】【也】【是】【头】【驴】【,】【一】【阵】【莫】【名】【其】【妙】【的】【冲】【动】【聚】【在】【了】【脑】【门】【:】【“】【我】【是】【穆】【珠】【珠】【,】【我】【不】【是】【穆】【猪】【猪】【!】【”】【穆】【珠】【珠】【吼】【起】【来】【。】【他】【为】【自】【己】【找】【个】【理】【由】【,】【尽】【管】【我】【成】【绩】【不】【好】【,】【但】【不】【是】【那】【又】【肥】【又】【蠢】【的】【懒】【猪】【!】【于】【是】【他】【朝】【着】【室】【外】【走】【去】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【看】【门】【老】【头】【儿】【拦】【他】【的】【时】【候】【,】【他】【脸】【涨】【得】【通】【红】【。】【他】【动】【了】【拳】【头】【,】【砸】【在】【老】【头】【儿】【肚】【子】【上】【,】【老】【头】【儿】【捂】【肚】【子】【的】【间】【隙】【他】【才】【得】【以】【逃】【脱】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【他】【就】【这】【样】【到】【了】【一】【个】【网】【吧】【。】【网】【吧】【主】【人】【是】【个】【染】【过】【头】【发】【但】【褪】【了】【颜】【色】【、】【让】【人】【一】【看】【就】【生】【厌】【的】【女】【人】【。】【但】【穆】【珠】【珠】【顾】【不】【了】【这】【些】【,】【他】【打】【开】【“】【飞】【龙】【”】【游】【戏】【,】【很】【快】【忘】【记】【了】【刚】【才】【发】【生】【的】【一】【切】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【这】【个】【细】【节】【与】【文】【章】【主】【旨】【联】【系】【不】【大】【,】【应】【删】【去】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【就】【这】【样】【到】【了】【第】【二】【天】【清】【晨】【。】【从】【网】【吧】【一】【出】【来】【,】【穆】【珠】【殊】【肿】【着】【眼】【睛】【。】【天】【还】【未】【大】【亮】【,】【在】【经】【过】【长】【脸】【九】【叔】【的】【炸】【锅】【时】【,】【他】【拿】【了】【两】【个】【韭】【菜】【饼】【后】【便】【朝】【学】【校】【走】【去】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【此】【处】【对】【穆】【珠】【珠】【“】【肿】【着】【眼】【睛】【”】【的】【细】【节】【描】【述】【不】【够】【生】【动】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【来】【。】【他】【就】【不】【想】【辍】【学】【。】【他】【恨】【一】【去】【打】【工】【就】【是】【好】【几】【年】【的】【爸】【爸】【,】【恨】【因】【为】【爸】【爸】【同】【一】【个】【“】【狐】【狸】【精】【”】【在】【一】【起】【就】【抛】【下】【他】【去】【找】【爸】【爸】【的】【妈】【妈】【,】【他】【恨】【政】【治】【老】【师】【,】【恨】【班】【主】【任】【,】【他】【恨】【瘦】【猴】【,】【恨】【看】【门】【老】【头】【儿】【,】【恨】【班】【上】【的】【同】【学】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【路】【边】【树】【枝】【上】【的】【几】【只】【乌】【鸦】【又】【朝】【着】【他】【“】【喳】【喳】【”】【地】【叫】【起】【来】【。】【好】【多】【次】【,】【他】【和】【瘦】【猴】【用】【路】【边】【的】【石】【块】【攻】【击】【乌】【鸦】【窝】【。】【穆】【珠】【珠】【把】【剩】【下】【的】【饼】【子】【撕】【成】【小】【块】【儿】【扔】【在】【敞】【亮】【的】【路】【面】【上】【,】【乌】【鸦】【们】【在】【树】【枝】【上】【跳】【来】【跳】【去】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【此】【段】【很】【有】【生】【趣】【,】【可】【以】【写】【得】【更】【生】【动】【点】【儿】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【到】【校】【门】【口】【,】【大】【肚】【皮】【老】【头】【儿】【躺】【在】【藤】【椅】【上】【正】【打】【瞌】【睡】【。】【他】【有】【些】【犹】【豫】【,】【昨】【天】【他】【冲】【出】【门】【口】【的】【时】【候】【,】【一】【拳】【砸】【在】【老】【头】【儿】【的】【啤】【酒】【肚】【上】【。】【正】【是】【趁】【他】【捂】【肚】【子】【的】【间】【隙】【才】【得】【以】【逃】【脱】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【正】【当】【他】【犹】【豫】【之】【时】【,】【老】【头】【儿】【突】【然】【醒】【了】【,】【跳】【过】【来】【一】【把】【扯】【住】【穆】【珠】【珠】【:】【“】【你】【小】【子】【真】【够】【损】【的】【,】【快】【进】【来】【,】【快】【进】【来】【,】【你】【们】【班】【主】【任】【、】【政】【治】【老】【师】【一】【夜】【没】【合】【眼】【找】【你】【呢】【!】【”】【随】【即】【他】【又】【讲】【了】【好】【多】【与】【老】【师】【顶】【撞】【是】【坏】【孩】【子】【及】【其】【受】【到】【的】【惩】【罚】【,】【教】【育】【他】【要】【听】【老】【师】【的】【话】【,】【好】【好】【读】【书】【。】【这】【让】【穆】【珠】【珠】【听】【得】【有】【些】【心】【烦】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【写】【“】【老】【头】【儿】【”】【语】【言】【可】【更】【细】【致】【些】【,】【“】【教】【育】【他】【”】【的】【叙】【写】【流】【于】【说】【教】【,】【太】【空】【泛】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【当】【他】【走】【进】【教】【室】【时】【,】【正】【上】【旱】【读】【课】【,】【教】【室】【里】【“】【嗡】【嗡】【”】【声】【一】【片】【。】【瘦】【猴】【最】【先】【跑】【过】【来】【,】【讨】【好】【地】【说】【:】【“】【穆】【珠】【珠】【,】【开】【个】【玩】【笑】【,】【用】【得】【着】【那】【样】【吗】【?】【要】【不】【你】【画】【个】【大】【肥】【猪】【让】【我】【背】【着】【…】【…】【”】【他】【还】【要】【说】【下】【去】【,】【门】【“】【吱】【呀】【”】【开】【了】【,】【他】【赶】【紧】【溜】【回】【座】【位】【。】【班】【主】【任】【来】【了】【,】【他】【铁】【着】【那】【国】【字】【脸】【,】【在】【教】【室】【里】【“】【巡】【视】【”】【了】【一】【圈】【,】【但】【并】【未】【发】【脾】【气】【,】【更】【没】【有】【找】【他】【谈】【话】【。】【政】【治】【老】【师】【也】【进】【了】【教】【室】【,】【戴】【着】【眼】【镜】【,】【停】【在】【穆】【珠】【珠】【面】【前】【一】【会】【儿】【,】【又】【到】【讲】【台】【上】【批】【改】【作】【业】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【一】【天】【的】【事】【好】【像】【没】【发】【生】【过】【一】【样】【。】【只】【是】【他】【不】【明】【白】【老】【师】【们】【为】【什】【么】【不】【狠】【狠】【地】【批】【评】【他】【呢】【?】【在】【他】【心】【中】【一】【直】【是】【个】【谜】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【结】【尾】【的】【“】【谜】【”】【使】【主】【旨】【不】【明】【,】【此】【为】【文】【章】【之】【忌】【,】【应】【用】【含】【有】【哲】【理】【的】【词】【句】【点】【出】【来】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【原】【文】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【此】【文】【最】【大】【的】【问】【题】【是】【结】【构】【上】【平】【铺】【直】【叙】【,】【不】【吸】【引】【人】【。】【我】【们】【可】【梳】【理】【本】【文】【情】【节】【为】【:】【早】【课】【打】【瞌】【睡】【一】【瘦】【猴】【恶】【作】【剧】【—】【反】【叛】【俩】【老】【师】【一】【冲】【撞】【老】【门】【卫】【一】【一】【夜】【泡】【网】【吧】【—】【再】【回】【上】【学】【路】【一】【回】【校】【得】【谅】【解】【。】【若】【我】【们】【以】【穆】【珠】【珠】【从】【网】【吧】【出】【来】【写】【起】【,】【把】【主】【人】【公】【置】【身】【于】【上】【学】【路】【上】【,】【然】【后】【把】【已】【发】【生】【的】【故】【事】【穿】【插】【进】【来】【,】【再】【到】【校】【门】【口】【门】【卫】【老】【头】【的】【叮】【嘱】【、】【老】【师】【们】【的】【“】【冷】【处】【理】【”】【,】【最】【后】【点】【题】【,】【文】【章】【就】【会】【深】【刻】【、】【生】【动】【得】【多】【。】【同】【时】【,】【文】【中】【对】【给】【老】【师】【起】【的】【不】【雅】【称】【号】【也】【使】【文】【章】【失】【色】【不】【少】【,】【大】【大】【降】【低】【了】【文】【章】【的】【品】【味】【,】【同】【学】【们】【在】【写】【作】【时】【应】【该】【注】【意】【这】【方】【面】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【修】【改】【后】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【没】【有】【不】【长】【疤】【的】【树】【 】【晓】【晴】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【用】【文】【尾】【点】【明】【题】【旨】【的】【语】【句】【作】【题】【目】【,】【含】【蓄】【而】【又】【吸】【引】【读】【者】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【从】【网】【吧】【一】【出】【来】【,】【穆】【珠】【珠】【赶】【紧】【把】【眼】【睛】【闭】【上】【,】【好】【一】【阵】【子】【,】【他】【那】【单】【薄】【的】【眼】【皮】【才】【把】【红】【肿】【的】【眼】【球】【放】【出】【来】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【一】【个】【“】【放】【”】【字】【写】【出】【泡】【一】【夜】【网】【吧】【的】【穆】【珠】【珠】【的】【情】【态】【,】【形】【象】【逼】【真】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【天】【还】【未】【大】【亮】【。】【长】【脸】【九】【叔】【炸】【锅】【的】【灶】【膛】【已】【舔】【着】【火】【苗】【。】【穆】【珠】【珠】【拿】【了】【两】【个】【韭】【菜】【饼】【懒】【懒】【地】【朝】【学】【校】【走】【去】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【来】【,】【他】【今】【天】【是】【不】【准】【备】【上】【学】【的】【,】【只】【是】【那】【两】【条】【腿】【不】【听】【使】【唤】【倔】【强】【地】【要】【走】【他】【多】【年】【所】【走】【的】【路】【。】【他】【恨】【爸】【爸】【,】【一】【去】【打】【工】【就】【是】【好】【几】【年】【;】【他】【恨】【妈】【妈】【,】【她】【怕】【爸】【爸】【与】【“】【狐】【狸】【精】【”】【在】【一】【起】【就】【狠】【心】【抛】【下】【他】【去】【了】【爸】【爸】【那】【儿】【;】【他】【恨】【政】【治】【老】【师】【,】【恨】【她】【眼】【镜】【边】【那】【鄙】【夷】【嘲】【笑】【的】【冷】【光】【;】【他】【恨】【班】【主】【任】【,】【恨】【那】【木】【着】【的】【“】【国】【字】【脸】【”】【,】【仿】【佛】【马】【上】【在】【那】【黑】【黑】【的】【脸】【膛】【上】【长】【出】【绿】【苔】【来】【;】【他】【恨】【那】【俩】【门】【牙】【像】【开】【山】【大】【斧】【的】【“】【瘦】【猴】【”】【,】【恨】【那】【个】【挺】【着】【脾】【酒】【肚】【的】【看】【门】【老】【头】【儿】【,】【恨】【班】【上】【的】【同】【学】【…】【…】【总】【之】【,】【他】【恨】【所】【有】【人】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【还】【是】【把】【时】【间】【的】【轮】【子】【拉】【回】【到】【昨】【天】【的】【这】【个】【时】【候】【。】【伴】【随】【着】【教】【室】【里】【“】【嗡】【嗡】【”】【的】【读】【书】【声】【,】【他】【恹】【恹】【欲】【睡】【,】【特】【别】【是】【欧】【朝】【朝】【那】【一】【遍】【又】【一】【遍】【的】【“】【公】【民】【权】【利】【指】【的】【是】【由】【宪】【法】【和】【法】【律】【确】【认】【并】【赋】【予】【公】【民】【享】【有】【的】【某】【种】【权】【益】【”】【简】【直】【就】【是】【一】【条】【条】【瞌】【睡】【虫】【,】【穆】【珠】【珠】【再】【也】【忍】【不】【住】【了】【,】【站】【在】【桌】【上】【的】【课】【本】【疲】【惫】【地】【倒】【在】【脸】【上】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【果】【不】【是】【“】【瘦】【猴】【”】【让】【他】【身】【上】【背】【上】【那】【张】【胖】【得】【有】【些】【夸】【张】【的】【肥】【猪】【,】【同】【学】【们】【肯】【定】【不】【会】【注】【意】【到】【在】【墙】【角】【处】【见】【周】【公】【的】【他】【:】【如】【果】【同】【学】【们】【不】【停】【止】【读】【书】【,】【那】【埋】【头】【批】【改】【作】【业】【的】【“】【眼】【镜】【蛇】【”】【也】【就】【不】【会】【发】【现】【他】【背】【着】【“】【肥】【猪】【”】【睡】【觉】【;】【如】【果】【她】【未】【发】【现】【他】【睡】【觉】【,】【她】【就】【不】【会】【拿】【着】【那】【张】【糟】【糕】【的】【猪】【画】【与】【同】【学】【们】【一】【起】【发】【笑】【;】【如】【果】【她】【不】【笑】【他】【,】【他】【也】【就】【不】【会】【在】【她】【拉】【他】【罚】【站】【的】【瞬】【间】【扒】【拉】【掉】【她】【的】【眼】【镜】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【穆】【珠】【珠】【就】【这】【样】【猜】【想】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【此】【处】【用】【主】【人】【公】【的】【“】【猜】【想】【”】【将】【所】【发】【生】【的】【细】【节】【故】【事】【点】【出】【来】【,】【且】【合】【乎】【人】【物】【心】【理】【,】【很】【有】【韵】【味】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【自】【然】【。】【班】【主】【任】【老】【人】【家】【那】【“】【国】【字】【脸】【”】【上】【的】【青】【苔】【泛】【了】【绿】【。】【“】【我】【是】【穆】【珠】【珠】【,】【我】【不】【是】【穆】【猪】【猪】【!】【”】【穆】【珠】【珠】【吼】【起】【来】【。】【他】【为】【自】【己】【找】【个】【理】【由】【,】【尽】【管】【我】【成】【绩】【不】【好】【,】【但】【也】【不】【是】【那】【又】【肥】【又】【蠢】【的】【懒】【猪】【,】【既】【然】【你】【们】【取】【笑】【本】【少】【爷】【,】【我】【也】【就】【拼】【了】【!】【于】【是】【他】【把】【书】【包】【潇】【洒】【地】【搭】【在】【背】【上】【,】【朝】【着】【教】【室】【外】【走】【去】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【阵】【阵】【凉】【风】【让】【他】【有】【些】【惬】【意】【。】【路】【边】【树】【枝】【上】【的】【几】【只】【乌】【鸦】【又】【朝】【着】【他】【喳】【喳】【地】【叫】【起】【来】【。】【他】【知】【道】【这】【些】【乌】【鸦】【记】【着】【仇】【呢】【,】【好】【多】【次】【,】【他】【和】【“】【瘦】【猴】【”】【用】【路】【边】【的】【石】【块】【攻】【击】【乌】【鸦】【窝】【,】【这】【些】【家】【伙】【就】【不】【服】【软】【地】【与】【他】【们】【吵】【架】【。】【穆】【珠】【珠】【把】【剩】【下】【的】【饼】【子】【撕】【成】【小】【块】【扔】【在】【敞】【亮】【的】【路】【面】【上】【,】【乌】【鸦】【们】【警】【惕】【地】【在】【树】【枝】【上】【跳】【来】【跳】【去】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【些】【声】【音】【听】【起】【来】【虽】【然】【似】【吵】【架】【却】【又】【有】【一】【颗】【敏】【感】【的】【心】【呢】【,】【穆】【珠】【珠】【觉】【得】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【把】【乌】【鸦】【写】【成】【“】【不】【服】【软】【地】【与】【他】【们】【吵】【架】【”】【,】【符】【合】【儿】【童】【心】【理】【。】【“】【穆】【珠】【珠】【觉】【得】【”】【一】【段】【,】【正】【是】【主】【人】【公】【内】【心】【的】【写】【照】【与】【暗】【示】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【到】【校】【门】【口】【,】【大】【肚】【皮】【老】【头】【儿】【正】【躺】【在】【藤】【椅】【上】【打】【瞌】【睡】【。】【他】【有】【些】【犹】【豫】【,】【昨】【天】【他】【冲】【出】【门】【口】【的】【时】【候】【,】【一】【拳】【砸】【在】【老】【头】【儿】【的】【啤】【酒】【肚】【上】【,】【正】【是】【趁】【他】【捂】【肚】【子】【的】【间】【隙】【才】【得】【以】【逃】【脱】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【正】【当】【他】【犹】【豫】【之】【时】【,】【老】【头】【儿】【神】【奇】【地】【醒】【了】【,】【跳】【过】【来】【一】【把】【扯】【住】【穆】【珠】【珠】【的】【胳】【膊】【:】【“】【你】【小】【子】【真】【够】【损】【的】【,】【快】【进】【来】【,】【快】【进】【来】【,】【你】【们】【班】【主】【任】【、】【政】【治】【老】【师】【一】【夜】【没】【合】【眼】【找】【你】【呢】【!】【”】【他】【朝】【教】【室】【走】【的】【时】【候】【,】【背】【后】【还】【传】【来】【老】【头】【儿】【的】【喊】【声】【:】【“】【孩】【子】【,】【给】【老】【师】【认】【个】【错】【,】【可】【要】【听】【话】【呀】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【“】【老】【头】【儿】【”】【的】【神】【态】【与】【语】【言】【写】【得】【比】【较】【真】【切】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【正】【上】【早】【读】【,】【教】【室】【里】【“】【嗡】【嗡】【”】【声】【一】【片】【。】【“】【瘦】【猴】【”】【凑】【过】【来】【,】【两】【个】【门】【牙】【闪】【着】【白】【光】【:】【“】【兄】【弟】【,】【开】【个】【玩】【笑】【,】【用】【得】【着】【像】【个】【爆】【筒】【吗】【?】【要】【不】【你】【画】【个】【大】【肥】【猪】【让】【我】【背】【着】【…】【…】【”】【他】【还】【要】【说】【下】【去】【,】【门】【“】【吱】【呀】【”】【开】【了】【,】【他】【赶】【紧】【溜】【回】【座】【位】【。】【班】【主】【任】【来】【了】【,】【他】【有】【些】【疲】【惫】【,】【仍】【背】【着】【手】【,】【铁】【着】【那】【“】【国】【字】【脸】【”】【,】【在】【教】【室】【里】【“】【巡】【视】【”】【。】【政】【治】【老】【师】【也】【进】【了】【教】【室】【,】【镜】【片】【上】【仿】【佛】【凝】【着】【水】【气】【,】【停】【在】【穆】【珠】【珠】【面】【前】【片】【刻】【,】【就】【又】【回】【到】【讲】【台】【上】【批】【改】【作】【业】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【一】【天】【的】【事】【仿】【佛】【是】【一】【场】【梦】【,】【穆】【珠】【珠】【也】【变】【成】【了】【一】【个】【好】【孩】【子】【。】【偶】【尔】【同】【学】【们】【也】【调】【侃】【他】【“】【我】【是】【穆】【珠】【珠】【,】【不】【是】【穆】【猪】【猪】【”】【,】【他】【有】【些】【羞】【赧】【。】【只】【是】【他】【不】【明】【白】【老】【师】【们】【为】【什】【么】【不】【狠】【狠】【地】【批】【评】【他】【呢】【?】【所】【以】【有】【一】【天】【他】【趁】【政】【治】【老】【师】【批】【改】【作】【业】【时】【开】【了】【口】【。】【政】【治】【老】【师】【好】【像】【心】【不】【在】【焉】【,】【生】【生】【地】【来】【了】【一】【句】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【哪】【棵】【树】【没】【有】【疤】【呢】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【“】【生】【生】【地】【”】【说】【出】【的】【这】【句】【话】【揭】【示】【了】【深】【刻】【的】【主】【题】【,】【让】【人】【怦】【然】【心】【动】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【改】【后】【评】【语】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【升】【格】【后】【的】【特】【色】【:】【一】【是】【情】【节】【上】【打】【破】【常】【规】【。】【作】【文】【由】【网】【吧】【出】【来】【写】【起】【,】【在】【上】【学】【路】【上】【“】【把】【时】【间】【的】【轮】【子】【拉】【回】【到】【昨】【天】【的】【这】【个】【时】【候】【”】【,】【然】【后】【再】【回】【到】【路】【上】【,】【到】【校】【门】【口】【又】【勾】【起】【前】【—】【天】【与】【看】【门】【老】【头】【儿】【的】【矛】【盾】【,】【以】【“】【老】【头】【儿】【神】【奇】【地】【醒】【了】【…】【…】【”】【又】【回】【到】【正】【题】【。】【情】【节】【让】【人】【耳】【目】【—】【新】【。】【二】【是】【立】【意】【上】【以】【小】【见】【大】【。】【小】【插】【曲】【折】【射】【大】【道】【理】【,】【文】【章】【结】【尾】【处】【用】【富】【有】【哲】【理】【的】【文】【字】【“】【哪】【棵】【树】【没】【有】【疤】【呢】【”】【直】【接】【点】【出】【文】【章】【的】【立】【意】【所】【在】【。】【三】【是】【语】【言】【上】【更】【细】【腻】【、】【生】【动】【、】【个】【性】【化】【。】【特】【别】【是】【神】【态】【、】【心】【理】【、】【景】【物】【等】【描】【写】【语】【句】【。】新加坡领事馆【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【大】【家】【普】【遍】【认】【为】【衡】【量】【一】【篇】【文】【章】【价】【值】【的】【高】【低】【,】【一】【个】【重】【要】【的】【标】【准】【就】【是】【是】【否】【具】【备】【创】【造】【性】【,】【而】【个】【性】【恰】【恰】【就】【是】【创】【造】【性】【的】【一】【个】【极】【其】【重】【要】【的】【品】【质】【。】【近】【几】【年】【中】【考】【作】【文】【评】【判】【标】【准】【中】【设】【置】【发】【展】【等】【级】【分】【的】【目】【的】【,】【就】【是】【鼓】【励】【在】【写】【作】【的】【某】【些】【方】【面】【具】【有】【创】【造】【个】【性】【和】【发】【展】【潜】【质】【的】【考】【生】【。】【因】【而】【,】【如】【何】【坚】【持】【写】【作】【的】【个】【性】【,】【就】【成】【为】【获】【得】【较】【高】【发】【展】【等】【级】【分】【的】【一】【个】【不】【可】【忽】【略】【的】【难】【点】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【果】【具】【有】【明】【显】【个】【性】【特】【长】【的】【作】【文】【,】【这】【类】【作】【文】【也】【许】【在】【某】【些】【方】【面】【存】【在】【着】【这】【样】【那】【样】【的】【缺】【陷】【,】【但】【是】【单】【凭】【某】【一】【两】【项】【突】【出】【的】【具】【有】【个】【性】【化】【的】【创】【新】【,】【就】【足】【以】【获】【得】【较】【高】【的】【发】【展】【等】【级】【分】【,】【甚】【至】【满】【分】【。】【因】【此】【可】【以】【说】【,】【发】【展】【等】【级】【的】【高】【分】【都】【与】【作】【者】【的】【写】【作】【个】【性】【直】【接】【相】【关】【,】【无】【论】【是】【对】【生】【活】【的】【令】【人】【耳】【目】【一】【新】【的】【深】【刻】【思】【考】【,】【还】【是】【对】【语】【言】【的】【独】【特】【性】【的】【艺】【术】【感】【悟】【,】【都】【可】【以】【获】【得】【一】【个】【突】【出】【的】【发】【展】【等】【级】【分】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【写】【作】【个】【性】【的】【形】【成】【是】【作】【者】【的】【写】【作】【技】【巧】【和】【风】【格】【开】【始】【走】【向】【成】【熟】【的】【表】【现】【,】【需】【要】【考】【生】【日】【常】【的】【不】【懈】【追】【求】【和】【长】【期】【的】【实】【践】【,】【在】【坚】【忍】【不】【拔】【的】【目】【标】【追】【求】【和】【写】【作】【实】【践】【中】【感】【悟】【写】【作】【,】【最】【终】【才】【能】【形】【成】【独】【特】【而】【成】【熟】【的】【写】【作】【个】【性】【。】【突】【出】【个】【性】【,】【主】【要】【表】【现】【在】【创】【新】【上】【,】【我】【们】【要】【在】【平】【时】【习】【作】【中】【,】【注】【意】【通】【过】【模】【仿】【借】【鉴】【,】【并】【融】【入】【自】【己】【的】【思】【考】【,】【以】【形】【成】【个】【性】【化】【的】【表】【达】【风】【格】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【么】【,】【我】【们】【在】【平】【时】【的】【作】【文】【训】【练】【中】【,】【应】【注】【意】【从】【哪】【些】【方】【面】【来】【突】【出】【个】【性】【呢】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【、】【认】【识】【深】【刻】【、】【见】【解】【新】【颖】【,】【彰】【显】【深】【思】【个】【性】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【世】【界】【上】【形】【形】【色】【色】【的】【事】【物】【都】【有】【各】【自】【的】【外】【在】【表】【现】【和】【内】【在】【本】【质】【。】【要】【深】【入】【本】【质】【必】【须】【有】【一】【个】【概】【括】【的】【过】【程】【:】【即】【一】【个】【由】【此】【及】【彼】【、】【由】【表】【及】【里】【、】【去】【粗】【取】【精】【、】【去】【伪】【存】【真】【、】【由】【个】【别】【到】【一】【般】【的】【思】【维】【过】【程】【。】【有】【了】【这】【个】【过】【程】【,】【我】【们】【的】【认】【识】【才】【能】【产】【生】【飞】【跃】【。】【独】【到】【的】【见】【解】【来】【源】【于】【深】【入】【的】【思】【考】【。】【要】【想】【使】【文】【章】【深】【刻】【,】【首】【先】【要】【学】【会】【思】【考】【。】【所】【以】【我】【们】【在】【写】【作】【文】【时】【,】【要】【注】【意】【对】【一】【个】【话】【题】【、】【一】【个】【材】【料】【,】【多】【角】【度】【、】【多】【侧】【面】【地】【深】【入】【思】【考】【,】【见】【他】【人】【所】【未】【见】【,】【这】【样】【才】【能】【发】【现】【问】【题】【的】【关】【键】【本】【质】【,】【从】【而】【写】【出】【他】【人】【所】【未】【写】【的】【,】【深】【刻】【、】【新】【颖】【的】【作】【文】【,】【来】【彰】【显】【你】【与】【众】【不】【同】【的】【风】【格】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【□】【佳】【作】【示】【例】【一】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【珍】【惜】【你】【所】【拥】【有】【的】【家】【园】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【○】【 】【一】【考】【生】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【一】【个】【小】【山】【庄】【,】【那】【里】【绿】【水】【青】【山】【,】【鸟】【语】【花】【香】【,】【人】【们】【幸】【福】【地】【生】【活】【着】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【不】【知】【是】【哪】【一】【天】【,】【山】【外】【有】【一】【辆】【大】【卡】【车】【开】【进】【山】【里】【来】【了】【。】【一】【个】【穿】【西】【装】【的】【男】【青】【年】【从】【车】【上】【下】【来】【,】【亲】【切】【地】【向】【山】【庄】【的】【人】【们】【说】【:】【“】【你】【们】【这】【个】【地】【方】【可】【真】【是】【个】【宝】【地】【啊】【!】【看】【那】【粗】【大】【的】【树】【干】【,】【多】【美】【丽】【!】【把】【它】【们】【卖】【给】【我】【,】【我】【保】【证】【一】【棵】【给】【你】【们】【5】【0】【元】【。】【”】【山】【庄】【的】【人】【立】【刻】【沸】【腾】【了】【,】【他】【们】【没】【想】【到】【山】【庄】【里】【的】【树】【竟】【能】【卖】【这】【么】【多】【的】【钱】【。】【男】【青】【年】【看】【到】【这】【情】【景】【,】【高】【兴】【地】【说】【:】【“】【那】【么】【你】【们】【准】【备】【吧】【,】【明】【天】【我】【来】【提】【货】【,】【货】【到】【钱】【到】【!】【”】【这】【句】【话】【又】【像】【给】【大】【家】【注】【射】【了】【一】【针】【兴】【奋】【剂】【,】【山】【庄】【上】【下】【全】【热】【闹】【起】【来】【。】【一】【会】【儿】【,】【大】【卡】【车】【便】【开】【走】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【人】【们】【兴】【高】【采】【烈】【地】【拿】【着】【斧】【头】【上】【山】【了】【…】【…】【夕】【阳】【西】【下】【,】【人】【们】【满】【载】【而】【归】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【第】【二】【天】【,】【男】【青】【年】【准】【时】【带】【着】【大】【卡】【车】【来】【到】【山】【庄】【,】【货】【款】【两】【清】【后】【,】【又】【满】【意】【地】【摇】【晃】【着】【大】【肚】【子】【离】【去】【。】【山】【庄】【里】【的】【人】【呢】【,】【他】【们】【当】【然】【没】【有】【一】【个】【不】【满】【意】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【就】【这】【样】【,】【人】【们】【越】【来】【越】【尝】【到】【了】【伐】【树】【给】【他】【们】【带】【来】【的】【甜】【头】【,】【山】【庄】【里】【的】【斧】【头】【越】【来】【越】【多】【,】【越】【来】【越】【大】【,】【而】【山】【上】【的】【树】【木】【却】【越】【来】【越】【少】【,】【越】【来】【越】【小】【。】【两】【年】【后】【,】【山】【上】【基】【本】【上】【没】【有】【树】【木】【了】【,】【可】【山】【庄】【里】【的】【人】【疯】【了】【似】【的】【,】【仍】【旧】【扔】【不】【下】【他】【们】【的】【斧】【头】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【几】【年】【前】【山】【庄】【里】【唯】【一】【考】【出】【去】【的】【大】【学】【生】【回】【来】【了】【,】【看】【到】【山】【庄】【的】【变】【化】【,】【他】【惊】【讶】【得】【说】【不】【出】【话】【来】【。】【于】【是】【,】【他】【开】【始】【一】【家】【一】【户】【地】【宣】【传】【保】【林】【护】【树】【的】【好】【处】【:】【防】【风】【护】【沙】【,】【保】【持】【水】【土】【,】【净】【化】【空】【气】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【一】【次】【,】【人】【们】【又】【上】【山】【了】【,】【但】【这】【一】【次】【不】【是】【去】【砍】【伐】【树】【木】【,】【而】【是】【去】【栽】【种】【树】【木】【,】【他】【们】【终】【于】【懂】【得】【了】【珍】【惜】【现】【在】【拥】【有】【的】【一】【切】【,】【懂】【得】【了】【弥】【补】【曾】【经】【犯】【下】【的】【过】【错】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【但】【还】【是】【迟】【了】【。】【一】【天】【晚】【上】【,】【天】【降】【暴】【雨】【,】【整】【座】【大】【山】【变】【成】【数】【股】【汹】【涌】【的】【泥】【石】【流】【将】【山】【庄】【淹】【没】【、】【淹】【没】【,】【再】【淹】【没】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【 】【 】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【篇】【文】【章】【认】【识】【深】【刻】【、】【见】【解】【新】【颖】【。】【文】【章】【通】【过】【虚】【构】【的】【故】【事】【在】【切】【合】【题】【意】【的】【前】【提】【下】【进】【行】【了】【深】【刻】【的】【表】【情】【达】【意】【,】【这】【已】【经】【使】【本】【文】【在】【写】【法】【上】【“】【独】【占】【”】【了】【某】【种】【“】【先】【机】【”】【。】【而】【故】【事】【一】【波】【三】【折】【、】【发】【人】【深】【省】【的】【情】【节】【,】【不】【仅】【启】【示】【我】【们】【要】【“】【珍】【惜】【现】【在】【拥】【有】【的】【美】【好】【事】【物】【”】【,】【而】【且】【启】【示】【我】【们】【要】【进】【行】【“】【环】【保】【”】【,】【这】【就】【更】【使】【文】【章】【增】【添】【了】【一】【种】【艺】【术】【魅】【力】【。】【另】【处】【,】【本】【文】【还】【有】【剪】【裁】【得】【当】【、】【结】【构】【紧】【凑】【、】【语】【言】【流】【畅】【等】【优】【点】【。】【结】【尾】【含】【蓄】【、】【精】【练】【,】【耐】【人】【寻】【味】【,】【引】【人】【深】【思】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【二】【、】【语】【言】【诙】【谐】【、】【生】【动】【形】【象】【,】【彰】【显】【幽】【默】【个】【性】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【幽】【默】【诙】【谐】【是】【一】【种】【语】【言】【技】【巧】【。】【幽】【默】【诙】【谐】【的】【语】【言】【既】【有】【趣】【可】【笑】【,】【又】【意】【味】【深】【长】【。】【这】【种】【语】【言】【技】【巧】【,】【可】【谓】【是】【“】【笑】【”】【的】【语】【言】【艺】【术】【,】【但】【这】【种】【“】【笑】【”】【并】【非】【插】【科】【打】【诨】【,】【而】【是】【要】【借】【助】【于】【“】【笑】【”】【这】【种】【喜】【剧】【性】【的】【手】【段】【,】【寓】【庄】【于】【谐】【,】【暗】【示】【出】【某】【种】【思】【想】【,】【启】【发】【人】【们】【去】【思】【考】【,】【令】【人】【在】【轻】【松】【愉】【快】【的】【心】【情】【中】【,】【去】【领】【悟】【某】【种】【思】【想】【和】【内】【在】【的】【蕴】【涵】【,】【从】【而】【产】【生】【生】【动】【隽】【永】【、】【令】【人】【回】【味】【的】【艺】【术】【效】【果】【。】【我】【们】【作】【文】【中】【运】【用】【这】【种】【幽】【默】【诙】【谐】【、】【生】【动】【形】【象】【语】【言】【技】【巧】【,】【无】【疑】【可】【为】【文】【章】【增】【光】【添】【彩】【。】【它】【可】【让】【你】【的】【文】【章】【听】【来】【生】【动】【悦】【耳】【,】【读】【来】【朗】【朗】【上】【口】【,】【看】【来】【光】【彩】【照】【人】【,】【考】【来】【脱】【颖】【而】【出】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【□】【佳】【作】【示】【例】【二】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【是】【初】【升】【的】【太】【阳】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【○】【 】【一】【考】【生】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【十】【五】【岁】【,】【活】【力】【四】【射】【的】【年】【龄】【。】【“】【风】【华】【正】【茂】【”】【“】【生】【机】【勃】【勃】【”】【“】【热】【情】【奔】【放】【”】【这】【些】【词】【都】【一】【直】【被】【用】【来】【形】【容】【我】【们】【。】【我】【们】【就】【像】【那】【初】【升】【的】【太】【阳】【,】【永】【远】【闪】【耀】【着】【活】【力】【的】【光】【芒】【,】【散】【发】【着】【青】【春】【的】【气】【息】【,】【只】【要】【有】【我】【们】【在】【,】【就】【会】【有】【一】【片】【生】【机】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【初】【三】【了】【,】【毕】【业】【了】【,】【也】【同】【样】【意】【味】【着】【同】【窗】【三】【年】【的】【同】【学】【要】【分】【别】【了】【,】【大】【家】【都】【很】【舍】【不】【得】【,】【大】【家】【都】【想】【为】【初】【三】【留】【下】【点】【纪】【念】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【写】【同】【学】【录】【时】【,】【小】【K】【的】【“】【狗】【吠】【猫】【散】【图】【”】【以】【其】【搞】【笑】【的】【风】【格】【、】【简】【单】【明】【了】【的】【构】【图】【,】【传】【遍】【“】【大】【江】【南】【北】【”】【,】【好】【评】【不】【断】【。】【这】【就】【像】【我】【们】【的】【生】【活】【,】【多】【姿】【多】【彩】【,】【充】【满】【阳】【光】【。】【尽】【管】【写】【了】【同】【学】【录】【,】【但】【我】【们】【却】【觉】【得】【还】【少】【了】【些】【什】【么】【,】【大】【概】【是】【热】【血】【沸】【腾】【、】【活】【力】【四】【射】【的】【感】【觉】【吧】【。】【于】【是】【我】【们】【决】【定】【举】【行】【一】【场】【“】【S】【校】【初】【三】【友】【谊】【比】【赛】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【尽】【管】【美】【其】【名】【曰】【是】【友】【谊】【赛】【,】【但】【大】【家】【都】【虎】【视】【眈】【眈】【地】【把】【目】【标】【锁】【定】【为】【冠】【军】【奖】【杯】【。】【大】【家】【都】【想】【为】【初】【三】【再】【添】【一】【笔】【灿】【烂】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【比】【赛】【时】【,】【队】【员】【们】【抱】【着】【只】【要】【进】【球】【不】【要】【命】【的】【宗】【旨】【,】【拼】【了】【命】【地】【把】【足】【球】【往】【对】【方】【半】【场】【“】【踹】【”】【,】【年】【少】【轻】【狂】【,】【年】【轻】【气】【盛】【啊】【。】【在】【场】【边】【,】【大】【家】【也】【没】【有】【闲】【着】【,】【在】【那】【儿】【比】【试】【“】【吼】【功】【”】【。】【夫】【战】【,】【勇】【气】【也】【。】【我】【们】【女】【生】【扯】【着】【嗓】【子】【直】【喊】【“】【加】【油】【”】【,】【真】【希】【望】【自】【己】【练】【过】【“】【狮】【吼】【功】【”】【呀】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【热】【闹】【的】【还】【在】【后】【面】【呢】【。】【无】【论】【裁】【判】【有】【多】【公】【正】【,】【只】【要】【一】【做】【出】【对】【我】【们】【不】【利】【的】【判】【罚】【,】【无】【论】【裁】【判】【与】【我】【们】【交】【情】【有】【多】【深】【,】【我】【们】【立】【马】【翻】【脸】【不】【认】【人】【,】【一】【律】【开】【“】【骂】【”】【。】【你】【可】【以】【感】【觉】【到】【整】【个】【操】【场】【都】【弥】【漫】【着】【青】【春】【的】【味】【道】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【其】【实】【,】【青】【春】【就】【是】【该】【有】【这】【样】【的】【冲】【劲】【和】【冲】【动】【才】【名】【副】【其】【实】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【十】【五】【岁】【,】【活】【力】【四】【射】【的】【年】【龄】【,】【可】【以】【轻】【狂】【的】【岁】【月】【。】【十】【五】【岁】【的】【我】【们】【闪】【烁】【着】【智】【慧】【的】【光】【芒】【,】【青】【春】【的】【光】【芒】【,】【活】【力】【的】【光】【芒】【。】【在】【我】【们】【的】【身】【上】【可】【以】【找】【到】【活】【力】【与】【热】【情】【,】【活】【泼】【与】【开】【朗】【,】【只】【要】【青】【春】【有】【的】【,】【我】【们】【都】【有】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【红】【日】【初】【升】【,】【其】【道】【大】【光】【,】【十】【五】【岁】【的】【我】【们】【就】【像】【初】【升】【的】【太】【阳】【,】【永】【远】【闪】【耀】【着】【活】【力】【的】【光】【芒】【,】【散】【发】【着】【青】【春】【的】【气】【息】【,】【前】【程】【一】【片】【光】【明】【,】【我】【们】【给】【世】【界】【带】【来】【了】【光】【明】【,】【带】【来】【了】【希】【望】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【是】【谁】【?】【我】【们】【是】【初】【升】【的】【太】【阳】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【 】【 】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【文】【语】【言】【幽】【默】【风】【趣】【,】【形】【象】【生】【动】【。】【文】【章】【主】【题】【部】【分】【“】【大】【江】【南】【北】【”】【的】【大】【词】【小】【用】【,】【“】【踹】【”】【“】【吼】【功】【”】【等】【词】【的】【巧】【妙】【移】【用】【,】【充】【满】【着】【时】【代】【气】【息】【,】【让】【人】【看】【了】【忍】【俊】【不】【禁】【。】【另】【外】【,】【考】【生】【用】【诗】【化】【的】【语】【言】【,】【写】【出】【了】【中】【学】【生】【的】【虎】【虎】【生】【气】【。】【字】【里】【行】【间】【洋】【溢】【着】【青】【春】【的】【激】【情】【,】【散】【发】【着】【青】【春】【的】【气】【息】【,】【仿】【佛】【青】【春】【的】【宣】【言】【,】【令】【正】【处】【于】【青】【春】【期】【的】【学】【子】【充】【满】【向】【往】【,】【也】【是】【这】【篇】【作】【文】【的】【一】【大】【优】【点】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【三】【、】【文】【体】【新】【颖】【、】【别】【开】【生】【面】【,】【彰】【显】【创】【新】【个】【性】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【纵】【观】【近】【几】【年】【的】【中】【考】【作】【文】【,】【打】【破】【了】【记】【叙】【文】【一】【统】【天】【下】【的】【局】【面】【,】【每】【年】【都】【有】【一】【些】【新】【颖】【活】【泼】【的】【文】【体】【进】【入】【我】【们】【的】【视】【野】【,】【令】【我】【们】【的】【眼】【前】【为】【之】【一】【亮】【。】【如】【童】【话】【、】【寓】【言】【、】【诗】【歌】【、】【书】【信】【、】【日】【记】【、】【杂】【文】【、】【小】【说】【、】【戏】【剧】【等】【各】【种】【新】【颖】【的】【文】【体】【,】【给】【传】【统】【的】【作】【文】【形】【式】【注】【入】【了】【一】【针】【兴】【奋】【剂】【,】【使】【更】【多】【的】【考】【生】【有】【了】【展】【示】【自】【己】【个】【性】【的】【机】【会】【。】【你】【若】【擅】【长】【形】【象】【思】【维】【,】【会】【编】【故】【事】【,】【你】【可】【以】【“】【编】【”】【一】【个】【美】【丽】【的】【故】【事】【,】【写】【成】【一】【篇】【感】【人】【的】【记】【叙】【文】【 】【;】【你】【若】【属】【于】【多】【愁】【善】【感】【之】【辈】【,】【可】【以】【让】【情】【感】【的】【溪】【流】【汩】【汩】【地】【流】【淌】【到】【一】【个】【个】【方】【格】【内】【,】【以】【一】【篇】【动】【人】【心】【弦】【的】【散】【文】【去】【打】【动】【阅】【卷】【老】【师】【的】【心】【;】【你】【若】【长】【于】【想】【象】【,】【则】【可】【天】【马】【行】【空】【,】【创】【作】【一】【篇】【引】【人】【入】【胜】【的】【幻】【想】【小】【说】【或】【想】【象】【作】【文】【;】【你】【若】【以】【说】【理】【见】【长】【,】【就】【选】【择】【议】【论】【文】【或】【杂】【文】【。】【你】【也】【可】【以】【按】【照】【现】【实】【生】【活】【中】【的】【应】【用】【文】【,】【来】【创】【作】【出】【新】【的】【文】【体】【,】【如】【就】【诊】【报】【告】【体】【、】【故】【事】【新】【编】【体】【、】【广】【告】【体】【、】【网】【络】【跟】【帖】【体】【等】【等】【。】【总】【之】【一】【句】【话】【,】【你】【完】【全】【可】【以】【发】【挥】【自】【己】【的】【优】【势】【,】【扬】【长】【避】【短】【,】【选】【择】【最】【佳】【形】【式】【,】【给】【情】【感】【之】【流】【开】【辟】【一】【条】【最】【佳】【通】【道】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【但】【需】【要】【强】【调】【的】【是】【,】【使】【用】【文】【体】【创】【新】【的】【方】【法】【写】【作】【,】【必】【须】【在】【平】【时】【将】【常】【规】【文】【体】【(】【如】【:】【记】【叙】【文】【、】【议】【论】【文】【、】【说】【明】【文】【、】【散】【文】【、】【寓】【言】【、】【小】【说】【、】【诗】【歌】【、】【戏】【剧】【等】【)】【和】【非】【常】【规】【文】【体】【(】【如】【:】【日】【记】【、】【书】【信】【、】【启】【事】【、】【倡】【议】【书】【、】【合】【同】【书】【、】【病】【历】【、】【诊】【断】【书】【、】【实】【验】【报】【告】【、】【现】【场】【采】【访】【等】【)】【的】【特】【征】【弄】【清】【楚】【,】【做】【到】【形】【式】【贴】【切】【,】【内】【容】【适】【宜】【,】【同】【时】【又】【闪】【现】【智】【慧】【的】【光】【芒】【。】【在】【写】【作】【时】【,】【最】【好】【使】【用】【自】【己】【最】【擅】【长】【的】【结】【构】【形】【式】【、】【语】【言】【方】【式】【,】【不】【然】【,】【弄】【出】【非】【驴】【非】【马】【的】【“】【四】【不】【像】【”】【来】【,】【反】【倒】【弄】【巧】【成】【拙】【了】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【□】【佳】【作】【示】【例】【三】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【关】【于】【交】【往】【条】【件】【的】【实】【验】【报】【告】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【○】【 】【一】【考】【生】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【实】【验】【名】【称】【:】【“】【交】【往】【”】【的】【必】【要】【条】【件】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【实】【验】【目】【的】【:】【2】【1】【世】【纪】【是】【一】【个】【多】【元】【化】【的】【世】【纪】【,】【一】【个】【信】【息】【化】【的】【时】【代】【,】【生】【存】【和】【发】【展】【都】【需】【要】【交】【往】【。】【本】【实】【验】【将】【特】【别】【测】【定】【交】【往】【的】【条】【件】【,】【以】【便】【所】【有】【人】【都】【能】【从】【交】【往】【中】【取】【得】【进】【步】【,】【得】【到】【快】【乐】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【实】【验】【用】【品】【:】【大】【试】【管】【三】【支】【,】【“】【真】【心】【”】【溶】【液】【、】【“】【虚】【伪】【”】【溶】【液】【、】【“】【钱】【和】【权】【”】【溶】【液】【各】【一】【瓶】【,】【“】【交】【往】【”】【颗】【粒】【若】【干】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【实】【验】【步】【骤】【:】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【.】【取】【三】【支】【大】【试】【管】【,】【向】【里】【面】【加】【入】【等】【量】【的】【“】【交】【往】【”】【颗】【粒】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【.】【依】【次】【向】【三】【支】【大】【试】【管】【中】【滴】【加】【等】【量】【的】【三】【种】【溶】【液】【,】【观】【察】【并】【记】【录】【其】【变】【化】【情】【况】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【实】【验】【现】【象】【:】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【.】【加】【入】【“】【虚】【伪】【”】【溶】【液】【的】【试】【管】【中】【反】【应】【强】【烈】【,】【溶】【液】【由】【灰】【色】【迅】【速】【变】【成】【黑】【色】【,】【出】【现】【沉】【淀】【,】【并】【有】【令】【人】【流】【泪】【的】【刺】【激】【性】【气】【体】【生】【成】【,】【“】【交】【往】【”】【颗】【粒】【由】【饱】【满】【变】【得】【萎】【缩】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【.】【加】【入】【“】【钱】【和】【权】【”】【溶】【液】【的】【试】【管】【中】【反】【应】【适】【中】【,】【溶】【液】【由】【土】【黄】【色】【变】【成】【黑】【色】【,】【并】【散】【发】【出】【一】【种】【令】【人】【头】【晕】【脑】【涨】【的】【气】【体】【,】【“】【交】【往】【”】【颗】【粒】【渐】【渐】【稀】【释】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【3】【.】【加】【入】【“】【真】【心】【”】【溶】【液】【的】【试】【管】【中】【,】【反】【应】【极】【慢】【,】【溶】【液】【由】【白】【色】【变】【成】【无】【色】【,】【散】【发】【出】【一】【种】【令】【人】【愉】【快】【的】【气】【味】【,】【“】【交】【往】【”】【颗】【粒】【膨】【大】【,】【并】【生】【成】【一】【种】【叫】【“】【朋】【友】【”】【的】【固】【体】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【实】【验】【方】【程】【式】【:】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【交】【往】【+】【虚】【伪】【=】【痛】【苦】【+】【极】【有】【害】【物】【质】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【交】【往】【+】【钱】【与】【权】【=】【烦】【恼】【+】【有】【害】【物】【质】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【交】【往】【+】【真】【心】【=】【快】【乐】【+】【朋】【友】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【实】【验】【小】【结】【:】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【由】【此】【可】【见】【,】【交】【往】【的】【条】【件】【是】【真】【心】【,】【而】【真】【心】【却】【需】【要】【长】【时】【间】【才】【能】【体】【现】【出】【来】【,】【但】【是】【,】【真】【心】【交】【往】【的】【结】【果】【,】【就】【是】【你】【能】【拥】【有】【真】【正】【的】【朋】【友】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【实】【验】【时】【间】【:】【2】【0】【0】【7】【年】【6】【月】【1】【0】【日】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【注】【:】【与】【“】【虚】【伪】【”】【和】【“】【钱】【和】【权】【”】【溶】【液】【反】【应】【过】【的】【剩】【余】【物】【质】【必】【须】【慎】【重】【处】【理】【,】【否】【则】【危】【害】【极】【大】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【 】【 】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【文】【为】【满】【分】【作】【文】【,】【作】【者】【围】【绕】【“】【交】【往】【”】【这】【一】【话】【题】【,】【采】【用】【“】【实】【验】【报】【告】【”】【体】【的】【形】【式】【,】【生】【动】【、】【形】【象】【地】【阐】【明】【了】【一】【个】【道】【理】【:】【要】【想】【在】【交】【往】【中】【取】【得】【进】【步】【,】【得】【到】【快】【乐】【,】【其】【条】【件】【必】【须】【是】【真】【心】【,】【只】【有】【真】【心】【交】【往】【,】【才】【能】【拥】【有】【真】【正】【的】【朋】【友】【。】【构】【思】【新】【颖】【,】【立】【意】【积】【极】【、】【深】【刻】【,】【叫】【人】【不】【忍】【释】【卷】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【建】【国】【6】【0】【多】【年】【来】【,】【广】【州】【的】【经】【济】【发】【展】【一】【日】【千】【里】【,】【广】【州】【的】【精】【神】【文】【明】【建】【设】【也】【不】【断】【加】【强】【。】【1】【9】【9】【8】【年】【,】【广】【州】【人】【的】【音】【乐】【殿】【堂】【—】【—】【星】【海】【音】【乐】【厅】【落】【成】【,】【为】【祖】【国】【的】【南】【大】【门】【增】【添】【了】【风】【采】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【音】【乐】【厅】【门】【前】【,】【我】【看】【见】【了】【冼】【星】【海】【的】【铜】【像】【,】【他】【双】【手】【高】【举】【着】【,】【好】【像】【在】【指】【挥】【乐】【团】【演】【奏】【。】【抬】【头】【望】【去】【,】【整】【个】【星】【海】【音】【乐】【厅】【像】【一】【只】【展】【翅】【的】【雄】【鹰】【,】【正】【要】【飞】【向】【改】【革】【开】【放】【的】【晴】【空】【;】【又】【像】【一】【台】【大】【钢】【琴】【,】【正】【在】【弹】【奏】【广】【州】【明】【天】【的】【赞】【歌】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【走】【进】【大】【堂】【,】【只】【见】【四】【周】【都】【是】【落】【地】【玻】【璃】【墙】【。】【这】【时】【,】【音】【乐】【厅】【的】【叔】【叔】【告】【诉】【我】【,】【星】【海】【音】【乐】【厅】【是】【由】【华】【南】【理】【工】【大】【学】【建】【筑】【设】【计】【研】【究】【院】【设】【计】【的】【。】【这】【里】【结】【合】【了】【广】【东】【的】【地】【方】【特】【色】【和】【音】【乐】【文】【化】【,】【是】【艺】【术】【的】【结】【晶】【。】【正】【如】【一】【句】【名】【言】【所】【说】【:】【音】【乐】【是】【流】【动】【的】【建】【筑】【,】【建】【筑】【是】【凝】【固】【的】【音】【乐】【。】【叔】【叔】【还】【告】【诉】【我】【,】【星】【海】【音】【乐】【厅】【经】【过】【整】【整】【1】【0】【年】【的】【时】【间】【才】【建】【成】【,】【其】【间】【还】【经】【历】【过】【许】【多】【波】【折】【。】【这】【么】【辛】【苦】【建】【一】【个】【音】【乐】【厅】【,】【都】【是】【为】【了】【让】【老】【百】【姓】【也】【能】【更】【好】【地】【欣】【赏】【音】【乐】【,】【让】【更】【多】【人】【喜】【欢】【音】【乐】【,】【提】【高】【人】【们】【的】【音】【乐】【素】【养】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【沿】【着】【大】【堂】【的】【楼】【梯】【往】【上】【走】【,】【来】【到】【交】【响】【乐】【大】【厅】【,】【这】【里】【又】【是】【另】【一】【番】【景】【象】【。】【大】【厅】【的】【地】【板】【甚】【至】【连】【墙】【面】【也】【是】【用】【木】【头】【做】【的】【。】【大】【厅】【是】【按】【山】【谷】【梯】【田】【的】【形】【状】【设】【计】【的】【,】【一】【共】【有】【1】【 】【6】【0】【0】【多】【个】【座】【位】【。】【交】【响】【乐】【大】【厅】【与】【众】【不】【同】【的】【地】【方】【就】【是】【它】【四】【周】【都】【有】【座】【位】【,】【这】【样】【可】【以】【使】【观】【众】【和】【音】【乐】【家】【更】【加】【接】【近】【,】【感】【受】【到】【音】【乐】【家】【的】【感】【情】【。】【悄】【悄】【告】【诉】【你】【一】【个】【小】【秘】【密】【,】【这】【么】【大】【的】【音】【乐】【厅】【,】【完】【全】【不】【用】【麦】【克】【风】【,】【就】【能】【使】【大】【厅】【每】【个】【角】【落】【都】【能】【听】【到】【优】【美】【的】【音】【乐】【。】【这】【是】【为】【什】【么】【呢】【?】【原】【来】【是】【因】【为】【山】【谷】【梯】【田】【的】【设】【计】【和】【木】【板】【反】【射】【声】【音】【的】【原】【理】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【参】【观】【星】【海】【音】【乐】【厅】【,】【我】【不】【禁】【默】【默】【告】【诫】【自】【己】【:】【我】【们】【是】【2】【1】【世】【纪】【的】【少】【年】【,】【更】【要】【为】【弘】【扬】【祖】【国】【的】【灿】【烂】【文】【化】【而】【努】【力】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【 】【 】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【是】【一】【篇】【参】【观】【记】【,】【介】【绍】【了】【广】【州】【人】【的】【音】【乐】【殿】【堂】【—】【—】【星】【海】【音】【乐】【厅】【的】【情】【况】【。】【文】【章】【语】【言】【较】【生】【动】【、】【自】【然】【,】【字】【里】【行】【间】【流】【露】【出】【作】【者】【的】【自】【豪】【和】【赞】【美】【之】【情】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【周】【跃】【文】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】新加坡领事馆【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【半】【命】【题】【作】【文】【是】【介】【于】【话】【题】【作】【文】【与】【全】【命】【题】【作】【文】【之】【间】【的】【一】【种】【训】【练】【形】【式】【。】【在】【中】【考】【作】【文】【题】【目】【中】【,】【半】【命】【题】【作】【文】【仍】【在】【“】【升】【温】【”】【,】【成】【为】【一】【道】【引】【人】【注】【目】【的】【亮】【丽】【“】【风】【景】【”】【。】【写】【好】【半】【命】【题】【作】【文】【,】【必】【须】【着】【重】【把】【握】【以】【下】【备】【考】【策】【略】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【、】【了】【解】【题】【型】【,】【把】【握】【特】【点】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【半】【命】【题】【作】【文】【具】【有】【开】【放】【性】【与】【限】【制】【性】【两】【个】【特】【点】【。】【所】【谓】【开】【放】【性】【,】【主】【要】【体】【现】【在】【未】【命】【定】【的】【半】【题】【上】【,】【考】【生】【可】【在】【已】【命】【半】【题】【提】【示】【的】【范】【围】【内】【,】【根】【据】【各】【人】【的】【爱】【好】【特】【长】【与】【生】【活】【经】【验】【,】【去】【选】【择】【最】【能】【表】【达】【中】【心】【的】【题】【材】【,】【从】【而】【确】【定】【未】【命】【的】【半】【题】【。】【譬】【如】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【湖】【南】【株】【洲】【题】【《】【藏】【在】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【的】【秘】【密】【》】【,】【就】【可】【以】【多】【角】【度】【、】【全】【方】【位】【选】【材】【立】【意】【。】【可】【从】【具】【体】【事】【物】【命】【题】【立】【意】【,】【如】【“】【藏】【在】【抽】【屉】【里】【的】【秘】【密】【”】【“】【藏】【在】【书】【包】【里】【的】【秘】【密】【”】【“】【藏】【在】【课】【桌】【里】【的】【秘】【密】【”】【“】【藏】【在】【寝】【室】【里】【的】【秘】【密】【”】【“】【藏】【在】【角】【落】【的】【秘】【密】【”】【“】【藏】【在】【花】【中】【的】【秘】【密】【”】【等】【;】【也】【可】【从】【抽】【象】【事】【物】【命】【题】【立】【意】【,】【如】【“】【藏】【在】【青】【春】【里】【的】【秘】【密】【”】【“】【藏】【在】【文】【字】【中】【的】【秘】【密】【”】【“】【藏】【在】【我】【们】【之】【间】【的】【秘】【密】【”】【“】【藏】【在】【古】【迹】【里】【的】【秘】【密】【”】【等】【。】【可】【以】【写】【某】【一】【段】【时】【间】【的】【情】【感】【体】【验】【和】【对】【某】【一】【思】【想】【的】【认】【识】【提】【高】【,】【也】【可】【以】【反】【映】【考】【生】【的】【某】【种】【人】【文】【素】【养】【和】【文】【学】【素】【养】【。】【只】【要】【你】【平】【时】【有】【一】【定】【的】【生】【活】【体】【验】【,】【关】【注】【了】【生】【活】【中】【的】【某】【一】【秘】【密】【,】【挖】【掘】【这】【一】【细】【节】【的】【深】【层】【含】【义】【,】【写】【出】【成】【长】【过】【程】【中】【的】【独】【特】【的】【人】【生】【感】【悟】【,】【就】【很】【容】【易】【写】【出】【好】【文】【章】【来】【。】【所】【谓】【限】【制】【性】【,】【主】【要】【表】【现】【在】【已】【命】【出】【的】【半】【题】【上】【。】【有】【的】【限】【制】【主】【题】【,】【如】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【重】【庆】【中】【考】【题】【《】【我】【改】【变】【了】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【的】【色】【彩】【》】【,】【福】【建】【厦】【门】【题】【《】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【让】【我】【回】【味】【无】【穷】【》】【;】【有】【的】【限】【制】【内】【容】【,】【如】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【福】【建】【三】【明】【题】【《】【如】【果】【我】【有】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【》】【,】【浙】【江】【义】【乌】【题】【《】【跟】【我】【学】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【》】【;】【也】【有】【的】【限】【制】【人】【称】【,】【如】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【浙】【江】【宁】【波】【题】【《】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【,】【不】【普】【通】【》】【,】【要】【求】【考】【生】【从】【“】【他】【、】【她】【、】【它】【”】【这】【三】【个】【词】【语】【中】【选】【择】【一】【个】【,】【用】【第】【三】【人】【称】【来】【写】【,】【等】【等】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 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】【在】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【中】【考】【中】【,】【半】【命】【题】【作】【文】【主】【要】【有】【三】【种】【呈】【现】【方】【式】【:】【其】【一】【,】【无】【提】【示】【补】【充】【型】【,】【即】【没】【有】【任】【何】【明】【显】【的】【限】【制】【语】【与】【修】【饰】【语】【,】【命】【题】【人】【只】【给】【了】【试】【题】【的】【一】【半】【,】【另】【一】【半】【需】【要】【考】【生】【根】【据】【已】【给】【出】【的】【部】【分】【分】【析】【试】【题】【需】【要】【补】【充】【的】【内】【容】【范】【围】【;】【然】【后】【,】【在】【这】【个】【范】【围】【中】【搜】【索】【自】【己】【最】【想】【表】【达】【的】【东】【西】【,】【以】【此】【确】【定】【主】【题】【内】【容】【。】【主】【题】【确】【定】【后】【,】【再】【根】【据】【这】【个】【主】【题】【选】【择】【恰】【当】【的】【词】【语】【或】【短】【语】【,】【把】【题】【目】【补】【充】【完】【整】【。】【大】【多】【数】【标】【题】【都】【是】【从】【“】【我】【”】【的】【自】【身】【感】【受】【和】【自】【身】【体】【验】【切】【入】【命】【题】【的】【。】【譬】【如】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【福】【建】【厦】【门】【题】【:】【请】【以】【“】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【让】【我】【回】【味】【无】【穷】【”】【为】【题】【,】【写】【一】【篇】【作】【文】【。】【该】【类】【文】【题】【为】【考】【生】【提】【供】【了】【广】【阔】【的】【写】【作】【空】【间】【,】【考】【生】【宜】【选】【取】【与】【中】【心】【相】【关】【的】【自】【己】【感】【受】【最】【深】【的】【体】【验】【、】【思】【考】【、】【发】【现】【来】【入】【题】【行】【文】【。】【其】【二】【,】【供】【选】【补】【充】【型】【,】【该】【类】【文】【题】【在】【题】【干】【中】【给】【出】【了】【可】【供】【填】【充】【的】【词】【句】【,】【让】【考】【生】【根】【据】【已】【有】【的】【生】【活】【素】【材】【筛】【选】【适】【合】【自】【己】【表】【达】【的】【相】【关】【内】【容】【填】【写】【在】【空】【白】【处】【,】【使】【题】【目】【完】【整】【,】【然】【后】【作】【文】【。】【需】【要】【说】【明】【的】【是】【,】【所】【给】【的】【备】【选】【词】【句】【都】【是】【提】【示】【性】【的】【也】【是】【数】【量】【不】【确】【定】【的】【,】【考】【生】【在】【选】【择】【的】【时】【候】【,】【可】【以】【从】【备】【选】【语】【句】【中】【选】【取】【,】【也】【可】【以】【根】【据】【另】【一】【半】【试】【题】【所】【指】【意】【向】【以】【及】【备】【选】【语】【句】【的】【样】【式】【,】【按】【照】【自】【己】【的】【行】【文】【思】【路】【另】【外】【补】【充】【。】【与】【前】【类】【文】【题】【相】【比】【,】【考】【生】【只】【需】【选】【择】【所】【给】【词】【语】【填】【补】【完】【整】【题】【目】【即】【可】【,】【审】【题】【难】【度】【明】【显】【下】【降】【。】【譬】【如】【,】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【甘】【肃】【天】【水】【题】【:】【请】【以】【“】【我】【相】【信】【 】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【”】【为】【题】【写】【作】【文】【。】【(】【将】【题】【目】【补】【充】【完】【整】【,】【如】【横】【线】【上】【可】【填】【“】【我】【能】【行】【”】【“】【妈】【妈】【是】【爱】【我】【的】【”】【“】【彩】【虹】【总】【在】【风】【雨】【后】【”】【“】【人】【间】【有】【真】【情】【”】【等】【)】【此】【类】【文】【题】【限】【制】【了】【写】【作】【的】【范】【围】【与】【内】【容】【,】【题】【目】【供】【选】【会】【导】【致】【不】【少】【考】【生】【选】【取】【相】【同】【文】【题】【,】【因】【此】【要】【想】【脱】【颖】【而】【出】【,】【同】【学】【们】【就】【得】【读】【出】【文】【题】【背】【后】【的】【深】【层】【的】【立】【意】【导】【向】【。】【其】【三】【,】【材】【料】【补】【充】【型】【,】【就】【是】【指】【在】【标】【题】【的】【前】【面】【或】【后】【面】【给】【一】【段】【文】【字】【材】【料】【,】【考】【生】【依】【据】【材】【料】【提】【供】【的】【主】【要】【信】【息】【,】【按】【照】【标】【题】【所】【表】【达】【的】【另】【一】【半】【意】【向】【,】【提】【炼】【或】【选】【择】【合】【适】【的】【语】【词】【对】【题】【目】【进】【行】【补】【充】【,】【使】【其】【完】【整】【。】【这】【类】【试】【题】【所】【给】【材】【料】【虽】【然】【不】【同】【,】【但】【都】【在】【力】【求】【达】【到】【一】【个】【目】【标】【,】【就】【是】【让】【考】【生】【写】【生】【活】【中】【的】【事】【情】【,】【写】【成】【长】【体】【验】【的】【过】【程】【,】【写】【人】【生】【感】【悟】【。】【譬】【如】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【江】【西】【题】【:】【生】【活】【中】【传】【递】【的】【现】【象】【很】【多】【,】【如】【传】【递】【火】【炬】【、】【传】【递】【快】【乐】【、】【传】【递】【爱】【心】【…】【…】【传】【递】【的】【方】【式】【也】【多】【样】【,】【这】【一】【切】【都】【给】【你】【诸】【多】【感】【受】【和】【启】【迪】【。】【传】【递】【不】【仅】【是】【一】【种】【形】【式】【,】【更】【是】【一】【个】【过】【程】【。】【也】【许】【你】【曾】【经】【是】【传】【递】【的】【组】【织】【者】【,】【或】【是】【参】【与】【者】【。】【请】【以】【“】【传】【递】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【”】【为】【题】【,】【写】【一】【篇】【文】【章】【。】【文】【题】【前】【的】【材】【料】【从】【多】【个】【维】【度】【为】【考】【生】【打】【开】【写】【作】【思】【路】【,】【有】【立】【意】【的】【启】【发】【,】【还】【有】【选】【材】【的】【帮】【助】【,】【唤】【醒】【学】【生】【的】【写】【作】【经】【验】【,】【触】【发】【学】【生】【的】【写】【作】【灵】【感】【。】【相】【比】【前】【两】【种】【文】【题】【形】【式】【,】【材】【料】【补】【充】【型】【文】【题】【显】【然】【增】【加】【了】【难】【度】【,】【也】【就】【是】【说】【,】【需】【要】【考】【生】【首】【先】【理】【解】【材】【料】【,】【然】【后】【分】【析】【材】【料】【,】【提】【炼】【出】【适】【合】【自】【己】【写】【作】【的】【语】【词】【补】【充】【试】【题】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【二】【、】【抓】【住】【重】【点】【,】【巧】【用】【方】【法】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【半】【命】【题】【作】【文】【是】【全】【命】【题】【作】【文】【的】【“】【前】【奏】【”】【。】【半】【命】【题】【作】【文】【的】【应】【考】【技】【巧】【就】【是】【将】【半】【命】【题】【变】【为】【全】【命】【题】【的】【“】【补】【题】【”】【技】【巧】【,】【而】【补】【题】【之】【关】【键】【在】【于】【审】【题】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【其】【一】【,】【仔】【细】【审】【题】【明】【要】【求】【。】【审】【读】【文】【题】【,】【反】【复】【琢】【磨】【已】【命】【的】【半】【个】【题】【目】【的】【含】【义】【,】【抓】【住】【关】【键】【信】【息】【,】【充】【分】【吸】【取】【其】【中】【的】【有】【用】【信】【息】【,】【掌】【握】【正】【确】【理】【解】【题】【意】【的】【钥】【匙】【:】【1】【.】【要】【明】【确】【有】【关】【文】【章】【体】【裁】【之】【要】【求】【。】【有】【些】【半】【命】【题】【作】【文】【题】【目】【本】【身】【就】【带】【有】【文】【体】【倾】【向】【。】【如】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【浙】【江】【义】【乌】【题】【《】【跟】【我】【学】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【》】【是】【叙】【事】【性】【的】【记】【叙】【文】【;】【广】【西】【桂】【林】【题】【《】【我】【的】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【老】【师】【》】【是】【写】【人】【的】【记】【叙】【文】【;】【江】【西】【题】【《】【传】【递】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【》】【则】【可】【以】【根】【据】【自】【己】【写】【作】【的】【特】【长】【选】【择】【适】【合】【自】【己】【的】【文】【体】【,】【并】【且】【在】【构】【思】【中】【努】【力】【突】【出】【选】【定】【的】【文】【体】【特】【征】【。】【2】【.】【要】【明】【确】【选】【材】【、】【中】【心】【、】【感】【情】【等】【要】【求】【。】【如】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【福】【建】【漳】【州】【题】【《】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【在】【飞】【扬】【》】【中】【的】【“】【在】【”】【有】【时】【间】【之】【限】【,】【表】【明】【现】【在】【,】【不】【是】【过】【去】【或】【将】【来】【;】【“】【飞】【扬】【”】【则】【根】【据】【《】【现】【代】【汉】【语】【词】【典】【》】【的】【解】【释】【,】【可】【理】【解】【为】【物】【体】【的】【向】【上】【飘】【起】【,】【也】【可】【形】【容】【精】【神】【兴】【奋】【得】【意】【。】【按】【照】【后】【一】【种】【解】【释】【,】【由】【于】【受】【“】【飞】【扬】【”】【的】【限】【制】【,】【只】【有】【跟】【情】【感】【比】【较】【有】【关】【的】【才】【适】【合】【飞】【扬】【,】【如】【“】【热】【情】【在】【飞】【扬】【”】【“】【激】【情】【在】【飞】【扬】【”】【“】【梦】【想】【在】【飞】【扬】【”】【等】【比】【较】【贴】【切】【。】【如】【果】【审】【题】【时】【忽】【略】【了】【“】【在】【”】【,】【或】【淡】【化】【了】【“】【飞】【扬】【”】【,】【写】【出】【的】【文】【章】【就】【会】【离】【题】【了】【。】【3】【.】【要】【明】【确】【填】【词】【的】【拟】【题】【要】【求】【。】【尤】【其】【是】【供】【选】【补】【充】【型】【文】【题】【,】【只】【能】【用】【提】【供】【的】【词】【语】【作】【文】【。】【如】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【无】【锡】【题】【《】【我】【们】【的】【快】【乐】【来】【自】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【》】【,】【规】【定】【补】【题】【只】【能】【从】【“】【成】【功】【”】【“】【坚】【持】【”】【“】【梦】【想】【”】【“】【爱】【心】【”】【这】【四】【个】【选】【项】【中】【选】【择】【,】【否】【则】【视】【为】【偏】【题】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【其】【二】【,】【拓】【展】【思】【维】【巧】【补】【题】【。】【半】【命】【题】【作】【文】【之】【关】【键】【是】【补】【题】【,】【谨】【慎】【补】【题】【于】【前】【,】【方】【能】【潇】【洒】【成】【文】【于】【后】【。】【运】【思】【在】【先】【、】【高】【明】【补】【题】【,】【要】【以】【“】【我】【”】【为】【中】【心】【,】【以】【内】【容】【“】【熟】【”】【为】【重】【点】【,】【以】【立】【意】【“】【新】【”】【为】【前】【提】【,】【以】【口】【子】【“】【小】【”】【为】【上】【策】【,】【想】【方】【设】【法】【,】【扬】【长】【避】【短】【,】【补】【自】【己】【最】【有】【把】【握】【写】【好】【的】【半】【题】【。】【具】【体】【说】【来】【,】【必】【须】【着】【重】【注】【意】【两】【点】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【.】【多】【角】【度】【思】【维】【来】【补】【题】【。】【半】【命】【题】【作】【文】【的】【“】【补】【题】【”】【,】【如】【果】【能】【从】【多】【角】【度】【发】【散】【思】【维】【,】【甚】【至】【逆】【向】【思】【维】【,】【或】【许】【会】【有】【意】【外】【的】【效】【果】【。】【多】【角】【度】【补】【题】【的】【表】【现】【形】【式】【主】【要】【有】【:】【一】【是】【从】【立】【意】【角】【度】【补】【题】【。】【譬】【如】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【深】【圳】【题】【《】【给】【自】【己】【一】【些】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【》】【,】【可】【补】【题】【为】【“】【给】【自】【己】【一】【些】【信】【心】【(】【以】【及】【爱】【心】【、】【坚】【持】【等】【)】【”】【,】【这】【“】【信】【心】【(】【爱】【心】【、】【坚】【持】【等】【)】【”】【就】【是】【作】【者】【所】【要】【表】【现】【的】【中】【心】【主】【旨】【。】【二】【是】【从】【突】【出】【材】【料】【角】【度】【补】【题】【,】【全】【文】【将】【用】【作】【者】【选】【定】【的】【材】【料】【来】【表】【现】【一】【定】【的】【主】【题】【。】【譬】【如】【,】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【广】【西】【南】【宁】【题】【《】【其】【实】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【就】【在】【我】【身】【边】【》】【,】【补】【题】【后】【可】【以】【是】【“】【其】【实】【榜】【样】【就】【在】【我】【身】【边】【”】【,】【那】【就】【必】【须】【通】【过】【写】【“】【榜】【样】【”】【来】【表】【现】【文】【章】【的】【主】【题】【。】【三】【是】【从】【点】【示】【范】【围】【角】【度】【补】【题】【。】【譬】【如】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【福】【建】【三】【明】【题】【《】【如】【果】【我】【有】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【》】【,】【可】【补】【写】【为】【“】【如】【果】【我】【有】【一】【双】【慧】【眼】【”】【,】【补】【写】【后】【的】【文】【题】【是】【一】【个】【宽】【题】【,】【“】【有】【一】【双】【慧】【眼】【”】【的】【感】【受】【怎】【么】【样】【,】【要】【求】【自】【选】【题】【材】【,】【进】【行】【恰】【当】【的】【表】【现】【。】【四】【是】【综】【合】【诸】【因】【素】【补】【题】【,】【这】【种】【补】【题】【最】【为】【自】【由】【,】【因】【为】【它】【既】【能】【为】【作】【者】【确】【定】【题】【材】【,】【又】【能】【为】【作】【者】【表】【现】【立】【意】【方】【向】【。】【譬】【如】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【山】【东】【东】【营】【题】【《】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【竟】【然】【如】【此】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【》】【可】【补】【写】【为】【“】【欢】【乐】【‘】【十】【一】【’】【竟】【然】【如】【此】【难】【忘】【”】【,】【就】【可】【选】【用】【“】【十】【一】【”】【长】【假】【中】【的】【生】【活】【片】【段】【来】【表】【现】【那】【种】【令】【人】【难】【忘】【的】【惬】【意】【。】【当】【然】【,】【多】【角】【度】【构】【思】【补】【题】【,】【必】【须】【严】【格】【把】【握】【一】【个】【前】【提】【:】【符】【合】【要】【求】【、】【切】【中】【题】【旨】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 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】【2】【.】【用】【心】【“】【过】【滤】【”】【求】【新】【颖】【。】【半】【命】【题】【作】【文】【的】【补】【题】【是】【作】【文】【构】【思】【的】【预】【热】【与】【启】【动】【,】【补】【充】【一】【个】【字】【一】【个】【词】【,】【貌】【似】【简】【单】【,】【但】【其】【中】【颇】【有】【奥】【妙】【。】【高】【明】【、】【机】【敏】【地】【补】【题】【,】【要】【顺】【着】【一】【定】【的】【原】【则】【去】【构】【思】【、】【操】【作】【,】【要】【明】【确】【待】【补】【内】【容】【应】【追】【求】【的】【目】【标】【,】【扬】【长】【避】【短】【,】【迅】【速】【在】【脑】【海】【中】【选】【取】【自】【己】【感】【受】【最】【深】【的】【事】【件】【。】【补】【题】【时】【,】【我】【们】【可】【能】【会】【想】【起】【好】【几】【个】【内】【容】【,】【这】【时】【需】【要】【把】【可】【选】【的】【都】【迅】【速】【在】【脑】【子】【里】【“】【过】【滤】【”】【一】【遍】【,】【选】【填】【上】【自】【己】【最】【熟】【悉】【、】【最】【有】【把】【握】【写】【好】【、】【最】【能】【写】【出】【新】【意】【的】【半】【题】【。】【譬】【如】【,】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【河】【南】【中】【考】【题】【《】【怀】【念】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【的】【日】【子】【》】【,】【如】【何】【补】【好】【这】【个】【题】【目】【呢】【?】【除】【了】【紧】【扣】【以】【上】【要】【求】【外】【,】【还】【要】【注】【意】【下】【面】【三】【点】【:】【一】【是】【补】【充】【令】【你】【最】【想】【说】【的】【内】【容】【。】【最】【想】【说】【,】【才】【有】【话】【说】【,】【才】【能】【激】【起】【写】【作】【的】【欲】【望】【和】【激】【情】【,】【才】【有】【望】【做】【到】【“】【下】【笔】【如】【有】【神】【”】【。】【有】【个】【考】【生】【,】【最】【疼】【爱】【她】【的】【奶】【奶】【去】【世】【了】【,】【激】【发】【了】【她】【的】【写】【作】【灵】【感】【,】【她】【将】【题】【目】【补】【充】【为】【《】【怀】【念】【奶】【奶】【的】【日】【子】【》】【,】【心】【中】【的】【情】【思】【和】【对】【奶】【奶】【想】【说】【的】【话】【,】【一】【时】【间】【像】【泉】【水】【一】【般】【涌】【出】【来】【,】【于】【是】【写】【出】【了】【一】【篇】【情】【真】【意】【切】【的】【应】【试】【佳】【作】【。】【二】【是】【补】【上】【令】【你】【心】【跳】【的】【文】【字】【。】【面】【对】【《】【怀】【念】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【的】【日】【子】【》】【,】【大】【多】【数】【考】【生】【都】【补】【写】【成】【“】【怀】【念】【初】【中】【三】【年】【的】【日】【子】【”】【,】【叙】【述】【对】【往】【日】【的】【留】【恋】【以】【及】【和】【同】【学】【老】【师】【在】【一】【起】【的】【欢】【乐】【等】【,】【但】【这】【样】【写】【会】【使】【阅】【卷】【老】【师】【产】【生】【审】【美】【疲】【劳】【。】【其】【实】【你】【可】【另】【辟】【蹊】【径】【,】【若】【将】【上】【面】【的】【题】【目】【补】【成】【“】【怀】【念】【微】【笑】【的】【日】【子】【”】【“】【怀】【念】【沐】【浴】【在】【伊】【甸】【园】【的】【日】【子】【”】【“】【怀】【念】【缕】【缕】【书】【香】【的】【日】【子】【”】【等】【,】【就】【能】【更】【好】【地】【拨】【动】【读】【者】【共】【鸣】【的】【心】【弦】【。】【三】【是】【补】【填】【令】【你】【感】【到】【新】【奇】【的】【事】【物】【。】【人】【人】【对】【新】【鲜】【的】【事】【物】【都】【充】【满】【了】【好】【奇】【心】【,】【希】【望】【先】【睹】【为】【快】【。】【当】【我】【们】【补】【充】【题】【目】【时】【,】【必】【须】【在】【大】【脑】【中】【搜】【索】【一】【下】【,】【找】【一】【找】【令】【自】【己】【感】【到】【新】【奇】【、】【激】【动】【而】【又】【富】【有】【积】【极】【意】【义】【的】【材】【料】【。】【众】【人】【虽】【然】【胃】【口】【不】【一】【,】【但】【对】【新】【鲜】【事】【物】【感】【兴】【趣】【却】【是】【一】【样】【的】【。】【譬】【如】【,】【有】【一】【个】【考】【生】【补】【题】【为】【《】【怀】【念】【父】【母】【团】【聚】【的】【日】【子】【》】【,】【文】【章】【写】【的】【是】【父】【母】【外】【出】【打】【工】【后】【,】【“】【我】【”】【从】【寂】【寞】【的】【日】【子】【里】【找】【到】【安】【慰】【的】【心】【路】【变】【化】【,】【抒】【发】【了】【自】【己】【青】【春】【成】【长】【中】【对】【“】【寂】【寞】【”】【的】【独】【特】【感】【受】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 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】【有】【些】【考】【生】【在】【补】【题】【时】【不】【能】【充】【分】【利】【用】【半】【命】【题】【作】【文】【“】【自】【我】【命】【一】【半】【题】【”】【的】【有】【利】【条】【件】【,】【仅】【仅】【着】【眼】【于】【内】【容】【是】【否】【“】【好】【写】【”】【,】【是】【否】【“】【耳】【熟】【能】【详】【”】【,】【而】【不】【是】【是】【否】【“】【写】【得】【好】【”】【,】【是】【否】【“】【能】【出】【新】【”】【。】【这】【种】【“】【先】【天】【不】【足】【”】【,】【势】【必】【导】【致】【自】【己】【拟】【的】【题】【目】【反】【“】【将】【”】【了】【自】【己】【的】【“】【军】【”】【,】【进】【入】【了】【下】【列】【误】【区】【:】【一】【是】【补】【题】【俗】【套】【,】【重】【复】【雷】【同】【。】【这】【种】【现】【象】【在】【半】【命】【题】【作】【文】【中】【十】【分】【突】【出】【,】【写】【出】【的】【作】【文】【“】【撞】【车】【概】【率】【”】【也】【相】【当】【高】【。】【譬】【如】【,】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【湖】【南】【株】【洲】【题】【《】【藏】【在】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【的】【秘】【密】【》】【,】【不】【少】【考】【生】【由】【于】【思】【维】【闭】【塞】【、】【缺】【乏】【创】【新】【,】【按】【照】【同】【样】【的】【思】【路】【把】【题】【目】【拟】【为】【《】【藏】【在】【心】【中】【的】【秘】【密】【》】【,】【这】【个】【题】【目】【很】【难】【写】【出】【新】【意】【。】【二】【是】【拟】【题】【宽】【泛】【,】【难】【以】【下】【笔】【。】【譬】【如】【,】【有】【些】【考】【生】【针】【对】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【湖】【南】【岳】【阳】【题】【《】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【如】【此】【美】【丽】【》】【,】【补】【题】【为】【《】【大】【自】【然】【如】【此】【美】【丽】【》】【《】【人】【生】【如】【此】【美】【丽】【》】【等】【,】【显】【然】【,】【拟】【出】【这】【样】【的】【题】【目】【,】【写】【起】【来】【不】【易】【把】【握】【,】【只】【能】【泛】【泛】【而】【谈】【,】【要】【写】【深】【写】【透】【很】【难】【,】【更】【不】【易】【写】【出】【自】【己】【的】【真】【情】【实】【感】【。】【三】【是】【脱】【离】【文】【题】【,】【我】【行】【我】【素】【。】【有】【些】【考】【生】【将】【题】【目】【补】【充】【完】【整】【后】【却】【抛】【开】【题】【目】【,】【任】【意】【为】【文】【。】【譬】【如】【,】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【四】【川】【广】【安】【市】【以】【《】【因】【为】【有】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【,】【我】【更】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【》】【为】【题】【作】【文】【,】【有】【个】【同】【学】【拟】【题】【为】【《】【因】【为】【有】【个】【性】【,】【我】【更】【美】【丽】【》】【,】【这】【是】【一】【个】【很】【有】【新】【意】【的】【文】【题】【,】【但】【这】【个】【考】【生】【在】【文】【章】【里】【却】【大】【谈】【一】【些】【名】【人】【的】【个】【性】【,】【显】【然】【与】【文】【题】【相】【距】【甚】【远】【,】【造】【成】【失】【分】【。】【前】【车】【可】【鉴】【,】【这】【些】【问】【题】【务】【必】【引】【起】【同】【学】【们】【的】【注】【意】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【半】【命】【题】【作】【文】【向】【前】【走】【半】【步】【,】【就】【是】【全】【命】【题】【作】【文】【。】【掌】【握】【了】【审】【题】【、】【补】【题】【技】【巧】【,】【然】【后】【遵】【循】【全】【命】【题】【作】【文】【的】【基】【本】【程】【序】【,】【选】【材】【立】【意】【、】【谋】【篇】【布】【局】【、】【构】【思】【行】【文】【,】【定】【能】【写】【出】【让】【阅】【卷】【老】【师】【的】【眼】【睛】【为】【之】【一】【亮】【的】【考】【场】【佳】【作】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【巧】【学】【小】【贴】【士】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【积】【极】【自】【我】【法】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【科】【学】【研】【究】【证】【明】【,】【积】【极】【的】【自】【我】【概】【念】【是】【学】【习】【成】【功】【的】【内】【在】【力】【量】【源】【泉】【所】【谓】【自】【我】【概】【念】【,】【是】【对】【自】【己】【能】【力】【、】【人】【生】【目】【的】【、】【意】【义】【和】【价】【值】【的】【稳】【定】【看】【法】【,】【它】【包】【括】【自】【信】【心】【、】【自】【尊】【心】【、】【人】【生】【价】【值】【、】【人】【生】【意】【义】【、】【自】【立】【、】【自】【强】【和】【责】【任】【心】【等】【具】【体】【概】【念】【。】【积】【极】【的】【自】【我】【概】【念】【对】【个】【人】【的】【学】【习】【和】【工】【作】【起】【着】【正】【向】【的】【成】【功】【引】【导】【、】【调】【节】【和】【推】【动】【的】【作】【用】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 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